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Posted: 12 years ago
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Intimate

He sucked her soft skin as he gave her kisses along the length of her. She closed her eyes and let out a soft moan as she felt his hands roam all over her. Her eyes were closed and hands fisted in his hair.

"Ohh! KD , please stop." Kiya whispered in his ear desperately trying to shove him away.

In response KD held onto her tighter and smiled at her and got off her after whispering a few sweet nothings into her ear. She smiled at him and took hold of his hand and kissed his knuckles and hugged him tight.

"Lets go , KD. We really need to leave now, Baba and the rest would be waiting." Said Kiya already in action.

She packed her bag in a split second and quickly went in the shower to get ready. As she felt droplets on her face flowing through, she recalled all the beautiful moments spent during their long honeymoon. The word always made her blush. She still remembered how fast the past three years went by.

She , Kiya Gujral , the girl every boy at her college desired. The girl who was lonely and in pain. The girl who had lost her father at the age of thirteen.

She had only one friend Panchi, the twin soul as she was often regarded. The two girls were besties , since they were toddlers. The first time they met was when they were in Nursery and had instantly hit off. The two grew up together.

Enter Keshav Desai , the teacher's pet from his very first day and the most hated guy since day one. Often regarded as the snob and hence popular for all the wrong reasons.

Then came in the dance competition and as clich as it could get the two opposites fell in love with each other. They held hands , hugged , kissed and after a LOT of struggle the two were married off and they had just finished their fifteen day long honeymoon and there, she blushed again.

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They sat in their jeep which was taking them back to Mumbai. The place they fell in love. The two seated in the back seat , as usual cuddling into each other when they heard a loud honk and THUD.

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Kiya sat in a Mandap next to her groom , Ranveer. She bent forward to take the blessings of all her elders. Then came in the bidaai , during which she did not cry out.

Ranveer held her hand , just the way once KD had. She closed her eyes as a tear made its way down her face. She entered her new home , new room.

Kiya sat there, remembering her time with KD but she knew that now Ranveer expected something out of her as his wife , he deserved after waiting for ten years from that incident. While with KD she always demanded things , fought for them and didn't care about his feelings while convincing him of things. With Ranveer , he did things for her in a similar manner. He fought with her , for her, to get her out of depression. He loved her and didn't tell her some clichd movie dialogue , like he'll wait forever for her to fall in love with him, rather he told her he'll wait for her to fall in love with herself.

Kiya , didn't really love him the way she loved KD but there was something in him that stirred a emotion , unknown yet pure , in her. She , over the years fell in love with the image of herself ,he brought in front of her. That, was when she decided , to live , to love again. KD was a part of her , she breathed him and Ranveer was the man who had accepted her knowing that. He was her liht and that day , Kiya had changed , from a young lady to a mature woman.

Ranveer came in and locked the door , smiled at Kiya and slowly made love to her. He loved her while she let him. Reciprocating. Slowly but steadily.

Kiya smiled ruefully as Ranveer said "I know you miss him and his intimacy , I hope I haven't done anything to hurt you.."

Kiya took hold of his hand and said " No, you haven't. I breathe him and you are my air."

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After a year ,

A man named Keshav smiled in heaven as he saw the love of his life , Kiya and her husband , Ranveer , a guy he didn't even know , at the temple for his Death Anniversary's Pooja.

She looked up at the sky as though she felt him and let out his name ever so softly and closed her eyes to pray for his soul along with Ranveer who wasn't there for anybody but himself . He got his wife and a beautiful daughter along with another one on its way , thanks to that man.

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The relationship between KD and Kiya was intimate to her heart while with Ranveer it was another level of intimacy , the pain with the soft love. The blend to show Kiya in two different positions.


here is an OS.

Please tell me what you think of it.:)

A little Dramatic and sad, I know , but that is my forte.

Like and Comment.


Love , Adya🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
aww... touching!!
I really like ur writing style. .
d flow of d story was jus so brilliant!!
do write more Often!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woooh I liked it cool , and very greatly written
But the fact is ki tum ne kd ko marva diya lolz
Well awesome os I loved it specially the start lolz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh dude...you made me cry...poor kiya and KD...
its awsome concept...
i really love you for this...*wiping my tears*
this was so awsome...
damn good story...
please do write more...
i loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: blue_Orchid

aww... touching!!
I really like ur writing style. .
d flow of d story was jus so brilliant!!
do write more Often!!



Thank you...
Rads? That's your name naa?
🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shubhraupadhyay

Woooh I liked it cool , and very greatly written
But the fact is ki tum ne kd ko marva diya lolz
Well awesome os I loved it specially the start lolz



Thank you dear. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshifan2012

oh dude...you made me cry...poor kiya and KD...
its awsome concept...
i really love you for this...*wiping my tears*
this was so awsome...
damn good story...
please do write more...
i loved it...



Thank you dear. :)
Oh! well...your comment is really sweet.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya



Thank you...
Rads? That's your name naa?
🤗


yup 😃
whats urs??!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: blue_Orchid


yup 😃
whats urs??!!



My name is Adya. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi Adya. .. 😃
gud to see u here. . u're an awesome Writer!!
do write more often!!

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