Shadi philosophy --hinglish poem

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Amitians,

I've tried to pen my thoughts into a small poem. Do pour in your views.


Shadi do dilon ka mel hain, baki sab rab ka khel hain,

Dil ko bhaye tho kamaal hain, varna to life ek dam damaal hain,

Pyar miljaye tho do patari ki rail hain, varna to voh char deewaron ka jail hain,

Kushi se karo tho life ekdum set hain, varna to zindagi bhar ka fate hain,

Qismat se mitla piya ka sath hain, varna to vahi adhure jazbaat hain,

Shadi do dilon ka mel hain, baki sab rab ka khel hain!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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very well written dear...u'r quite a pro at shayari huh...
good job👍🏼
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So true...and excellently u have put it through words...too good yaar 👏 just loved it... 😳 thanx for the poem...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks Anu!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sukirti

Nice.. keep it up !!



Thank you so much Sukriti 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: hinz


very well written dear...u'r quite a pro at shayari huh...
good job👍🏼



Thanks hinz. Just trying to take baby steps towards writing poems. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mithalee

So true...and excellently u have put it through words...too good yaar 👏 just loved it... 😳 thanx for the poem...



Thanks Mithalee 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was a mirror showing real reflection of "Shaadi"

Awesomely penned emeraldye

Lucky
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nicely written...😊

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Originally posted by: Lucky_2012

That was a mirror showing real reflection of "Shaadi"

Awesomely penned emeraldye

Lucky



Thanks a lot dear!😊

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