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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww.. thz sooo sweeett.. plzz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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haha nice, its a good change from the other ff's. cant wait for the next part!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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haha..nice update!! continue soon!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 GREAT FANFICTION 👏
PLZZZZ CONT SOON
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very good !!!!!!!!!!! update soon!!!!!!!!!! will be waiting!!!!!!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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In u.s.
Its 5 in the evening and mukti is still not up
Then finally she comes downstairs at 6!
Gauri- where were you last night
Mukti- ohh mom I went to a party
Gauri- did you ask?
Mukti- yeah I asked dad
Jai was drinking water and it comes out of his mouth after he hears his name
Gauri- jai is that true?
Jai- umm…umm…
Gauri- tell me yes or no?
Jai- yes
Gauri – ok so your punishment is that you can't sleep in our room today
Jai- but sweetheart
Gauri- no ifs no buts
Gauri leaves to go to her room
Angad- marwa diya Na dad ko
Jai and mukti hug
Mukti- thanks dad
Jai- no problem
Angad- what was that all about?
Mukti- buddhu we were acting look I forgot to ask mom or dad so I made up a plan and told dad to say yes and now he can sleep on my floor there are tons of rooms there
Angad- man mukti you r a number 1 actress I actually believed it
Mukti- because you r stupid!
Angad- dad
Jai- I wont interfere it's a brother sister fight no dads allowed
Jai leaves
Angad- mukti why does dad love u more than anyone of us
Mukti- the same reason mom luvs me more than you all
Angad- I am jealous
Mukti- don't be after all I luv you more than kavya
Someone- really
Mukti and Angad turn around to find Kavya standing there Angad and mukti run to him he hugs Angad then when finally he is about to hug mukti he stops
Kavya-I thought u don't luv me
Mukti- Kavya come on man I was trying to make Angad feel good after all u know I luv u a lot
Kavya- that's why u did not tell me that you r going to India
Mukti- because then u would be really mad because we only get to spend 1 week together
Kavya - k ok I forgive u
Kavya and mukti hug
Gauri- mukti omg kavya
Kavya- hi mom
He hugs her
Gauri- when did u come?
Kavya- just 10 minutes ago
Gauri- ok
Mukti- bye mom bye bro
And mukti quickly runs to door hoping gauri won't ask where she is going
Gauri- wait a minute
Mukti- darn
Gauri- where are you going?
Mukti- mom I am going to go meet anjali
Gauri- ok go but don't be late
Mukti- yes mom
Outside mukti calls anjali
Mukti- hi anju
Anjali- hey hotie
Mukti- and where did u get that name again?
Anju- from college
Mukti- ok anyways meet me at the disc in half an hour
Anju- k be there
Mukti- bye
Anju- bye
Mukti- which car should I take?
Someone- this one and puts the keys in front of her
Mukti- kavya
Kavya- yes this is your gift
Mukti- which car is it?
Kavya- see it yourself
He takes her in front of a car which is covered he removes the cover
Mukti- thanks it's a sports car
Kavya- yep but your real surprise is in India
Mukti- what is it?
Angad- I think u r deaf he said surprise
Mukti- I know god Angad irritating
Kavya- ok now stop your fight and mukti aren't you getting late
Mukti- yes tell mom I will be late after 3 hours tell her that anjali got sick so I am going to stay with her all night
Kavya- ok
Mukti- you r the best and Angad keep your mouth shut
Angad- like I would tell man mukti whenever kavya comes u r so mean to me
Mukti- I know I am like that bye bro
Kavya Angad- bye
Kavya- so Angad how is life any new girlfriends?
Angad- no I just broke up with her on Tuesday
Kavya- when is mukti leaving
Angad- she is leaving this Sunday
Kavya- but I thought her college starts the week after next
Angad- it does but she wants a week to shop there and get used to that place
Kavya- I should have guessed
Angad- wait till u see her closet u would go like she never needs to go shopping in her life
Kavya- why?
Angad- do u know our guest room
Kavya- the room which is the fourth largest room in our palace
Angad- yes it's no more a room mukti got it renovated and now it's her closet
Kavya- u have to be kidding
Angad- I am serious
Kavya- yeah but still Angad she is after all the only daughter of a famous hotel owner and a famous fashion designer
Angad- yeah yeah I know but still I am jealous
Kavya- please she is a girl and that's her habit to shop
Angad- no I only can spend 200,000 dollars a month and she can spend that much money in a week only for clothes
Kavya- um do we have tight security
Angad- yes why?
Kavya- no maybe somebody might to steel her clothes
Angad- don't worry we do
Kavya- one more thing we have to make mukti understand that not to talk to strangers in India or else man they might kidnap her and will blackmail us for money
Angad- don't worry about that I am going to stay with her in India
Kavya- but aren't u going a month after her
Angad- yeah I am but I don't think she is that stupid
Kavya- same here but anyways why were we talking about this
Angad- can u ask mom if I can have a money raise
Kavya- do I look like I was born yesterday?
Angad- no but why
Kavya- I don't want to be slapped by mom r u crazy
Angad- well who will talk to mom then he makes a puppy dog face
Kavya- ok k but next time don't emotionally blackmail me I won't fall for it
Angad- under his breath u just did
Kavya- what did u say?
Angad- nothing
Kavya- lets go
Outside the disc
Mukti- where the hell is anju man
Anju- I am here
Mukti- thank god
Mukti- ok a big favor needed
Anju- what
Mukti- can I stay over art your house tonight
Anju- no probs
Mukti- thanks I owe u big time
Anju- I'll send u my shopping list
Mukti- u r 2 much
Anju- I know
Mukti- lets go inside
Mukti and anju enjoyed and came back home at midnight and went to sleep
Mukti woke up early at 10 because she knew if she was late her mom would be suspicious

hope u liked it! 😛
please leave comments. 😳
Edited by prem-mukti#1 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank you!😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: indianhomey1992

awsome FF hon!👏

cont. soon!😉

thanks!😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: CrystalBue345

WOW! Very nice! Plz go on soon! 👏 👏

thanks!😛

will continue tonight!😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Robin_M

haha nice, its a good change from the other ff's. cant wait for the next part!

thank you so much!😳

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