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So excited for the next update!!!!!!!!
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Hey dear, plz dnt b sad. It's exam tym so not many ppl wud come online. Even I'm reading ur updates now. Plz dnt stop PMing me. I lov ur updates n they're all awesome!
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HELLO MY DEAR FRIENDS ,😊

chapter 4

taani goes 2 her room where khushi was waiting 4 her on d bed holding d teddy gifted by taani,
khushi- di , where were u , come fast now ,
dekho babu (teddy's name)ko bhi nini (sleep- neend) aa rahi hai
taani- aa rahi hun gudiya ,
and she goes and sits near her ,
khushi- di aaj main aapki goddi main soongi (i want 2 sleep on your lap)
ta- ok my pari as u wish , come(taani rests her back with d pillow and keeps her legs straight resting on d bed and khushi rests her head on her lap holding teddy in right hand and she holds taani's hands with her left hand as she was afraid and scared that if she slept and taani left her like her mom-dad so she was ensuring herself by holding her hands
that she has hold her di , hold her love so that no one can take it away from her )
taani was caressing her head with other hand ,
khushi- di mujhe koi song sunao na plz , tani - ok meri gudiya as u wish
she starts singing -


(still caressing khushi's head and do see d video , it's very cute, clickable link given )

but with this song she gets lost in d memories of her past and tears start shedding from her eyes but she was so lost in her old memories that she didn't even realize that 1 tear has fell on khushi's face khushi feeling moist on her cheeks open her eyes and saw tears in taani's eyes
khushi- di aap ro kyun rahe ho
taani (came out of her past) - nahi pari main ro nahi rahi , just aankh main kuch chala gaya tha, aap so jao
after sometime khushi fell asleep ,and taani smoothly and softly removed her hand and made khushi sleep properly on d bed and switched off d bedside lamp
and then she get up and goes near d room's window where she started looking at d half moon and twinkling stars
but in london rey was also unable 2 sleep so he went on d terrace and he saw d incomplete half moon with stars
(JUST LIKE D HALF INCOMPLETE MOON REY AND TAANI R ALSO INCOMPLETE WITHOUT EACH OTHER ALTHOUGH THEY R ALREADY TOGETHER BY THEIR DESTINY AND BY THEIR HEARTS , THEY R JUST HIDDEN BY D DIFFERENT PATHS 2 THEIR DESTINATION AND THEIR DESTINY , JUST LIKE D HALF MOON IS HIDDEN BEHIND CLOUDS, THEY R SURROUNDED BY LOVED ONES JUST LIKE D MOON IS SURROUNDED BY D STARS BUT STILL THEY R INCOMPLETE WITHOUT EACH OTHER)

(looking at a twinkling star )taani-- i miss u bhai and i miss u pari , love u both so much
and tears started felling from her eyes, i wish aap dono mere sath hote , pari was her little sis and she also had elder bro
but they r no more now
and she closed her eyes 2 feel d night breeze , d breeze passed through her as if it is sent by her bhai and pari and is soaking her tears and cooling her but as she closed her eyes ,unknowingly d thought of rey's convo strike her mind as well as heart and she opened her eyes surprisingly
rey looking at d sky , moon and stars
(looking st 2 twinkling stars )- ma papa agar aaj aap mere sath hote to mujhpe bahut proud feel karte and close his eyes but taani's magical voice starts ringing by his heart in his ears ,
and he was again enjoying and loving d song remembering her voice but suddenly he opens his remembering taani's anger and shouting,
rey - omg yaar kya ladki hai she sings song so softly and lovingly but her anger is unbearable , i don't know but why i feel that there is some pain , or some fear behind her anger, patanahi kya jaadu tha uski aavaz main jo main usse bhul hi nahi pa raha ,
par god ,and mumma papa , i really wish ki main kabhi us ladki se mil paon ,
i really wanna meet her even if 1 time ever in my life ,
just then a shooting star was passing through d sky , as if god also wants 2 complete his hearty wish
rey - good night ma , good night papa, love u and miss u both
(and he gaves a flying kiss towards d sky)
on d other hand in mumbai
taani- *thinking* pata nahi kaun tha vo , aur kya pata vo sach keh raha ho , kahin maine kuch zyada to nahi keh diya , pata nahi but i hope maine usse hurt na kiya ho meri baaton se , anyways leave it i should go to sleep now , it's already very late ,

then taani goes and lays down on d bed besides khushi , but before laying down she prays 2 her laddu gopal- sorry mere pyaare pyaare laddu gopal ,
sorry aaj main phir angry ho gayi and shout bhi kiya vo bhi ek bina kisi baat ke ek stranger pe , i am sorry dil se par main kya karun aap to meri problem jante ho na so , please forgive and plz help me 2 overcome my anger , bless all ,good night

in morning (in london)

sharon and d gang reaches reyam's house ,where rey was sleeping yet whereas dadi was praying d aarti in pooja ghar and swayam was also awake and getting ready 2 go 2 office sharon and gang reach there
sharon2 gang - i am sure rey must be sleeping yet so u all go and wake up rey and asks him 2 come in d hall right now meanwhile i will also go and asks swayam whether he is coming with us or not ,
sharon directly goes 2 swayam's room where swayam was changing his shirt as he saw d ink on d shirt he wore before and suddenly sharon enters without knocking and turns back immediately seeing him shirtless ,and starts shouting on him-
sh- what d hell bholu (sharon calls swayam bholu as he is very innocent from childhood ) can't u close d door before changing , don't u have manners , hunhhh
and swayam says while wearing his shirt - oyeee hello miss attitude don't u have manners 2 knock before entering someone's room , and will i have dream that u r going 2 come in my room when i am changing clothes and that too in d morning ,by d way u can turn now ,
sharon turns and again starts shouting while swayam was just looking at her intensely
sh - oohh bholu don't forget that i am your best friend and not your servant 2 ask permission before coming in your room , okkk and u both brothers r so careless ,
tumhara bhai ek phone no. bhi correctly note nahi kar saka , and anyways leave it
u r coming with us 2 mumbai na ?
swayam was still looking at her unaware of what she was saying
then sharon sees him and shooks him shouting - bholuuu main tumse baat kar rahi hun , deewaron se nahi ,
swayam comes out of d swaron land - hunhhh kuch kaha tumne ,
sh- i am asking whether u r coming with us 2 mumbai or not , actually i am not asking but telling u as your best friend ,
sw- chill miss attitude , kya aaj tak main kabhi tumhe NO kaha hai , nahi na so ,
and also i don't have option 2 say no
sh- goob boy , that's like my bholu ,i forgot 2 tell u that we have 2 leave by today evening
as ordered by our great princi , so finsh your work and packing and be ready
by 7 evening , i have already booked our tickets of flight , ok , ab chalo tumhare pyaare rey ko bhi inform karna hai ,
sw - okkk boss
they go in rey's room and see d girls rinni and simmi r sleeping and resting sitting on d room's sofa and neil is also sleeping besides rey ,
all came 2 wake up rey but they have also fall asleep ,
seeing this swaron bursts into laughter and after sometime sharon says- guys wake up
a bit loud - wake up now , and when d gang wakes up a little and open their eyes
sh-tum log yahan rey ko jagaane aaye the ya khud sonne aaye the ,
sharon 2 rey(shouting) - wake up now rey , wake up , when rey wakes up -
kya hai subah subah kyun chilla rahi ho , mujhe koi shanti se sonne kyun nahi deta,
sh- rey i said get up and sit now , tum caption ho na is team ke so tumhe responsible hona chahiye , but look at u , u r not even bothered a little about d competition , its details , our practice ,
rey gets up - haan main point kya hai lecture kyun suna rahi ho itni early morning ,
sh- ok , yesterday i told u 2 call d manager , have u done it , no right ,
rey - i tried but it was a wrong no,
sh- stop giving excuses , mujhe v.p sir ka phone aaya tha that , their manager had called him 4 d confirmation and also we have 2 go today 4 some paper work ,
our flight is at 9 and we have 2 reach there by 7 evening, ok
rey - ok no problem
just then a servant came 2 call them 4 d breakfast
rey - tum log jao main fresh hoke aata hun ,

at d dining table ,
dadi- bachon (children) come fast breakfast is ready ,
firstly all goes and hugs dadi and greets her and also informs her that they have 2 leave today, then rey comes and hugs dadi
rey - good morning grany ,
dadi - good morning beta , chalo jaldi se breakfast karlo and then packing karni hai na ,
they all have breakfast while chit chatting and starts packing ,gang also goes 2 their respective 2 pack their luggage

in MUMBAI -
(i am rushing it a bit 4 taarey 's meeting )

taani was going 2 her home after hugging all cuties and also after promising them that she will come soon , and then hugs her gang and vicky 2 taani- apna khayal rakhna and call me soon , taani- arre haan mere bhai main kisi dusri duniya main nahi ja rahi jo aap itna worry ho rahe ho ,
but in a moment vicky's eyes got filled with tears and he shouts a little - just shut up taani , how dare u say like that , u know na we have already lose u one time, and can't afford 2 lose u again , so never say that again ,
and taani realizes what she said and feels sorry and hugs vicky tightly
tani- bhai main aapko chhod ke kahan ja sakti hun , aap itna pyaar jo karte ho mujhse,
sorry bhai - but aapko pata hai na ki main bina soche samjhe kuch bhi bolti chali jaati hun, sorry , oohhh mere pyaare cute se bhaiya chalo smile karke dikhao , fast ,
and vicky smiles a little , then taani 2 kids - angels kya aapko (showing finger towards vicky) bhaiya ki ye real smile lag rahi hai , mujhe to nahi lag rahi ,
kids - hamein bhi nahi lag rahi di ,
then looking at his cute sis and her little angels vicky smiles wider
taani- ab bhi kuch kam nahi hai angels hmm
vicky starts laughing looking at his cute little sis , - tu sudheragi nahi na ,
taani- not possible bhai ,ok keep smiling all of u and i am going otherwise ma papa , se mujhe bahut acchhe se milne hai , kids- kyaaa di
taani-- areee scoldings daant buddhhu ,
and all smiles and then she goes from there , but on her way she goes 2 d temple and prays 2 her laddu gopal , - aaj thodi jaldi main hun laddu gopal , maa papa it kar rahe hain na , sorry 4 my mistakes and thank u 4 everything , bless all BUT UNKNOWINGLY SHE PRAYS - KANHA JI USS WRONG NO. KA BHI KHAYAL RAKHNA , MERI VAJAH SE VO ZYADA HURT NA HUA HO , PLZ USSE BHI KHUSH RAKHNA , BLESS ALL ,
and then she goes 2 her house and finds her mom was pacing from here and there murmuring - kahan reh gayi ye ladki , pata nahi kya karti hai ye , itni time lagta hai aane main , hamari to koi fikar hi nahi hai na
papa - shant ho jao shrimati ji taani aati hi hogi , lo aa gayi hamari cinderalla
taani - arree aise kaise fikar nahi hai mujhe aapki , agar fikar nahi hoti to kya main aapke favourite gulaab jamun (a sweet dish) lati , nahin na , to
showing d polythene of gulab jaamun which she had bought on her way ,
she goes and hugs her mom and dad
and they also hug her back and
mom - poore ek din aur ek raat humse dur rahi hai , aur aate hi bakwas kar rahi hai ,
jaa apne angels ke hamari kya zaroorat hai tujhe ,
taani- kya meri sweetheart darling itna anger , chalo dekho meri taraf main aa gayi hun so , smile , plz my darling mumma plz , acchha dekho agar aap smile karoge na toh main paapa se 20000 Rs dilvaaungi aapko , shopping ke liye , pakka
and then taani and her mom also starts laughing a lot ,
her dad was shocked 4 sometime- vaah vaah kya baat hai , tum donon maa-beti ne mujhe lootne ka plan banaya hai kya ,aur taani beta tumne apni pocket money bannd karani hai kya , nahi na to chup chaap bethi raho , khabardaar agar kisi aur ko(her mom)
ko bhi apni tarah banaya to , and he also starts laughing ,
taani- ok to , chalo 20000 milne ki khushi main hum gulaab jamun khaate hain ,
dad - oyee princess main koi 20000 nahi dene wala , ok
taani- acchha , thik hai then she took a gulab jamun and feeds her ma ,and papa
ma and papa also feeds her back

taani (cutely says) - ab bhi nahi doge papa

papa - arree meri princess , ok i will give u but only 10000 so happy now
taani- yaaa , love u papa and love u maa ,

LONDON 7 PM
ALL REACHED AIRPORT AND AFTER CHECKING AND ALL THEY SITS IN D FLIGHT AND SOME R CHIT CHATTING , AND SOME R SLEEPING ,
AND THEN SOME HOURS THEY REACHED MUMBAI WHERE THEIR DRIVER WAS WAITING WITH A BIG CAR AS ORDERED BY SWAYAM
THEY ALL SITS IN D CAR AND GOES 2 D BUNGLOW AND GO 2 RESTS IN THEIR PARTICULAR ROOMS ,
plz avoid mistakes and
i am sorry taarey meeting was not possible in this update but i promise that there will surely be taarey first meeting in d next update , pakka promise , but 4 next update u have 2 give me more and more likes and comments
plz like and comment as it took me almost whole night - 5 hours so plz after so much hardwork like and comment to bante hain boss , but d comments should be from your heart only
and this time i am sending pm to only those who liked important note on d last posts on page 33, so
if u want pm of d updates like there and wherever left also plzz silent readers at least hit like if u like anything plz

PRECAP--
A SURPRISE 4 ALL OF U
AND
TAAREY FIRST MEETING 4 SURE (kaise hogi yeh suspense rehne dete hain , but jaisi bhi hogi bahut beautiful hogi , 😉)
so stay tuned
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res
unres!!
Yay im the first one!!

Ohh taani lost her sibliings.. That so painful!!
Nice song selection...
Loved swaron's nok jhok..
Rey ko uthane gaye.. Khud hi so gaye.. That part was epic.. 😆
taani and rey's connection thru heart was shwn beautifully..
Excited for taarey's meeting..
Continue sooon!!
Great going.. 😊 😊


Edited by toshi_ta - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: toshi_ta

Res
unres!!
Yay im the first one!!

Ohh taani lost her sibliings.. That so painful!!
Nice song selection...
Loved swaron's nok jhok..
Rey ko uthane gaye.. Khud hi so gaye.. That part was epic.. 😆
taani and rey's connection thru heart was shwn beautifully..
Excited for taarey's meeting..
Continue sooon!!
Great going.. 😊 😊



a hearty thanks toshi 4 this wonderful comment 😊,
and thanks a lot 4 reading / liking/ commenting also, thank u so much dear😃
i thought that some of u won't read as it's very long and also couldn't add taarey's meeting in this , but thanks a lot ,
i will update as soon as i will get proper response from others also😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg
tani k sath itna bura nahi hona chahiye tha
bechari
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sharon said to swayam bholu .😆
awww loved night taani and rey convo..
Espc shooting star and moon part...
Taani lost sibling it's very painful..😔
Story going gud way..
M waiting for taarey meeting mean full moon..😆
update next part soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
heyyy 😊 😊again its amazing dear loved it😛 woowww taarey convo to moon 😉was cuteee n taani's siblings were no more 😲 so sad wht is the reason for that??? n swaron was cuteee😉.. n taani feeling like guilty for rey wow thts so niceee ... n ya next update is taarey first meet 😃 awww waiting for for plzzz update it soon... totally loved ur update 👏 👏 👏 😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chand91

omg

tani k sath itna bura nahi hona chahiye tha
bechari


DESTINY DECIDES SOMEONE'S LIFE , DEATH , HAPPINESS, SADNESS ,
IT'S NOT IN OUR HAND DEAR ,
EVERYTHING HAPPENS BY GOD'S WISH BUT WE ALSO DON'T KNOW GOD'S MOTIVE BEHIND OUR EVERY SITUATION / PROBLEM
THANKS A LOT 4 READING/ LIKING / AND COMMENTING 😊,
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Originally posted by: Avc380

Sharon said to swayam bholu .😆
awww loved night taani and rey convo..
Espc shooting star and moon part...
Taani lost sibling it's very painful..😔
Story going gud way..
M waiting for taarey meeting mean full moon..😆
update next part soon.


THANK U SO MUCH DEAR ,
BUT A LOTS AND A LOTS OF SURPRISES/ SHOCKS / TWISTS R WAITING 4 ALL OF U SO BE READY 4 THAT ALSO ,😉 😊😉
AND
FULL MOON IS ONLY WHEN THEY WILL BE TOGETHER ,
BUT SORRY NEXT MEETING MAIN FULL MOON NAHI HOGA BECAUSE THEY WILL MEET 4 SURE , BUT NOT UNITE IN NEXT UPDATE , 😆, WHICH IS AFTER A VERY LONG AND DIFFICULT PATH , SO STAY TUNED TO KNOW HOW THEIR MAGIC OF LOVE WILL OVERCOME THE OBSTACLES AND THE HURDLES OF THEIR JOURNEY😉😉


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