FF: THE BARRIER - MY VEIL - Imp note pg 104... 30 March...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Superb upd

loved it

keep it up

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

awesome part...loved it...plz update soon

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abinash079

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

awesome yaar
loved their attitude
continue soon

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pravallika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Superb start...what an attitude..

Looking forward to it

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rsusmita

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

different concept ,
nice start
lovd it

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prati

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

woow... start toh ek dum dhamakedar hui hai humari geet ki who can answr bck d gr8 msk & even caught his grammatical error... nw its gonna be more intrstng... wud luv to read more jaldi se... will be waiting 4 nxt part...

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love2_soma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

so maan is bowled over by geet...gr8...

awesome cs n starting...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely starting n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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kavya.sravya

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

wonderful start !! I have literally checked the date when got this pm!!! its a treat to start reading it earlier !! what a start... our geet is a dhamakedar phataka !! very curt and striaght ! maan seems no less... waiting ... already...

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#159

Grt start.

Geet may be calm and traditional but not meek.

Loved d attitude and Maan he's toh already trapped in her voice.

Its gonna be greater as the story progresses.