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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Amor.

@A BIG MISTAKE OF MY LIFE...

A SIMPLE WISH...


just superb OS

luved it darling



thank you di...glad you liked it...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

Magically mystically romantically beautiful stry'wid a damn gud moral indeed...thank u...😃

Aapki imagination- em a big fan of it...n me teri...

Though it had no dialogues n scenes particularly'but I enjoyed...glad to know...

Fictitious things are always tempting'n how much I lov dem u cn draw it frm lovestory supernatural...obiyously we all knew it very well...

The way u described supernatural scene..of those paint brushes moving n brilliance in the room'

Really fairy land effect it ws..

It ws a mistake, no doubt'and gusse mei hi saari,jyadatarr mistake hoti h...sahi kaha...

Ya tho phirr anger cn destroy ur life, or some other life'

But dangerous face of anger is wen anger consumes ur head like passion, n ppl commit most heinous crimes widin..

By the way keeping all these social issues aprt frm this lovely piece of story'

Just wanna say- really appreciable attempt di, u hav really made a success in making us adapt ur moral...thank u ji...glad to know that at least these msg hv actually effected you guys...

Lovely.



thank you rashmi for this lovely cmt...me in blue...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Amor.

@A WALK TO REMEMBER...

unforgettable moments...


just superb

main late ho gyi but padh to li

i luv reading all rtmc ffs together

maza aa gya


thank you di...late hi sahi but aye toh...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shruja

thanks for os n pm
beautiful fairytale with rtmc!
and wise message!!
loved it!!


thank u di...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: surprising

good story with hearty mess😊


thank u...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

phew, exam almost end n here i am again,sorry to tourcher you guys again but i couldn't help myself from posting it...didn't rechecked plz forgive for any grammatical mistakes...😊


Tum Hi Ho.....



In the continuous flashing light of the glamorous party she was standing in the corner with a group of ladies uninterestedly nodding on their useless gossip. Elegantly dressed in plain light blue silk saree in open hairs with light kajal accompanied by a watch in her left hand and right hand full with plain light blue bangles once again she greeted with a fake smile to the lady just came to her with a sweet smile. It's going to be almost 2 hours she was unwontedly greeting and nodding to everyone and now she was getting fed up of her fake behavior, she moved a little ahead excusing herself from everyone when her body got frozen on the familiar sensation, ''is he here?, no it's not possible, how could be he here?, he was...'', her eyes widen and heart beat got faster than normal as she spun around making her hair to cover her milky white neck and half face, hair strands sticking on her red lips.


It's being three years since they both were away from each other but in these years he hadn't changed a bit, he was dressed as he use to before in dark blue denim jeans and plain black shirt only with a watch, neither gel for his hair nor any other thing for himself, he never liked to add anything which can even change the look of a person, he use to say that artificial things hide the real face of a person's and sometimes their behavior also.


A little far from her he unwontedly smiled at the worthless joke of the young man infront of him when because the sudden change in his surrounding his attention got diverted as the cool breez played with his hairs giving him a familiar sensation. As he felt her presence around himself he tilted his head In every direction of the party and at last his search ended on the lady in blue saree in the corner looking at him.


For a moment there was a mixed expression on his face of anger, guilt, shock, surprise and happiness. He couldn't believe that she is here, she was changed, he thought, she is not the same bold, brave, fearless, tomboy type's girl, she was fully changed.


For several moments they both kept on standing there looking at each other as their past flashed infront of their eyes like a tv screen.


Kitni baat yaad ati hai tasveerein si ban jaati hai

Main kaise inhein bhulu,Dil ko kya samjhau

Kitni baatein kehni ki hai,Hoonthon par jo sehmi si hai

Ek roz inhein sun lo, kiu aise gumsum ho

Kiu puri ho na payi daastan

Kaise ayi hai aisi duriyaan


With slow steps he moved forward remembering their sweet, sour memories together where as she kept on standing there with moist eyes remembering their day when they both turned around to go and never looked back. They both were standing in mid of the flash lights of the party but it's seems like nothing was mattering to them accept each other, instead of being in loud music and murmurs of the people present in the party they both were alone, they knew that they both were together once but then what happened that they both got separated, no one has the answer for it, both doesn't have the explanation for the reason for their separation.


Dono ke dilon main chupa hai jo ek anjana sa gum

Kya ho payega wo kum, koi kya kahe

Dono ne kabhi zindagi ki ek mod pet hi jo payi

Hai kaise wo tanhayi, koi kya kahe

Kitna viraan hai ye samaa

Saanson main jaise ghulta hai dhuaan

Kaise ayi hai aisi duriyaan

Kitni baat yaad ati hai tasveerein si ban jaati hai

Main kaise inhein bhulu


As he moved a little ahead more someone tapped on his shoulder making him to turn around only to find a old man, sponsor of his book standing behind him, ''hello mr. writer'', that man said forwarding his hand for hand shake, he smiled at him awkwardly and then hurriedly turned to see her only to find that she was gone, he released a deep sigh closing his eyes in defeat, ''what happen?'', that man asked to which he negatively shook his head with a dissatisfied smile, ''mr. writer we have came to know that instead of being a writer you sings well, so why don't you sing for us today?'', that man said to him and every other person standing beside him forced him to sing. At that moment he was fighting with the strong desire to go and search for her but then finally he decided to sing because he knew that only that was the way to make her face him.


After a moment he was on the stage with a guitar in his hand as he confessed, ''today I am going to sing for that person whom I loved since we are in school and didn't even knew the meaning of love, today she is here and she didn't want to face me but I have to tell her that what she actually meant to me'', saying so he moved his finger on the strings of the guitar and the lights got dim.


Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte

Tere bina kya wajood mera

Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

She was moving towards exit when her foots came to an abrupt halt listening his voice, shockingly she spun around to find him at stage looking everywhere for her. Her eyes were getting moist, it was the same song he had sung for her when he had proposed her.


Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho


As the song came to it's end he again scanned the whole room for her and finally he spotted her at the exit standing helplessly but before he could have even reacted she stepped back and got out from the party.


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She was walking forcing her tears back when from sudden a strong grip on her arms pulled her into a dark room and pinned her to the wall but she neither screamed nor protested because she knew it very well that it must be him, he always did it when she use be angry with him, ''leave me'', she said finally struggling with his grip on her wrist, ''stop this seher, it's enough'', he pleaded, on his pleading voice she looked up to meet his eyes and frowningly snapped, '' I have always done what you said but even then it was you who asked for the space right?, then now why this?, ''her question made him feel more guilty for his demand, in these years he had got what he wanted but he was never satisfied with whatever he got because she was not with him, ''I know, I am sorry'', he whisperingly apologized keeping his forehead on her and in few seconds he realized that she has stopped struggling. Both kept on standing there in same position for several minutes and kept on sobbing in the dark silence of the room.


Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera

Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa


After few seconds she controlled herself and pushed him back furiously, ''just go'', at first he was taken aback from her sudden reaction but then making himself stable he looked at her for few moments and then he speak up breaking the icy silence between them, ''I am returning back today, the train is of 5, I'll wait for you there'', she looked at him in disbelief, ''go ahead, I'll not come'', she stubbornly replied, ''I know you will, you will'', saying so he took a step back then another still keeping his eyes fix on her and abruptly turning he walked out from the room leaving her alone, ''I'll not'', she shouted as he moved out but he didn't came back, for few seconds she kept on standing in same position with tears making their way out from her eyes and then she helplessly sat down crying out her heart loudly.


Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho


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It was almost 4:30 he was sitting on a bench holding two tickets on the station, though he knew that she is hell angry with him but somewhere his heart was damn sure that she will come, whatever happen this time his love will make her come to him, ''sahed tea'', his thought came to an abrupt halt when a small boy came to him holding a small glass of tea, smilingly he took it and paid that boy 5 rupee keeping his hand on his head and messing up his hairs.


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The dark clouds had covered the whole sky and it was raining heavily accompanied by loud thunders in the dark clouds, she was sitting and the road side bench in the heavy rain cuddling herself, continuously looking to the rain drops falling on the road and breaking in million pieces, their relation was also same like this, everytime they have given a second chance to their relationship but everytime it got broke because of them or by any other reason but even then they couldn't stay away from each other for longer, everytime destiny made them to face each other and everytime they gave up infront of their destiny, she knew that there is no hope in this relationship but she couldn't help herself from going to him, everytime she gave up whenever he came infront of her but this time she is not going to gave up, she will not return back to him at any cost.


Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ik pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho


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His head shot up as he listen the whistle of the train signaling that the time has arrive and the train was about to move, his heart sank but he didn't budge an inch from his place and turned to see whether she was there or not only to get disappointed. But he didn't loosed hope he kept on sitting there with a hope that she will come until the time the train has given it's final whistle and showed a green signal. Finally quitting he got up, took his bag and hung it on his left shoulder he moved towards the door, as he reached at the door he once again turned to look for her but she was not there, he hopelessly stepped in the train ,''AKASHHH!!!!!!!!!!'', his heart jumped with happiness as in nest second her voice stuck to his ears, standing on the door he looked outside only to find her standing a little far from the train.


Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho


He smiled through his teary eyes, he wanted to ran towards her and hug her tightly but he can't do anything because the train has started to move, so he just forwarded his hand for her holding the iron rod of the door for balance. As he forwarded his hand, she realized that she has very less time to reach to him, with the sudden realization she took a step forward then another and then started to ran forwarding her hand to hold his but this time never to leave it.


Phir le aaya dil majboor kya keeje
Raas na aaya rehna door kya keeje
Dil keh raha use maqammal kar bhi aao
Wo jo adhoori si baat baaki hai
Wo jo adhoori si yaad baaki hai
Wo jo adhoori si yaad baaki hai

Karte hain hum aaj qabool kya keeje
Ho gayi thi jo humse bhool kya keeje
Dil keh raha use mayassar kar bhi aao
Wo jo dabi si aas baaki hai
Wo jo dabi si aanch baaki hai
Wo jo dabi si aanch baaki hai
Wo jo dabi si... aanch baaki hai

Kismat ko hai yeh manzoor kya keeje
Milte rahe hum badastoor kya keeje
Dil keh raha hai use musalsal kar bhi aao
Wo jo ruki si raah baaki hai
Wo jo ruki si chaah baaki hai
Wo jo ruki si chaah baaki hai
Wo jo ruki si chaah baaki hai.


THE END******


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You can't stay at the corner of your side waiting for others to come to you, sometimes you have to go to them to bridge up the gap between you and them.



hope you guys like it...

do give your reviews...

luv...

radhika...😊

Edited by ridzzi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
very very nice part..

loved the song...!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome os dear
loved it

thnx 4 the pm😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
res😃

awww suvh a beautiful osss...lovely muahhh😳
akassh n sehar such a beautiful names na...loved it alot
misunderstandings...yeh cheez hi aisi h love one ko alag kar hi deti h...
but i really loved akashh n seha..n sehar in blue sari kitni sweet lag rhi hogiii
aakhir mil hi gye party mein...n kuch kuch hua bhi dono ko...
awww so sweet akash sang for her...
rt h hi aisa kya kare...simple n sweet

oho...romance in darkkk...maine aisa socha thabut yaha to kuch or hi chatting ho rhi thi...he wanted her back...but sehar was also right on her side...fir bhi mujhe wo scene bhot romantic laga...pata nhi kyu??

nd jab akash ne usse 5 baje ane ko bola n usne mana kar diya to instantly mere mind ddlj wala scene aya...n wo scene aya bhi or mene bhot thank u bola is writer ko matlab meri pyari dulari ridzzz ko isliye starting me meine ek kiss di
n again here for u
muahhh
mere dil ki baat sun ne ke liye...
thank u

i loved that movie...n this os tooo

kya filmy scene tha last wala...atlast mil gye dono

hushhh
love u

aise hi likte raha karo...mere dil ki baat koi toh sunta h at least

Edited by tejjo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey radhika thnx fr d pm😊...it was a really vry nice os👏...as fantastic as ur previous all d othr os...dis 1 was vry sweet😊...plz keep writting😊...

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