ARHI FF-THE MIRAGE -Thread 3 Chap-37,p 146 - Page 53

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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update..
their feelings for each other..justify beautifully...
waiting for next..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor Arnavji...stubborn Kushi ..! Why can Kushi not let go...? When is Kushi going to get well..? Waiting to see how the food revenge goes...waiting for the next part..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update... god tht fellow sicks...really feel bad for khushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
Marvelous update , just loved Arnav's teasing , I totally understand khushis fears but she should trust him , just give him another chance , the way u express there emotions and hesitation is simply superb , waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome?..how do u get the ideas...how can you portray every character as real vision...wow love it..wait for ur updates daily..


U r one piece for Arshi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
BEAUTIFUL..BUT I COULDN'T GET THE 12TH CHAPTER
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Posted: 12 years ago






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(THE MIRAGE-II)


Khushi rotated the spoon so that Arnav gets a sparkle of it as light reflected on it! And she looked at him with narrowed eyes as he showed her his teeth! Arnav looked at the spoon and stole a glance at Garima and Shashi who were talking to Payal on the phone! He simply coughed!


Garima gave the phone to Shashi and came to him asking," Pani chahiye Babua?" ( Do you need some water?) and she saw Khushi with the spoon and said," Hath sey khilaayiyo Khusi! Dekh nahi rahi ho unhey khaasi ho rahi hain!" ( Feed him with your hand, don't you see? He is coughing?) She took the spoon off Khushi's hands who was breathing out fire!


Khushi looked at Arnav who looked at her levelly! She felt like throwing something at Amma and punch him on his smug face!

"Abhi taq baithi ho?" ( You are still sitting quiet) Garima chided her!

...And said "Khilaao!!! Oo ka intezaar kitna karaugi?"(Feed him! How much more will he have to wait?)



Author's Note:

Thank you so much for visiting my blog and reading and supporting my work one and all! However, It is a tad disheartening that there are so many hits but few reviews! I never pestered anyone for commenting but it feels bad that after being disciplined in updating regularly( Read it as daily) very few feel the need to give feed back which might be encouraging and helpful to the writer! I also wish to thank all those who read and comment regularly and I am happy writing for them!

GOLDEN HAZE




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Posted: 12 years ago
hey hey me first again...ohoo


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full on hot update anu...feeding food also will be this much hot i never knew...fantastic update but a cliff hanger i am eagerly waiting for ur next update😉...hope u know why
Edited by kethgauthami1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww loved d chap😳_U beautifully described hw ASR is tryin to control his desires fr Khushi

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