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Posted: 12 years ago
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Here's my first OS...so I want to know your opinion...i hope you like it.

Asad's POV

Zoya...she's special, beautiful , funny and so different from any other girls that I've met.
She makes me laugh when i'm sad she makes me wanna hold her in my arms and kiss her soft lips...

When she came in my life I've hated her but now I can't live without her, without my Zoya. Zoya is like a sunshine in my life...she's my light in the darkness.

When i look into those big brown eyes is like I can see her soul, her beautiful heart and her feelings for me.When i see her all i want is to hold her in my arms forever and protect her .
I want her to be happy that's why it kills me when I see her suffering nd I can't do anything to help her, and make her happy.

But when things like this happens all i can do is to hold her in my arms because i love her and i don't want her to leave this house because my life will be empty without her:

-I love you, Zoya. I can't live without you, you're my life, my sunshine, my all. Please don't go!

-I love you 2 Mr. Khan I love you. Please stay with me forever because my life is empty without your love.

And now they are kissing each other softly.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its nice Danny! 🤗
I have read it before! 😆 But its really nice!
Loved Asad's POV!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm glad that you like it:):*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's nice...short and sweet!!😃 You sure didn't beat about the bush and got straight to the point!😆 Do continue writing!⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: FireNIce

It's nice...short and sweet!!😃 You sure didn't beat about the bush and got straight to the point!😆 Do continue writing!⭐️



I'm glad that u like it and thank u for ur opinion .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm glad that u loved it:*:*:*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice 👍🏼
i love how it's short, sweet and to the point. 😉

keep it up dear! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: stacyellowz

very nice 👍🏼

i love how it's short, sweet and to the point. 😉

keep it up dear! 😊


Thanks for ur opinion.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its really nice dear continue soon i loved asad's pov. ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kusharberry

its really nice dear continue soon i loved asad's pov. ⭐️


Adododo thanks sis love u

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