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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi 😊
this is my first try so please do comment if you like it .If you do not like it then you can throw tomatoes&eggs on me😉😆. now i start
zoya says to asad:
mr,khan kal mai NY wapis ja rahi hoon.
asad was shocked and says in his mind:
please zoya mat jao.
AT NIGHT
asad:jo bhi ho mai zoya ko jane nahi doon ga.i love her so much.i cant live without her.
ZOYA IN HER ROOM:
mujhe pata hai ke mr.khan mujh se pyaar nahi karte is liye yahan rukne ka koi fayda nahi lekin mai mr.khan se hamesha pyarr karti rahon gi
NEXT MORNING:
ZOYA WAS LEAVING BUT ASAD ENTERS IN HER ROOM
ASAD HOLD HER AND SAID:
ap nahi ja sakti miss faroqie.i love you so much agar ap gyi to mai ap ka qatal kar doon ga
ZOYA WAS SHOCKED. FIRST SHE SMILE THEN SHE SAID:
allah miya whats wrong with you mr.khan.koi bhala is tarha pyaar ka izhar karta hai.ap ko to kuch nahi ata.ab mai ja rahi hoon.
SHE WAS ABOUT TO LEAVE THAT ASAD HOLDS HER HAND AND PUSH HER TOWARDS HIM

THEN HE SAYS:
i love you zoya.mai tum se bhut pyaar karta hoon. tumhare bina nahi reh sakta.mai tumhare liye asmaan se taarey to nahi tor sakta lekin tumhare liye apni jaan de kar asmaan mai taara zarror ban sakta hoon.please zoya mat jao aur miss faroqie confession ise kehte hain
ZOYA WAS SHOCKED .SHE HAD TEARS IN HER EYES.THEN SHE HUG ASAD TIGHTLY AND SAYS:I LOVE YOU TOO ASAD.



guys i know it is not so good but please do comments.bad comments are also welcomed😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovelyyy post ..

I Loved Asad's confession "i love you zoya.mai tum se bhut pyaar karta hoon. tumhare bina nahi reh sakta.mai tumhare liye asmaan se taarey to nahi tor sakta lekin tumhare liye apni jaan de kar asmaan mai taara zarror ban saka hoon.please zoya mat jao aur miss faroqie confession ise kehte hain"

those lines are beautiful!! .. so dreamy if only they could use these lines in the show itself it would be amazing!! this is a great post for a first try.. I love it.. thanks for a wonderful post 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x

Lovelyyy post ..


I Loved Asad's confession "i love you zoya.mai tum se bhut pyaar karta hoon. tumhare bina nahi reh sakta.mai tumhare liye asmaan se taarey to nahi tor sakta lekin tumhare liye apni jaan de kar asmaan mai taara zarror ban saka hoon.please zoya mat jao aur miss faroqie confession ise kehte hain"

those lines are beautiful!! .. so dreamy if only they could use these lines in the show itself it would be amazing!! this is a great post for a first try.. I love it.. thanks for a wonderful post 🤗

Thank you so much.i am very happy after reading your comment.thanks😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jawria123

Thank you so much.i am very happy after reading your comment.thanks😃


You're welcome 🤗.. Do keep making more posts 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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a cute post u said it all dear...😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x


You're welcome 🤗.. Do keep making more posts 😉

sure
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tashug9

a cute post u said it all dear...😉


thanks😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kya dialogue tha boss. Suprb
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome post👏.nice dialogue.
love it<3

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