OS Amarprem - Chapter 17 - Page 2

Another nice update dhanya...👍🏼

Originally posted by: Latha.I

Another nice update dhanya...👍🏼

as usually he never carries things

@ description of the character well maintained at all stages...👏

waiting for P's reaction for K's charms😉 though I don't think will happen soonn...

why do girls never fall in love first??😕 in any story..😲

Brilliant Update Dhanya, you really are an amazing writer👏⭐️

The way that you have described K's feelings towards P am loving it, and now am waiting to see P's reaction when she sees K I'm sure it will be a powerful scene. Looking forward to reading the many scenes and battles they will have before they realize their love.

Even your non kriya scenes are beautifully written

Can't wait for the next update hope it's soon😛

Originally posted by: teenss

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i think they fall in 😉 in real life😳😳

Fabulous update Dii 👏
Just love the whole scene krishna feelings lost in it was sooo attach ❤️
Waiting for pratigya,s reaction to Krishna action

Originally posted by: rekrn

Brilliant Update Dhanya, you really are an amazing writer👏⭐️

The way that you have described K's feelings towards P am loving it, and now am waiting to see P's reaction when she sees K I'm sure it will be a powerful scene. Looking forward to reading the many scenes and battles they will have before they realize their love.

Even your non kriya scenes are beautifully written

Can't wait for the next update hope it's soon😛

Originally posted by: dhakarn

Thanks rekha 😳

hmmm...powerful , I don't know... as P has already seen K in 2 rather un-impressive circumstances... n I am giving a hint here , its going to get worse 😆 😉

Powerful because they way you will describe the scene will be wonderful. Your hint sounds very interesting just really looking forward to it. 😃