SS Manvi and Virat from the beginning part15,16 - Page 30

Awesome yaar... Double dhamakka lvd it... I lyk romeo juliot part it was hillarious ... Update soon... Waiting for the next part.. N tnx for the pm...

Omggg they r buddies dat too bst of bst
i mean seriously it was awwwsum...
Really a mindblowingg update
plz update asap nd thanxx for d double update nd pm

The updates were gut-busting!..The Romeo and Juliet part was damn rollicking, I wouldn't rather comment on that as all got their opinion, for people with logic would surely think about it, others who are lost in the depths of the story wouldn't mind! And I big time agree with you on that part!..their friendship has defiantly grown from their first meeting!..

Double updates wow both updates were awesome loved how
Virat and manvi both found wrong things in each others works
and no goods lol i remember when we used to that I'm school
So finally they are friends and both are going to Hawaii sounds good
Two awesome updates loved them to the core update soon
And do pm

Ps im sorry for such a short comment but I'm sick so promise to give a longer comment for the next update

VIRMAN ARE BUDDIES
AND THWY GOING FOR A TRIP. DEFINITELY THEY WILL FALL IN LOVE.
AWESOME UPDATES.
THANKS FOR THE PM AND DOUBLE UPDATES.
CONTINUE SOON.
EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT PART.

Unres!

You will not believe it...that when i checked my inbox & saw that there was an update from YOU...& that too of my favourite SS...i had the biggest shock of my life!!!!!! Yeah okay...the first shock didn't last longer that it was you who had updated because just a week ago you had updated OS trust & that too two updates in a week 😛 ...so i kinda managed to digest that fact 😉 ...but when i saw that it was the update of my favourite SS...i seriously clicked the right button of my laptop & refreshed the whole thing...so that they can show the correct one!!!! But nopes...it was seriously there & i just started jumping on my bed then & there!!!! My mom was sitting next me & after seeing me jumping like a stupid monkey, she threw weird looks upon me 😆
Hahahahha...
Do you know what??? After such a long time...i seriously had forgotten the whole story...so i read it all once again...& trust me...now also i was reading your story with same enthusiasm like i had read it back then!!!! Seriously gal you are such a great writer!!!!! Your story & both the recent updates were just amazing!!!! I just have one word...INCREDIBLE!!!
Talking about your updates...they were just great!!!! Both the updates had different kinds of emotions in them!!! First one was seriously hilarious!!!! Lol...i laughed my a** out after reading virat's pov about Shakespeare 😆 ...though i found sense in manvi's pov!!!! I know right now you must be thinking that i am mad...but to be honest i seriously don't like Romeo & Juliet love story...i find it lame!!!!
Second update was very sweet!!!! Just loved the way...virat understood manvi & her feelings...it was sweet & touchy!!!!!

Nisha, seriously gal you are just amazing & your updates make you stand apart from rest of the writers!!! Hats off gal!!!
I mean i just can't find apt words to praise you!!!! You & your updates are just AWESOME!!!! AWESOME!!! AWESOME!!!!!

Please please please update soon!!!! Right now i just want to enter your brain & know that what will be the next update!!!! Trust me, i am not kidding. So please update soon!!!

cant believe it another update😵 still didnt come out of ur previous rollercoaster update n u gave another wow thanku thanku n plzzz ab se update regularly😳 n ur april fool prank omg n ur mom believed it🤣 n now coming to the update it was as usual outstanding n their frndshp is growing stronger thats gud virat really knows manvi n notices all her points wow n manvi even come in his dreamzzz n order him someones really afraid of her😆 now lets see how "miss criber" n "mr casanova" manofy lady "hitler"😉🤣

wow double treat ,bth wer fab..cntinue soon