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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gopi06

amazing updt fiza
loved mayank & his words "he is prepared to guard her even from himself"...hope he stands on his words because nupur needed it n future ..cont soon
thanks for the pm



thnks alot dear
hope so.. n he will stand for tht...he has seen all... so now its high time for him to make things normal...
ur rite tht darkness is hard to be left behing
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yaadien.kiran

lovely update

awesome dear
thanx for the pm
cont soon



thnks alot deaar



thnku



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Posted: 12 years ago
hi Guys

remember me...😆
ya i know im hell late.. n im really sorry for tht... im back hopfully fully..

rplyed to u all
thnks for ur kind words


Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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The hand on your head… the glitters in beloved eyes.. the shoulder for supprt and the hug to make u strong all can make u believe life can b a fairytale

Chapter: 22

She was sleeping … a deep beautiful slumber.. rich with so amazing dreams… of her .. there kids.. she frown in her dream.. ya kids she hasn't decided how many yet so their kids.. she chukled in her sleep.. and her dog came to her… and than she felt sum hands crawling on her waist and she was swept off her feets..and twirl around… she was giggling like stupid… and if just someone see her.. will be sure either she has gone nuts or in love.. the way she is actually living a dream in her sleep…

The sight for mayank was not less than heaven… he came here to tell her tht gunjan will be cuming so tht she doesn't feel awkward knowing pretty well how much she become so conscious around people… knowing they will sumwhere bring the old topic again.. or will see her as sumone like alien… but his face broke in huge smile.. he folded his hand and lean to the entrance of her bedroom… she was looking so beautiful .. Laughing giggle and enjoying her dream… and he wants tht this time Almighty help him to fullfil her evry dream and wish.. he wants to see her such evry min evry morning evry nite… hay wait a min is she blushing … he chuckled and shocked his head… she is blushing so furiously in her dream aha… so wht would be Mrs Sharma is dreaming about.. he moved forward and climb up the bed slowly.. and hold her from her back…

Nupur: mayank pls.. stop it…

He looked at her and suppressed her laughter… wht he has done…

Mayank: Nupur… wht I m doing

Nupur: wht do u mean wht ur doing.. im feeling dizzy stop twirling me

Mayank: god… ur such an unromantic person.. ur blushing because of this…

Nupur: move away ur getting shamless day by day

Mayank: lay.. I have even not start doing anything… he kissed her neck.. nupur.. ur dreaming..nupur… nNUPUR…

Nupur: Wht.. she woke up with a jerk.. and looked around.. and than looked herself.. and than him lying in his formals.. supporting his hand with his elbow…

Mayank: wht it is … wht u were dreaming sweetheart… he said with a smirk getting up and moving near her…

Nupur: nothing.. n wht are u doing here..

Mayank: I just came in to know.. wht my wife is expecting me to behave as or rather dreaming me as… I need to know na.. need to act like tht… so wht I was doing… while I was twirling u .. ask very seriously

She pooped her eyes and tried to get away when he hold her hand … jerk her back making her land on his lap…

Mayank: so.. common na tell me…

Nupur: mayankk.. pls nah…

Mayank: he kissed her forehead and make her hairs back.. I just want to see u like this always…. with this expression on ur face…

Nupur: u will … when ur with me… she said with a smile encircling her arms around her neck… returning the beautiful expression tht she was seeing in his eyes… the expression tht warm her nerves so much…

Mayank: really.he pulled her close

Nupur: yup…. wasy I was acting stupid.. she pouted..

Mayank: no u seems to be happy… I never thought I will see I like this.. happy n giggling from ur heart…

Nupur: u know im feeling like I having nothing inside.. im feeling free… alive… renewed… sumthing like..

Mayank: happy.. he smiled at her child like expressions of defining…. Ur feeling happy

Nupur: no ecastic.. its sumthing more than happy…

He chuckled n she frown

Nupur: wht are u doing here in the morning..

Mayank: I was going to office thought to drop a morning wish but than I had a sight to watch.. plus gunjan will be cuming to ur place…

Nupur: why.. she got alerted .. as he expected…

Mayank: she wants to meet u I hope u donot mind…

Nupur: ofcource I don't….

Mayank: she will be cuming soon… so I thought to inform u n wake u up… knowing nobdy on this earth can disturb ur sleep

Nupur: very funny… oky.. so I get ready .. and u go to ur work.. bye..

She got up and moved away ….

Mayank: come out quickly I had brought breakfast with me will have together…

He shouted from outside…

Soon after quickly finishing his break fast he was all set to leave for his office..

Nupur: bye…

Mayank: u still didn't told me why u were blushing….

Nupur: mayank go… she pushed him out of the door..

Mayank: not like tht… is this way to say good bye..

Nupur: fine… she move forward n tip toe n pecked his forehead bye now

Mayank: wht was tht…

Nupur: this is actually called as good bye kiss…

Mayank: really u compensate for moving me away from u for all long 10 -9 hrs with those boring stupid money makers… with this so called unqualified kiss… huh

Nupur: Mr Sharma stop behaving as teenage love sick newly wedded husband leave now I need to get ready…

Mayank: han tu I didn't stoped u.. did I ur delaying things… come on wish me goodbye…

Nupur: mayankkk…

Mayank: ya I am here all urs… come on get on me…

Nupur: ur cute

She laughed and shocked her head… and biting her lips she moved to kissed her… wch he prolonged to have a closed hold of her….

Mayank: tht was better … ur improving.. he whispered and giving a quick pecked leave.. n she closed the door..

The bell rung and she was like no gunjan tht so early… she was abit uneasy

She moved to opend the door n was like wht the

Nupur: now wht..

Mayank: wht did u called me..

Nupur: wht.. I did

Mayank: im not cute oky… and u need to dress up mind if I help u in selection n …

Nupur: no thnku so much for ur kindness… I will do it on my on. N btw if u haven't look at me im all ready . go now… us told me this is important

Mayank: it isn't I can delay and I can stay here…

Nupur: mayank go away now .. she literally pushed him to the elevator and he chukled

Mayank: im going im going… bye.. he pecked her and move in the elevator…

Donot miss me to much

Nupur: sigh… tht u need to take care of…she winked and move in her house….

The bell again rung and she was mayank has lost it…

She moved towards the door and opened it

Nupur: mayank wht is…. Her words were left in between… as she saw a man standing at her door step.. she didn't recognized him… yes

Samrat scrutinize her from top to bottom.. she was actually wearing so many cloths.. he image of her was like.. short dress , low neck… seductive way of opening the door or atleast seeing an unknown face she will like to have sum fun for a change… her profession has given her change evry day n night… she should get bored with mayank.. now…

Nupur was a little nervous the way he was looking at her…. Is he sum old client of her.. no he doesn't seems to…

Nupur: what to u want.. I m sorry do I know u…

Her apprehensive ness and abit nervousness and above all her innocent eyes were making samrat not to be harsh..

Samrat: no u donot.. but I do… I am samrat…

She was surprised.. and smiled more widely…

Nupur: oh.. she moved her hand and touched his face affectionately…. So ur mayank's kido… common in… please cum in..

Samrat frown a bit. The moment she touch his face he knew oh man she is the one she is… yet the way she did it. Was nothing seductive it was affectionate … he shurged his thought and moved in…

He was as handsome young boy… very innocent and so mannered… just like her brother.. maybe today adi must be like this…. He just reminded her of him.. the way she was looking at her was not making things good for smarat he was getting more n more confusesed…

Nupur: pls have seat…. U will have sumthing

Samrat: no pls… I just… I just came here to talk to u….

She sat down beside him.. very neatly… just like sum normal women…maintaining a good distance frm him … she has no seductions no s**ty things in her ways…. She was behaving to normal…

Nupur: ya sure pls…

She was abit scared.. he isn't here to ask his brother back from her.. she cant do tht.. psl donot tht..

Samrat: wht to u want from bro…

Nupur: she smiled.. she can see the rage and the fear for his brother… nothing.. I want nothing from him..

Samrat: pls donot give me tht… he said sarcastically…I know u girls…

Nupur: no u donot… mayank told me his kid brother is pretty innocent for all tht..

She was trying to make things light between them… making smarat more confused

Samrat: its not a joke… its my brother's life… and ur playing with him just for wht… money or power

Nupur: for nothing… I know its hard to believe and I know wht u must be feeling…. But I can just say tht.. I donot have anything to make u believe on this… I want nothing neither power nor money…. I even donot want mayank I just wish to have him….

Samrat: these kinda talks.. hmm so u waoo him like tht.. u know he was vulnerable u know he was weak and u by ur words make him urs…. Brilliant.. now wht u will take to get away from him…

Nupur: plss.. donot make me feel like tht…. I know its hard to believe… but I really love him samrat.. I really do… she said almost pleading and if u think im with him for money or anything… I m ready to sign anything anything u want be to… saying I m not gonna claim a penny of his ….

Samrat: oh pls… thn u must have planned to get pregnant or ur and thts why blackmailing him to get married han..

Nupur: samrat… pls… I do mind u saying things about me too… but its oky …. Donot u know ur own borther.. his morals are to high…. To big… he didn't touched me tht way… n u knw he hasn't..

She sigh and collect herself…

I know ur sacred for ur bother and trust me more than u I am too… I donot want him to get in this mess… and I tired as much as I can I tried..but I just cant stop myself falling for him.. and even tht doesn't matter.. but now when he is here and he is ready to take it all… I want to give life another chance….

If he wants and if he still now will move away from marriage and to .. to sum esxted from this relationship to.. I will never have anything negative for him… not matter how much it will hurt but I wont… but trust me I really do love him…. And if I once make ur brother suffer u can give me any punishment u want….

She had a slight layer of tears in her eyes… just saying tht she will let him go was so difficult and if this happen… nothing can be bigger punishment than this.. she moved her eyes away trying mot to let him see her tears cause she was sure he will believe she is faking..

Smarat was hell confused now…. He is not good at judging people he knew tht… and this woman was making thing more worse for him… she has all those things.. affection, clear words and sumwhere the aura around her doesn't make her wht she is .. but than he knew all of them are great actresses aren't they…

Is she faking or she isn't not… he just cant get it… his thoughts were break with the sound of bell…

Nupur looked at samrat… knowing gunjan will be there…

Nupur: it must be gunjan

Samrat: WHT… dam she will b angry on him he knows tht..

Nupur: ya mayank said she is cuming to meet me…

She went towards door composing herself.. and plastering a smile on her face.. and opend it… samrat was alittle bit more confused now seeing her like this… errr… she was given him all the trouble …

She opend the door finding gunjan right there..

Gunjan: hello bride how are u…

She chukled…

Nupur: hi gunjan… im good… come in…

Gunjan: well u donot know how much excited im … this wedding will be the event of the year.. I will make this huge… u know wht ur almost husband has challenged me tht I can't beat u on ur wedding day… cause u will the most beautiful one…she was saying this all in a go.. and thtn she stoped and raised her eyes brows… oh mine oh mine n ur blushing on this… god… ur too much ….

Wait a min… MR samrat Sharma here… she narrowed her eyes knowing pretty well why he is here and the dumbfold expression was making her sure of it…

Nupur: ya nice coincidence nah… actually he came to meet mayank but he already left for office so I stoped him… knowing u will be cuming soon… common…

Gunjan: haha ahaha… nupur darling.. ur bad liar mark it… i know him way to much …..

Nupur: acha just realax.. sit I will bring sum coffee for both of u….

Gunjan: thnks…. So u came here to spoil everything …. Right

She said tapping her branded glittering toed stilellotos…

Samrat: I came here to make the mess right….

She moved forward and cross her arms and stod infornt of him who was already standing there… in her respect…

Gunjan: smarat.. cant u see a person beyond the tag…. Wht has happen to u dear.. just for once for once forget the tag on her and see her…. She is wht u always want to be with bro… she has all that… she really loves him…

Samrat: I cant trust on this gunjan… we believed tht too with esha

Gunjan: donot add me in it… even tht time I told u and anty tht I donot like her … there is sumthing abt her tht I hate.. she was making bhai dance on her finger tips.. and whenever he was alittle bit questioning it u and anty more u always made him ignore this all saying all girls are like this….

Do u know anything abt her… u haven't seen her with bhai…. U know bhai offered her a huge money for staying with him for a month… and when she got to know tht he is her client.. she returned it back.. n didn't told bhai abt tht…

Don't say tht it's a con to…u urslef know u had so many ways to get bhai … and money ..many easy way… but she didn't… smrat for once… let it go the way destiny is telling it… even if u wont agree bhai is gonna marry her… so give it a chance… alteast u wont regret later tht u were not present at the most happiest occasion of ur brother's life…

Common baby u can do this for ur brother cant u

Samrat: I donot know wht I can do.. but this is surely not wht I want to do

Gunjan: but this is wht he wants to do… he has always been the greatest support u can ask for … cant u once think abt him… and if anything happened we are there nah..

Ahem….

She came in with a smile…

Gunjan: these Sharma I tell u are to stubborn to handle… gosh

She chuckled

Nupur: I so agree… she passed a mug to samrat wch he reluctantly yet took and she smile… it will take sumtime but he will b fine she will make sure tht… he loves his brother to much and when he knew she does so to…. He will loses this barrier

The way nupur was passing glances to him gunjan was abit stunt… she was really looking at him with so affection

Gunjan: whts tht…

Nupur was a bit starlet… she didn't took it wrong way..

Nupur: no its nothing I was just.. actually samrat …

Gunjan: remind u of sumone…

She said with a smile and nupur breath in relief…

Nupur: ya…

Gunjan: u had a brother ….

Nupur: hmm… I did HAD one…

The slight pause at had made both samrat and gunjan look at her… she had s light smile and was lost in sumthing.. gunjan looked at samrat and got abit relifed seeing him a little softer this time…

Gunjan: so tell me… where u want the wedding to be…

Samrat: I think I should leave now..

Gunjan: see he is escaping evrytime wedding talks starts and peepiti paati pooh… he disappear….

Nupur chukled..

Samrat: gunjan why u evrytime need to say

Gunjan: really lets go to city hall n get married now…

Samrat: u know I donot want to get married now…

Nupur: why… I thought u must be dying to

Gunjan: alas all sharmas are not the same… the romantic one is the one u have… and I have this always running away

Nupur: thts not true… he isn't running away he must just want to have sumtime…

Gunjan: ur protecting him….

Samrat: stop this now… I have to leave.. bye…

Nupur: samrat… she moved towards him and whispered slowly… just give me chance.. pls..

He didn't said anything but even didn't said no…

Nupur: ur not going to escort him to the door..

Gunjan: bye smarat…

Samrat: now see whos the unromantic one….

In his flow of talking he didn't realize tht he himself dragged nupur in there conversation… and thn he stoped and biting by left hurriedly..she smiled at him is really cute n kido

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i can understand Samrat...
and Gunjan is so nice as always...

btw...even i need to know...every details of what was nupur dreaming...lol...
continue soon partner...
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Posted: 12 years ago
osum update...
everyone is right at their places...
luved this..
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing updt fiza
loved sanu interaction ,samrat's concern for his brother & nupur's brotherly affection towards samrat..hope sanu bond grows strong in future ...loved nupur's dream
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love this story :-)
How many chapters are left in this ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
:D :D

awesome update fiza-ji!! loved it!! waise what was nupur dreaming about?? 😉😆

🤗
~jiya~
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update,Apu!!

So, Samrat came to talk to Nupur and to find out what is her true intension.. Well, ya, I can understand that it's not easy for him to accept Nupur because of her past life and profession.. He loves his brother and he doesn't want him to take a step that he would regret in future..

Aww..Gunjan is such a sweetheart.. She talked to Samrat and tried to make him see sense..

Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
Looovvveee you*hugs*, muuuah!!

P.S- Btw, I also wanna what Nupur was dreaming...
Edited by Humayra - 12 years ago

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