My ASYA STORY: The Hope (SUSPENDED!!!))

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi everyone , I'm new in this forum and this is my first shot . I wanted to write something different. Guys you should know that english is not my first language (the fourth actually) so please don't be so rude with me i know i made a lot of mistakes (i'll accept all the corrections). this is just an introduction if you want me to continue just comment.


Principal characters:

White Kingdom

King Assad Ahmed Khan:

the youngest and the most handsome king that this country has known, he is the dream of all women in the kingdom and out the kingdom, a true warrior, his only goal is to make his kingdom the peaceful and the richest one in the world. He is loved by his people and feared by his enemies.
It's been only 1 year since he became a king after his uncle death. King Assad learned everything from his uncle: fietting, strategies of war and most importantly to think only and only with his brain and absolutely not his heart. Yes King Assad is a heartless person, he can't trust anyone only his mother Princess Dilshald, sister of the last king. He has 3 women as his harem: Tanveer, Allia and Sophia. They used to be the princess of three different states reunited to Assad's kingdom. The only one who have seen Assad is Tanveer.
Princess Dilshald:
She is married to king Rashid Ahmed Khan from the kingdom II who abandoned her and his two children Prince Assad and Princess Nadjma. To save the lives of her children and hers she had no options but to ask help from her Half-brother the king of kingdom II. She knew he is an excellent ruler but not a good brother nor a good uncle, for his family is totally absent. She lived her life trying to bring warm to her family, it worked with princess Nadjma but not prince Assad who grown up to be exactly like his uncle. She is very proud of her son a true ruler, he brought peace in the kingdom and very loved by every one. Everyday she prays that someday, someone will bring back warm in his life and change him to be more human. This was her only hope.
Princess Tanveer:
She is the princess of a country witch is reunited as a new state of Assad's kingdom. She is madly in love with Assad and tries every thing to make him notice her but in vein. She is very close to Nedjma and Dilshald so she can increase her chances and meet Assad. She knows that Allia and Sophia are as beautifull as her and maybe more beautifull than her so she is trying her best to make them far far from Assad and his family. She is more powerful as a princess and has more connections in the palace.
Black Kingdom
King Rashid Ahmed Khan:
He used to be a commoner married to the women he loved the most princess Dilshald, but his ambitious nature lead him to fall for the tricks of the king sidique and queen Rasia. He abandoned his wife and his children and married another princess "Hassena" sister of sidique and became a king. He has 3 other children prince Ayan and Two princesses.
King Sidique and Queen Rasia:
They are the true rulers of Kingdom II despite the fact that the real king known by people is Rashid. They are very hated by their people so they choosed Rashid to become king instead to avoid any rebellion acts . They have a daughter princess Humeira Ayan's wife to be (this was the condition to let Rashid be the king). Another thing you should know about this couple, they don't belong to royalty (I'll let you and your imagination and have a guess how they reached this position)
Kingdom Of HOPE????
'.. To be continued


by having a good look to the map you may find something and have an idea about the third kingdom

( I'm sure you have already the idea but tell me if you find something a clue)

This is the map of the 3 kingdoms

Chpater 1: page 2
Chapter 2 and 3. Page 3
chapter 4 part 1 : page 4
chapter 4 part 2: page 5

Chapter 5 part 1: page 6
chapter 5 part 2: page 6
chapter 6 part 1: page 9
Chapter 6 part 2: page 12
Chapter 6 part 3: page 13
Cahpter 6 last part : page 15
Chapter 7 part 1: Page 20
chapter 7 part 2: page 23
chapter 7 part 3: page 29

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nassindia thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I m sorry the map is not there , i may need help how to post a picture ? ( i just paste it but it seems like it's not working)😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome concept
totally different
plz cont soon
plz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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if anyone knwos how to post a picture please help me , i made a map of the 3 kingdoms but i don't know how to paste it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi everyone , I'm new in this forum and this is my first shot . I wanted to write something different. Guys you should know that english is not my first language (the fourth actually) so please don't be so rude with me i know i made a lot of mistakes (i'll accept all the corrections). this is just an introduction if you want me to continue just comment.


Principal characters:

White Kingdom

King Assad Ahmed Khan:

the youngest and the most handsome king that this country has known, he is the dream of all women in the kingdom and out the kingdom, a true warrior, his only goal is to make his kingdom the peaceful and the richest one in the world. He is loved by his people and feared by his enemies.
It's been only 1 year since he became a king after his uncle death. King Assad learned everything from his uncle: fietting, strategies of war and most importantly to think only and only with his brain and absolutely not his heart. Yes King Assad is a heartless person, he can't trust anyone only his mother Princess Dilshald, sister of the last king. He has 3 women as his harem: Tanveer, Allia and Sophia. They used to be the princess of three different states reunited to Assad's kingdom. The only one who have seen Assad is Tanveer.
Princess Dilshald:
She is married to king Rashid Ahmed Khan from the kingdom II who abandoned her and his two children Prince Assad and Princess Nadjma. To save the lives of her children and hers she had no options but to ask help from her Half-brother the king of kingdom II. She knew he is an excellent ruler but not a good brother nor a good uncle, for his family is totally absent. She lived her life trying to bring warm to her family, it worked with princess Nadjma but not prince Assad who grown up to be exactly like his uncle. She is very proud of her son a true ruler, he brought peace in the kingdom and very loved by every one. Everyday she prays that someday, someone will bring back warm in his life and change him to be more human. This was her only hope.
Princess Tanveer:
She is the princess of a country witch is reunited as a new state of Assad's kingdom. She is madly in love with Assad and tries every thing to make him notice her but in vein. She is very close to Nedjma and Dilshald so she can increase her chances and meet Assad. She knows that Allia and Sophia are as beautifull as her and maybe more beautifull than her so she is trying her best to make them far far from Assad and his family. She is more powerful as a princess and has more connections in the palace.
Black Kingdom
King Rashid Ahmed Khan:
He used to be a commoner married to the women he loved the most princess Dilshald, but his ambitious nature lead him to fall for the tricks of the king sidique and queen Rasia. He abandoned his wife and his children and married another princess "Hassena" sister of sidique and became a king. He has 3 other children prince Ayan and Two princesses.
King Sidique and Queen Rasia:
They are the true rulers of Kingdom II despite the fact that the real king known by people is Rashid. They are very hated by their people so they choosed Rashid to become king instead to avoid any rebellion acts . They have a daughter princess Humeira Ayan's wife to be (this was the condition to let Rashid be the king). Another thing you should know about this couple, they don't belong to royalty (I'll let you and your imagination and have a guess how they reached this position)
Kingdom Of HOPE????
'.. To be continued


by having a good look to the map you may find something and have an idea about the third kingdom

( I'm sure you have already the idea but tell me if you find something a clue)

This is the map of the 3 kingdoms








nassindia thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😭😭😭


I m waithing for help to post the map (I ve tried my best).
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Posted: 12 years ago
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🤣Haseena and Rashid!!🤣
OMG m cracked 🤣
It seems me ALOO with BHINDI 🤣
Awesome concept,
nd Asad, he z always my Prince Charming.
Well done. Cont soon nd PM me
Edited by AsyaManic - 12 years ago
Ceon thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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If u want 2 post images den jst surf any random image hosting sites like, Imageshack, Minus, Tinypic (m doubt if tinypic z banned or not in dis forum).
Upload u'r image, u cn get link which must me highlighted in BB Code or Link.
U hv 2 edit dem 1st. Clear To to " />)
Before link, lyk http... Write aftr the link, lyk ...gif" /> nd post it. U will succeed.
Hope it cn help you 😊
Ceon thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Clear To to " />)
Actually i posted IMG wid squre bracket '[]' bt it changed since i didnt post a link. Nd down i posted /IMG wid squre bracket.
See if u cn get it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I hope this will work to get the map:



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