Crisp Bytes SC - 2nd April 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Na na karte pyaar tumhi se kar baithe
Karna tha inkaar, magar ikraar tumhi se kar baithe


What happened today?

To him?

he had always felt that attraction

even before he had seen her,

her slim waist encircled by the kamarband

was his first sight,

and since then he had been fascinated

He had come here, baited by her, guilty at his own act

But he had not expected to fall for her, so fast and so hard





To her?

She had lost her heart to him

and then had it broken by him, the very next moment

With anger as her shield, she lashed out at him, ridiculed him, punished him,

attempting to salvage her pride

Refusing to accept that it was much more than her pride and ego

When he needed help, like a true ardhangini, she stood by him

Once again telling herself that she was only doing what was right


Today

He had certainly not expected to succumb to this attraction

and cross the line

Once again he was consumed with guilt

She had not expected herself to be so affected by this

She knew now that her feelings for him were strong and deep

She felt she had betrayed the trust of her family

She was consumed with guilt


The layers of misunderstanding had slowly started peeling off

They were getting ready to open their hearts to each other

will today once again stand between them like an unbridgable abyss?




A beautiful episode - their relationship takes another leap - for better or for worse?

Jaane na!!



I have issues with the wicked witches of the east and the whole haveli girvi logic

Today I have issues with Guniyal not telling Vidya chatur about the broken engagement - why is she hiding it from him? Illogical

But this we shall passover, because Chanku were excellent...

and the passion of that moment - sizzling!!

Njoy!!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
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i really loved ur post today 😊...

infact wanted to write something like this but instead ended up making a funny post do read it lol

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/79676636

Anyways coming to ur post u summerised it all in one song

Na na karte pyaar tumhi se kar baithe
Karna tha inkaar, magar ikraar tumhi se kar baithe

and here I add one more to complete the story till today...

..ek mai aur ek tu dono miley is tarah aur jo bhi hua...ye to hona hi tha 😳

Edited by shana0127 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kamar main haath

wah kya baat

Dekh ke mauka

Maara chauka

Sanyasi ji se aisi umeed nahi thi!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shramya

Kamar main haath

wah kya baat

Dekh ke mauka

Maara chauka

Sanyasi ji se aisi umeed nahi thi!



Come on, he is no sanyasi

aaj dil machal gaya, aur haath phisal gaya
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Why Kumud's mom is not telling VC about the rejection? This is so weird. Logically she should have told him at the moment she came to know about the letter. Whole village is going to gossip about kumud when the things go wrong. She alone will have to face badnami. Normally any mom would take action on this.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anu_11

Why Kumud's mom is not telling VC about the rejection? This is so weird. Logically she should have told him at the moment she came to know about the letter. Whole village is going to gossip about kumud when the things go wrong. She alone will have to face badnami. Normally any mom would take action on this.



i guess because they are worried for VC's health and guniyal doesn't know how to start the topic. hopefully it doesn't come to VC knowing about broken engagement because i really want saras to say he wants to marry her. but i guess that might happen so soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anu_11

Why Kumud's mom is not telling VC about the rejection? This is so weird. Logically she should have told him at the moment she came to know about the letter. Whole village is going to gossip about kumud when the things go wrong. She alone will have to face badnami. Normally any mom would take action on this.



Not only that, she knows that her husband is building false hopes yet she keeps the truth from him. Silly acc to me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Diamond_14



i guess because they are worried for VC's health and guniyal doesn't know how to start the topic. hopefully it doesn't come to VC knowing about broken engagement because i really want saras to say he wants to marry her. but i guess that might happen so soon.



To hide a truth - -wrong. Anyway it is unfair to hide this from a father. I did not find it cobvincing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry for being late ...see on pg 1 i updated my post 😊
Edited by shana0127 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shana0127

sorry for being late ...see on pg 1 i updated my post 😊




Loved your post, hilarious!!

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