Kabhi Aaye Na Judayi - (OS) Viren-Jeevika

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sajanfan004

@sajanfan004

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Heyyy!

This was an amazing OS... I loved it completely...

Thanks for the PM...

If you write any other story on virika please please please do send me a PM... Would love to read the story... You write extremely well..

Do write more stories and a request...if you have written any previous story n virika then do send the link to me... I would love to read it...

Thanks...

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Deepika Asrani

@-Deeps-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Omg!

I so loved it! :D

It was so so so nice. :D

How adorable can they get? 😳

Continue soon.. Can't wait!

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Shabana0786

@Shabana0786

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Aww that was just simply Lovely & Cute!!..

Well written!!..

Loved it..

Now going to read the other Os,lol..

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Sonal

@Hello-hi-by-by

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

am totally lovin yor Os man, the previous one I read more den 10 times n now dis 1 Adorable, so romantic, b'ful selection of song, flawless writing

thx a lot, keep cont.

~sonal~

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ammyaashi

@ammyaashi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

yo yo ... cute writing neha .. asin tan tuhade fan ho gaye han .... u are all rounder g 👏... best os 👏best vm👏 best pics👏 ... jawaab ni

i am late ... had exams

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preetivr

@preetivr

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

cute one

its always nice to read ur work

do keep writing esp on virika

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NiraliVirika

@NiraliVirika

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

That was beyond amazing!

You are so talented...

You should write a lot more..

Thanks for the PM.

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yushna

@yushna

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

neha sweety what can i say ? Let me think.. Okay okay i start wid da charming virika understanding was to gud.. Dre romance was unexpressable.. The v v bros scene was nice... Nd jeeman were as usuall adorable.. The update was worth readng thankyew for pm nd mujy aur b links chai ok:)

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Jujuk

@Jujuk

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

*UnRes*

Yet another beautiful story. You are such an amazing writer. I particularly loved this OS. The theme of unconditional love between VJ was so well highlighted. At present, I am at a loss of words of describe this lovely piece of work. The dialogues sound so real and are very much close to original show. I even loved Manvi's bit in the story. I'm so mighty glad I read this. Please do write something of this sort again, if you are free and have time. It's a request from me.😊

Edited by Kashy15 - 12 years ago

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