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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: neha512

awesome promo...


just perfect for the prologue...

weach scene... and the songs... all were awesome...

and my teri deewani sequence you made me relive it😉




thankwaaa neha...

am happy u like it...


it's my favourite sequence too ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: manikka

thnks for the PM...


continue soon...




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

congrates on new story dear...lovely concept

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anjalireddyy84

Congo Chotiii🤗 for new FF

Awesome really sensitive and unique concept . Hope you live up to my expectations

Your Promo lovelyyy opt for story😳

Lovely banner and promo

Alll the best Chotiii👍🏼




thankwaaa motiii ***** hugsss keep reading to know more...


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: OsheenDGr8

WOW Mali u started a new FF...


U know I so love these type of concepts where Maaneet are married widout their will... where they fight n crib n finally fall in love hehe... n the new twist u have brought with them being from different religion, I wonder what the circumstances must be that brought them together
Anyways when are you posting the 1st part cause m so luking forward to it...
Wishing u ol the very best for this new story...


Thanksss Osheen!!! YEst his is ma new FF!!!!

Yes Maaneet are married!!! but not under her will 🤣

You ar e the only one who asked how they will get married 😳 u know what that is d base of d story 🤣

am posting part 1 now...

thakns for your wishes... i hope to mainatin the interest in this new FF with all your support! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago















Hi guys... I have a power failure tomorrow and dont think will be able to upload my Prologue but i didnt want to break my promise, so here am i giving u the update 12 hours before 5th April itself!!! Kal kare so aaj kar...😳

aaj kare so abhi...🤣


THE BARRIER MY VEIL

PROLOGUE & CHARACTER SKETCH :

She feels : My religion consists of a humble admiration of the illimitable superior spirit who reveals himself in the slight details we are able to perceive with our frail and feeble mind. She was an Orthodox on her religious values.

He feels: It is a fine thing to establish one's own religion in one's heart, not to be dependent on tradition and second-hand ideals. Life will seem to you, later, not a lesser, but a greater thing. He was an Atheist.

She feels : One cannot sacrifice his or beliefs and religion
First of all I have to understand that my religion my values are supreme,
all of us are advised to stick to our religions and go to Mosques and temples pray to to shower Happinesss and piece to all man kindss.

He Feels : Religion has convinced people that there's an invisible man ... living in the sky. Who watches everything you do every minute of every day. And the invisible man has a list of ten specific things he doesn't want you to do. And if you do any of these things, he will send you to a special place, of burning and fire and smoke and torture and anguish for you to live forever, and suffer, and suffer, and burn, and scream, until the end of time.

She Feels : Everyone ought to worship God according to his own inclinations, and not to be constrained by force.

He feels : "We have just enough religion to make us hate, but not enough to make us love one another."

"Some say that my teaching is nonsense. Others call it lofty but impractical. But to those who have looked inside themselves, this nonsense makes perfect sense. And to those who put it into practice, this loftiness has roots that go deep."
-- Lao-Tzu,

MAAN SINGH KHURANA : A 28 year old Principal, who loved students and derived pleasure in teaching , of the vast Empire of Khurana's he chose to work as Principal, One who help his students in all respects. He makes his students able to live better life. He teaches students to take decisions in all the conditions. Excellence par himself.

GEET ALI KHAN : A 25 year old Masters in Maths, who immensely loved social service, was member of many organizations, born and brought up in a upper middle class Muslim family, very reserved and valued her traditions and customs.

Will spun more characters as the story revolves around! Dnt want to over load the character sketch!

It was a perfect morning at Delhi High School, she walked past like a snail, swift and brisk, her footsteps repelled the sand in a way that noise threatened to vogue. She streamed around and took a vacant seat, multiple pair of eyes were gazing at her direction but all that appeared for their retina were her hazel eyes.😎

Ms Geet Ali Khan , the peon almost squeaked in his most monotonous voice, after a wait of an hour, which she spent reading the Holy verses which she knew by heart and glancing her FaceBook Messenger often, her heart leaped and she got up with the chirp of a butterfly, her walk like an elephant majestic and triumphatic, thoroughly the manners that only elite family would posses.👍🏼

She stormed into for the interview, as elegantly and composed one could imagine and sat infront of Him, the great MSK, he noticed she the first girl who didn't shiver at his gaze, his lips curled at a mockful smile. She extended her file, he started at those Hazel Eyes, he spoke

"What is the color of the chair you are seated"❓

She retorted back

"Same as the one you are seated on"😳

OH! That attitude bowled him and more than that the Nightingale voice made him lose ,

"So Ms.Geet Ali Khan Where have your honours from"

"Sir, I am a graduate from DU"

"Why is it you'd taken Mathematics"

"Because I love to solve problems! I have a magnetic attraction towards them"😆

"why do you think you will work here?"😉

"Because you seemed to have already decided" she leant back on her chair, he stared, she chuckled and spoke again,

"Cos, you didn't ask why I want to work here, but instead said will ' future tense🤣! Your assertive pronoun Sir!"

OMG! His slip of Grammar , and she caught him offguard, was there anyone who could overtake him, well there wasn't a single soul he met in the last 28 years of his existence, but today was a different date. Yes indeed it was.👏

PRECAP : More of Character Sketches and family Background! Nd yes Muskaan Handa coming up! Stay tuned.😉

Will give d family circle in Part 1 and after tat story will begin !

NEXTTT PARTTTT


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Edited by ainaGURTI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
start interview geet catching maan slip of tounge in grammer



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Posted: 12 years ago
patli mallliii ...update de diya

Woot woottt
Awesome yaar

Love their attitudes

Btw who's muskan handa ??
I'm confused
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome start yaar..

Maan hindu and Geet muslim and foremost geet ne tho principal Maan babu ki bandh baja di..

oops Maan she will make you life hell being the principal but i feel she will boss you with her attitude and answers
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Posted: 12 years ago
Looking forward to read this New Story for 3 anniversary 🤣

New concwept! All wishes 🤗

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