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Posted: 12 years ago
Ab wait kalunga jab tak akhio k jharokhe main Maan babu k sapne naa jaaye ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Zaida intezaar nahi hota na bacho se ;) aap smjhte hai na :p yaa yaa aap bahut smjhdar hai smjhna chahie na aapko :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
Baby feeling bit neeni neeni :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally read it, hadn't even you'd updated till now 😛
was a superb update, I was thinking it will be showdown between the two.
I did wanna see her threatening him and then Maan convincing her anyways loved it.
Aryan jealous of future damaad dancing with his would be wife.
Breakfast date was cute.
Hmm now trailer was given, wonder how the actual date would be like.
I'm thinking candles, dinner, dance
I wanna see Geet in saree, Maan cooked her favorite indian dishes so she should give him a treat 😆
Would love to see what you come up with.
Bechara shaadi ke baad kya hoga? Is he still going to cook for her, or give personal cooking lessons to her 😉
You know I think I'll be implementing the personal cooking lessons in one of my FFs now, idea jus came 😉
Waiting for the next update already


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Posted: 12 years ago
Baby neeni mode se uthu uthu ho gaya abhi b update ni aaya? Challo chaddo baby baat hi ni kalega aapse...katti :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanku guys... i owe u a lot..😆

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Part 16/Last Part
Finally I was getting dressed for our date. He kept our destination secret. But I was damn sure he was thinking something big b/c last day he dint even talked to me properly. Just sent a msg "Be ready at 9". So I decided to give myself a casual look and opted for one sided off shoulder white top and blue jeans. Its neckline adorned with white stones and pearls.
Now the time is 9.30 and janaab has not even called yet. I decided to call him, but the whole time it went to voice mail. Now wat has happened to maan? he was never like this. I started to feel panic and all the negative thots came in my mind. I cursed the moment of not taking his home no. I locked the door and placed the key in my white colored clutch since mom had spare key.
I reached within 15 min since there was no traffic. When I went inside maan was not there. So I straight away barged into his room and saw the cutest scene ever. Maan was sleeping with a small smile on his face. His beautiful hair strands were falling on his eyes and I felt like pinching his cheek. and that's wat I did.
Next sec I was beneath him and a pair of chocolate brown eyes were staring at me confusedly.
Who r u ?
Maan?
Oh hi geetipie..
Then he hid his face in the crook of my neck and began to sleep holding me close.
Maan.. u r forgetting sumthg?
Hmm..
Maan.. aaj humari date hain.. remember?
Congrats..
Oh god! this sleepy head.. !! I gave a tight slap in his cheek… he sat up and held his cheek and stared me wide eyed.. wow!! Slap did work!
Y did u slap me ?
To make u remember the importance of this day..
Hu-h? oh!! I m sorry dear.. kal der se soya.. esliye.. par pyaar se bhi toh uta sakthi thi na..
I tried maanpie.. but kya karun, that slap was in ur fate. Aur waise bhi date ke din ladke pick up karne aathe hain.. and here..
There is no rule like that, rt? by the way cutie.. u look gorgeous..
Thanku dear.. I wish I cud say the same thing. Ab toh jao..
Ufho geet.. u r such a romantic killer. But ab aur nahi..
He gave me a wink and dashed to washroom. Wat did he mean by that?
After having some light breakfast we headed to our destination. Maan was not at all ready to reveal the place and that made me more excited.
We were now away from city and surrounded by trees. I dint knew that here I will get to see such a calm and serene place. He parked the car what it seems like shed and like gentleman he opened the door for me.
Thanku..
U r welcome my lady.
We walked thru silence. But it dint feel awkward. I felt like our mind and souls are communicating.
When I got a good look of the place I was grinning like a fool. It was a large field and some men were training using swords, and some other were boxing.
Liked it?
How did u come to noe?
After all I m MSK.
i chuckled at him. from childhood I was always fond of such things and b/c of my insistence Aryan made me join some classes on sword fighting.
This is my personal training yard geet. And u r the 2nd woman to come here.
2nd woman?
Yup. First is my mom.
I gave a kiss to his cheek and looked around. The men around the yard stopped whatever they were doing and gave gave a friendly smile to us.
Hey guys. Meet my cutipie geet.
They waved at me and I waved back. Smiling I walk over to the swords and picked one. I haven't practiced with one since a year. Maan too stood beside me and took one.
Want to go one on one with me?
Now I won't say No to a breathtaking offer..
He smirked at me and the next sec everyone cleared the field and gave us a wide circle. Maan held the eye contact while he backed away and I felt shivers run thru my spine. We started to circle each other while moving the swords in a circular manner. He makes a move towards me and I stepped back and spun around making contact with his sword, with him blocking me. he looked quite surprised.
Wow! That was a sexy move
I winked and made another lunge at him. but he backed away and made another move at me but again I spun around and took my sword swinging it around knocking him off his feet. With my sword pointed to his face I extended a hand to help him and he grabbed me down while he jumping up. But before I could hit the ground he pulled me and held close to his chest. Our faces were inches apart and I looked at his lips. My breathing became uneven when I felt the distance is being reduced. Next sec there was loud round of applause and that's when I came to my senses. I blushed a bit and maan chuckled.
Wow!! That was just amazing guys.. where did u learn to fight like that?
I have been in defense and fighting classes since 5.
U r so different. No wonder our maan fell for u.
My cheeks again warmed up. Oh god!! what happened to me today. It seems like its my blushing day.
U were so amazing my geetipie. I m falling more and more for u each day.
Maan showed me around the place and I saw a large sea at the back of this yard at a distance.
Ready for another surprise?
Yes.
He grabbed my hand and started running towards sea. He stopped beside a small hut like house and I saw 2 men coming out of them. Maan went towards them and did a man to man handshake and whispered sumthg. They nodded and smiled at me. I returned the smile back. After some time. Maan emerged with 2 very shiny blue and white jet skies.
So ready for a ride?
But maan I have done it only once. That too long tym back.
Its k. I will tell u the basic instructions. Don't worry dear.. when maan is here why fear!!
I slightly punched him at the shoulder.
If I get hurt, I m going to blame u.
And if u did it well, then u owe me geetipie..
Making a quick prayer we became ready and with a twist of handle we drove into water. I kept a slow pace and mind focused, and it made the ride enjoyable. Maan rode like a wild wind and I couldn't help to admire him. his muscles flexed and I dint knew when he removed his shirt. I wished he could remove that vest too.
He slowed down beside me breaking my wild thots.
How about a race?
No thanku.. I love my life a lot.
Oh come on geet.. don't be a spoil sport.
I decided to give in promising myself to be controlled. Before he could think further I gave my ski a jolt of gas. Rapidly I increased the speed and I felt maan beside me.
U little cheater
I laughed at his comment and we drove side by side. After enjoying some more time, we decided to call it off since I was feeling very hungry. Since the land was deserted, we sat under the shade of a tree relaxed. Someone brought a basked full of lunch and cold drinks and we enjoyed our little lunch eating laughing, occasionally kissing.
Before we could noe it was 5 in the evng. I wonder hw the time flies when I m with maan. he made each and every moment different.
We walked along the sandy path and eventually reached a private dock. Maan hoped on first then extended his hand to help me enter. We drove off and I stood at the fron of the dock enjoying the perfect view. The sun's rays gave a mixed color orange and red as if making us feel like all our tensions were washing away. I let the wind whip against my face when maan increased the pace. He stopped the boat in neutral and plopped near me.
He looked nervous for some reason.

Everything ok maan?
No geet.. I want to tell u something. I noe its too early, but I can't help myself.
Is he going to propose me? oh no!! I m not ready for that step yet. Feeling my panic he held me close.
Don't worry geet. I m not going to propose u. I wanted to do the first the week we met but u were so confused with ur feelings. U r the best thing that has ever happened to me other than my parents, and I can't imagine any other women in ur place. So for preventing guys hitting u further I wanted u to wear this ring.
It was a simple and beautiful ring with a diamond in the middle.
This is promise ring. And I want u to noe that I will love u more than the world will ever know and my heart, mind, soul, whole six packed body belongs to u forever.
I laughed at his last statement and I felt happiness running thru my whole body. I extended my hand and he slipped it on ring finger and kissed the life long deal.



This part is specially dedicated to lakspie( congrats once again and sorry for the late update) and also my darling friends prafulla, mel, and frankie. I noe i m not be the first to wish u but i m definitely the last.. and i m proud of it..😉

Epilogue coming in the evng...


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Posted: 12 years ago

i cant blieve hw i cm ist on dis prt😛,anywys hv 2 go nw .vil rd nd cment latr😊

Edited by LILY111144 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oye divzi drama queen: check ur pm..

hey lily: kya kar rahe ho?
Edited by Remya_Pillai - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

oye divzi drama queen: check ur pm..

hey lily: kya kar rahe ho?

rems going out,rd latr wid epi.😳

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