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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi everyone. I'm new to this forum and i've read wonderful FFs and decided to write one myself after the abrupt end of IPKKND .Just to make myself feel better about everything..Hope you all like it..


Character Sketch

The Raizada's

Aranya Raizada- Arnav's Mom.Arrogant and proud .Loves her kids immensely ,but an over protective mother.Decides everything in the Raizada household.Her husband passed away when her two little angels were very young.Such a big responsibility at a very young age made her a cold hearted and a strong willed person.

Anjali Sharma/Raizada- Arnav's adorable older sister.Her day starts and ends with the two most important men in her life . Her little brother and her loving husband.

Arnav Singh Raizada- Spoilt and pampered by all the women in his life. Has a very clean opinion about love and girls . Just passing clouds. He respects his family and idolizes his mother .

Mama ,Mami and Akash live with them.Mama being Aranya's brother knows of the hardships she had to endure at a tender age.

The Guptas

Sashi Gupta- A well known business man in Delhi.His family and his work are his priorities in that order.Blessed with two loving daughters ,Mr.Gupta couldn't ask for a better life.

Garima Gupta- Sashi Gupta's wife and a humble person at heart. Takes care of her family and raised her daughters to be cultured and respectful of elders .

Khushi Kumari Gupta- The youngest daughter in the Gupta household,is pampered by all .She's a chirpy and happy person but knows when to put people in their place . Loves her older sister the most .She's a head strong and a proud person belonging to such a reputed family in Delhi.

Payal Gupta- Khushi's older sister. More like her second mother. She's completely different ,compared to her sister.Soft spoken and composed at all times.


Prologue

It was a gloomy day,the rain made the streets of Lucknow slushy and kept everyone in their houses. A lonely figure walked to a small house and knocked ..

"Dinesh! You? Here? Its been so long ..What brought you here in this weather?"

The man standing outside the door wept in his long lost friends hands.
"This is the only place i could turn to,I let my family down.I tried to give them everything ,but failed .I can't face them anymore.Wanted to see you one last time to tell you ,to keep our dream alive."

"Come in.Lets talk about it. I'm sure we can come with a solution. Let me get you towel ,make yourself at home."

But by the time he returned the doorway was empty .. "Dinesh! DINESH" he called out to the now deserted road.

But Dinesh was nowhere to be found.

Next morning ,the news of his death reached the news and a single tear rolled down his friend's eye. He made up his mind that he will keep his friends last wish alive.Come what may..


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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow nice prolouge continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter One

Arnav Singh Raizada was in his room getting all his things ready to leave for work in his black suit and a crisp white shirt.It was like any other day for Arnav,Get up go to office and come back home to t his family.He didn't interact with people if he didn't have to . Leaving his room he saw his mother and sister sitting in the living area waiting for someone it seemed. They turned to look at him and he understood that they wanted to talk to him .
Aranya : Arnav,i need to talk to you about something. Anjali and I have come to a decision. When damadji returns from his business trip,all of us are going to see a girl for you .

Arnav : Mom! girl for me ? You know i dont believe in these silly traditions.

Anjali : Yes Chote, but how long will you stay like this. Let the past go Chote.

Arnav closed his eyes,composed himself and replied in a calm voice..

"Fine Di,whatever you guys decide."
Anjali squealed in delight and rushed to give her chote a hug . Arnav looked at his mother who gave him a small smile.

While driving to the office,Arnav was lost in his thoughts. Mom takes the longest time to even select a shirt for me. This bride thing will take forever. He smiled to himself ,feeling better about the situation. Now all he had to do was ,talk to Lavanya and bring her home to meet his mother.Baby steps.

Gupta Household

"Khushi!!!!"
A young her woke with a start as she heard her sister calling her .She looked around at the clock and realized that it was her first day at work. She promised her father that she would help out more in the family business along with Payal.

She got dressed quickly and went down for breakfast when she overheard her mothers conversation on the phone..

"Ji,I will let her know about the meeting tomorrow.I told Sashi and he couldnt be more happy for his daughter. Ji,Kal milenge.Namaste"

Khushi looked at Payal and questioned her as to what is going on . Payyal just shrugged and resumed eating.

Sashi : Payal,Khushi ..We have to talk to you.

"Yes dad? " was the reply in unison.

Garima : Theres an alliance for Payal.And the guys family is coming over tomorrow to meet you,Payal.

Payal was shocked. She looked at Khushi pleading with her eyes to help her out of this situation.

Khushi : But mom,Jiji isstill so young.I don't want her to leave us so soon."

Garima : Yes Khushi but she has to leave one day and so do you. And the guys family is very reputed and respectable in the society.Why let this go. We will see what happens tomorrow"

Payal was dejected .The siblings could never say no to their parents.

Gloomily,they waled out with their father and waited for the next day ...

I do want some feedback about this story. Please do like and comment . 😊



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter Two


Khushi was sitting in her sister's room listening to her complain to the person on the other end of the .
"I told you,this was bound to happen..Why couldn't you just tell your parents ?"
Payal listened to the same explanation that she heard numerous times ..

"Fine,don't do anything.Sit on your ass while i get married to someone else."
And she hung up and turned to her baby sister with tears rolling down her cheek.

"Jiji,tum ro math.We'll talk to that guy tomorrow,I'm sure he'll understand"

"I can't live without him Khushi and i can't say no to mamma and papa" Payal finished helplessly.

Khushi sat silently,thinking about the next day . She couldn't see her sister like this and she was sure that her parents wouldn't understand now. Not after they called the guy's family home.Reputation was very important to her father . She looked up at her sister and smiled ..

"I know what we can do Jiji"


Raizada Mansion

"next,its your turn Akash" Anjali teasingly smiled at her brother.

"Di,you know I still have to talk to Ma and Bauji about her." He said dejectedly.

"So? Whats the problem? Tell them,I'm sure they would approve"

"Yes.But now its too late ..Her family is making her meet some guy tomorrow "

Anjali was surprised to hear that.She just looked at him helplessly.
"I'm Sorry Akash "

"What's happening ? Why's Di apologising?" Anjali and Akash turned around to find their brother standing there with his laptop bag in one hand and his coat on the other arm.

"Kuch nahi chote,how was your day? Excited to meet the girl tomorrow?"

Arnav looked at his sister's ecstatic face and rolled his eyes.

"You know how i feel about this Di"

"But Bhai,what about Lava.."
"Shut up Akash" Arnav warned him

"What is Lava Chote? Akash? "

"Nothing Di,i'll go freshen up ,Akash come with me ..There's a file you need to look at"
Akash visibly gulped and followed his brother waiting for the profanity .


A lonely man in his study with a glass of scotch in his hand,opened a drawer and looked at a photo his dear friend.
"It's finally happening Dinesh"

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