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Chapter 33 – Ghar se nikalte hi

Next Day

Maan hadn't slept the whole night lost in the different emotions of her eyes. There was so much pain when he had taken her to dargah and then when she had come out "Kya tha uski aankhon mein. Jaise kuch badal sa gaya tha….dard ki jagah ek sukoon…ek naya ehsaas. Did she finally found peace in there? Ya phir, use meri feelings ka pata…

Nahi nahi Maan. But the way I went behind her. But what could have I done? She was so broken…I could have not left her alone like this…jo hona hai ho jaye…ab jab pyaar kar liya toh bas I will manage but I will not leave her alone…any pain which brings tears to her eyes has to be part of me. If I can't wipe her tears I will cry with her. If something brings a smile to her face, I will make it happen. I love you Geet….I love you"

(What was their in her eyes. It was as if something changed…as if pain had been replaced with peace…a new feeling. Did she finally found peace in there? Or did she find out about my feelings?

No Maan. But the way I went behind her. But what could have I done? She was so broken…I could have not left her alone like this…whatever has to happen let it happen…now when I have loved, I will manage but I will not leave her alone…any pain which brings tears to her eyes has to be part of me. If I can't wipe her tears I will cry with her. If something brings a smile to her face, I will make it happen. I love you Geet….I love you)

He got ready quickly and went to her PG. He wanted to make sure she was ok and goes to her college.

Parking the car in a by lane, he walked towards her house and stood by a tree. He looked at his watch and sighed knowing he was early. Just then he saw her standing in the balcony. She had just taken shower and was drying her wet hair.

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Ghar se nikalte hi kuch door chalte hi
Raste main hai uska ghar

kal subah dekha to
Baal banati woh khidki main aayi nazar

Maan looked at her in trance as she gently wrapped her long hair in fluffy white towel giving them a shake to absorb water droplets.

As if in slow motion his eyes took in the heavenly sight as she freed her tresses just to move to the other side. Even from afar he could feel the wetness of her forehead, smell the fresh aroma of her shampooed hair, see the soaked shoulder of her kurti and touch the dampness of her slender neck. His breaths hitched as her beauty knocked out his all senses. It felt like a new start…fresh and rejuvenating.

Masoom chegra, neechi nigahain
Bholi se ladki bholi aadayan

Na apsara hai na vo pari hai
Lekin yeh uski jadoogari hai

Deewana kar de woh ek rang bhar de vo
Sharma ke dekhe jidhar

Ghar se nikalte hi

Finally taking pity on his state, she hang the towel on clothing line. Pinky joined her with what looked like a cup of tea. A smile adorned his lips as he saw her talking and giggling with Pinky. Then she turned slightly showing Pinky white roses which were growing in some flower pots. A particular rose had caught her attention and she caressed it lovingly as Pinky commented something make her smile widely.

Maan was relived seeing her bubbly self but he yearned to hear her. To know what had made her so happy. But then this was his innocent Geet. Even a small flower can bring that innocent twinkle in her eye.

He kept on looking till she went back in and then waited for her, following her to her college. Whole day he was behind her till she reached hostel in the evening. Neither afternoon heat nor any office work could dissuade him as he patiently waited. Only when he saw her hugging Meera and playing with her, his heart found a little peace.

Karta hoon uske ghar ke main phere
Hansne lage hain ab dost mere

Sach kah raha hoon uski ki kasam hai
Main phir bhi khush hoon bus ek gam hai

Jisse pyaar karta hoon main jispe marta hoon
Usko nahi hai khabar
Ghar se nikalte hi

He was busy admiring her from a traffic signal near the hostel when his reverie was broken

"Sahib ji…ek phul le lo…please"

(Sir…buy one flower…please)

Maan looked at a small boy with red and white roses in his hand. Suddenly he remembered Geet admiring the white rose in the morning. He smiled and bought the entire bunch from the boy.

He looked at flowers lovingly but slowly his smile faded

"Lekin how will I give them to her. How can I go and just give her roses. What the hell Maan Singh Khurana…kya haalat hai teri. Bahut apne aap ko tees mar kha samjahta hai. You can't even give a rose to your love. But…what will she think. No…think something. I have bought these flowers for her so I should give her at least one."

(But how will I give them to her. How can I go and just give her roses. What the hell Maan Singh Khurana…look at your state. You think so highly about yourself and now see…. You can't even give a rose to your love. But…what will she think. No…think something. I have bought these flowers for her so I should give her at least one.)

Suddenly an idea came to his mind.

"Come on Maan…you are such a dumbo. Pyaar mein pagal ho gaya hai tu…It is your damn hostel…buck up."

(Come on Maan…you are such a dumbo. You have gone mad in love…. It is your damn hostel…buck up)

Saying this Maan drove the car to the hostel and walked inside confidently.

Girls and Mrs. Dixit were quite happy to see him. Due to his recent involvements, surprise was a little less but still it was a little funny sight to see him holding some 2-3 dozen roses.

"Hi everyone….I just bought these out of a little boys hand. It is so hot out there, at least this way he can get some rest."

Without another word, Maan started giving out roses to every girl around, keeping a beautiful white rose for his Mishty. His eyes were searching for her when he saw her entering the common room with Meera.

Maan walked to both of them and gave a stunning red bud to Meera "This is to the most beautiful mother."

Meera smiled "Sir…aap. Thank you. It is very pretty."

Maan glared at her angrily and she hastily corrected "Oops…Sorry bhai…"

"That is better…you are welcome and this last but not the least white flower for your Di."

He was enchanted to see a slight blush as she murmured "Thank you Maan sir"

Ladki hai jaise koi paheli
Kal jo mili mujhko uski saheli

Maine kaha usko jake yeh kahna
Achha nahi hai yoon door rahna

Kal shaam nikle vo ghar se tahelne ko
Milna jo chahe agar

Ghar se nikalte hi

His eyes shone as she lovingly caressed the rose as if it was the most precious thing in the world

"Control jhalli….but ismein meri kya galti hai. Out of all the flowers, he gave me my most favorite white rose. But red bhi toh de sakte the…sudhar ja Geet...he gave me a rose….my favorite rose…thank you thank you Babaji"

(Control jhalli….but what is my fault? Out of all the flowers, he gave me my most favorite white rose. But he could have given red one too…stop it Geet...he gave me a rose….my favorite rose…thank you thank you Babaji)

Maan looked at her as if she was a sweet dish he would eat any moment especially with her rosy cheeks. But thankfully (I wonder really?) Mrs. Dixit saved both of them from spilling out their heart in front of everyone. She distracted Maan with office talk before they made fools out of each other but not before Meera noticed the unsaid communication between her Di and Maan sir.

Maan reluctantly went with Mrs. Dixit to discuss some important things leaving behind his heart with the girl who was as restless as him. It was new realization for her yet and she was trying to come to terms with it.

"What is wrong with you Geet…mana ki now you know what you feel for him but you also know the reality na. So control your heart beats. But Maan sir kahan hai…

Kahan hai matlab….Mrs. Dixit ke saath hain…focus…focus Geet."

Meera looked at her lost Di an wondered "Yeh chal kya raha hai….the way Maan Bhai was looking at Geet Di and the way she was blushing and now all lost…kahin kuch chal toh nahi raha inke beech…nahi I don't think so nahi toh Di mujhe zaroor batati…phir…OMG…do they have feelings for each other….hmmm…ok…so yeh baat hai."

(What is going on….the way Maan Bhai was looking at Geet Di and the way she was blushing and now all lost…is something going on between them…No I don't think so otherwise Diwould have told me…then…OMG…do they have feelings for each other….hmmm…ok…so that's the matter hmmm.)

Precap – Medley

Note - Let me know if anyone can suggest a good baby shower song. Keep in mind Meera is single so no reference to father please….

Also can anyone help me in making a single youtube clip from 3-4 partial songs available on youtube….it is urgent please as I need it for the next update….

me second... yipee...

feeling so light reading this update...

"If I can't wipe her tears I will cry with her. If something brings a smile to her face, I will make it happen." ... u r making me fall for this maan more and more...

the flower part was just awesome... how i wish i could have seen something like this in the serial... just to give a flower to her, he gave everyone in the hostel a flower... cho chweet of him... moreover how u made maan give a white rose which she was admiring in the morning, shows how much he wishes to fulfill her each and every wish...

meera has got hint now... ab mazaa aayegaa...

waiting for the next abhi se shuru...

Loved it
Maan nd geet how beautifully sees each othwr
Nd love each other uncontrollable
Nd Meera having doubt on them
May be she will be cupid between them

GEET IS SO SCARED TO FEEL

wow di.. most awesome update di..

"if i can't wipe her tears i'll cry with her " - although i loved the whole update (as usual ) but these few lines touched my heart nd i am sure its going to stay in my mind for quite a long time 😊