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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...!!!

At last Riya confessed... Hope Shaleen is alright... N hope the team is able to save the children...!!

Continue soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey everybody..

CHAPTER 23:

There were less than 10 minutes left in it. all looks at each other deciding what to do next.

Sr: sir kafi complicated type ke bomb hai. aur time bhi bohot kam.

Arj: pehle isse ek aise jagah lejathe hai jaha hum kuch kar sakthe hai.

They move to an outer region of the mela. Meanwhile Sree checks out from his sources how to diffuse it. it was really tricky and the time was running out.

Arj: hum theiry pe ab behas nahi kar sakthe. We need to act now. Sam team ko dur lejao.

Sam: nahi Arjun, ye ek team work. Lets do it together.

Arj: but Sam, its risky.

Sam: we don't care. Come on lets do it.

They observe the wires and take a quick decision and after spme silence they cut it. the timer beeped aloud and then stopped. They sighed together.

Sr: we did sir.

Arj: ha Sree, but our work is not over yet. Shakar, we need hi at any cost.

Sam: Sree trace him out.

Suddenly Arjun's phone rings. "hello Riya, bolo"

He listens for a while and goes pale and then cuts the call.

Sam: kya hua Arjun?

Arj: Sam… bhai ke haal bohot kharab hai !!!

Sam looked worried too. "Sree, tum aur Chotu Shekhar ko trace karne ke koshish karo. We'll join you soon enough.

They rush to the hotel were Shaleen was kept. Riya was sitting close to him on the bed rubbing his hands. He was totally pale and shivering. The sight was so bad. The guys rush to him and feel him. He was so cold.

Ri: sir, please kuch kijiye. Anti dose abhi bhi raste me hi hai. we need it urgently. Wo gadi kissi Rally me bhas gaye hai. inke haal bigadthe hi jarahe hai. abhi hode pehle saans lene me thakleef horahe the. Isliye oxygen mask lagaya. Thank God, Sree ke paas portable oxygen supply tha.

She was genuinely worried. Now Shaleen was totally of conscious.

Sam's phone rings. "ha Sree bolo. Are you sure.? Ok hum arahe hai!!"

Turns to Arjun. "Arjun Shakar ke patha chal gaya!!"

They look at the shivering and decides to go ahead to the team. They meet at a place mentioned by Sree and saw a warehouse. It was a bit crowded. Thanks to Chotu's back up team they were in good umbers. They walk in taking down the men. There was a huge firing and that lead to many casualities. But at the end they capture Shakhar. He still had his wicked smile on. "Akhir pakad hi liya. Lekin koi fayda nahi. Ek tho apke dost mar jayenge aur dsre wo jo dhamaka jo miene bathaya tha, wo tho pura hokar hi tahega."

Arjun pulls him by collar. "kuch nahi hoga, ab batha kaha hai wo jo tumne chupaye hai? bolo?"

He loses his fury and so does the team. At last Shekahr is not in a position to handle more. He is about to collapse.

Arj: bol, kya plan kiya hai tumne?

Shek:ladkiyan…bomb… kal sham ko…

He collapse. They are more confused now.

Arj: kahi na kahi girls ko chupaye hai aur bombs bhi wahi hai. so lets find out. Sree Chotu patha lagao ke mela ke aas paas aise koi jagah hai ke nahi.

They move out after arresting Shekhar.

Sr: sir paas me ek circus hai. waha kuch tents bhi hai. tho kahi..

Sam: ha hosaktha hai. lets see to it.

they were not given access first and at last they moved in stealthly. They search for every possible postions and they found them. a group of girls were drugged and tied up. They were guarded too. The ETF takes them down and search for the bombs. The bomb squads also takes up the role and finds many bombs here and there. The circus was the centre of attack. The case is solved bringing many innocent life to be safer.

They give the rest work to the police and again rush back to Shaleen. The injection had not yet arrived. He looked almost dead. Arjun sits by him. "bhai, please don't lose hope. We can do it. please don't give in. please…"

After a few minutes a group of men comes in with a doctor. He checks and gives a sad face. "zehar kaafi had thak phail chukke hai. lets see if its gonna work."

Before he could complete his words Sam grabs Doc's collar. "it should work… did you get me doc??"

Arjun pulls away Sam from the doc. "Doc, please continue… please…"

The doctor gives him the injection and he doesn't even respond to it. it took their hearts away. After a few minutes again, Shaleen jerks and start to breath heavily. Doc goes in to chack again and places back the oxygen mask.

After many troubled breath and cries, Shaleen settle. He is unconscious but still his color was coming back in his face.

Doc: khatre se tho bahar hai. lekin araam ke bohot zarori hai.

All give out a relieved gasp. Tears brimmed in Riya's eyes. Sree moves towards her and hugs her tight. All could see her crying on Sree's arms. Arjun and Sam looked at each other and smiled. They hadn't missed her looks at Shaleen before. And now they were happy for both of them.

Arjun and Sam walks out and each move to two different sides of the corridor. Thye take out the phone to speak to their love.

Arjun:

She picks up the phone in the first ring. "ARJUN…."

Arjun sighs at her voice. "mien teekh hu Roshni…."

Ros: thank god …. Thank god Arjun….

Arj: relax meri jaan, mien bikul teekh hu. Fikr math karo. Its over.

He could hear her prayer and sob, he closed his eyes hearing it…

Sameer:

Muskan was also close to the phone. "Sam… aap teekh tho hai na?"

Sam: ha Muski, I'm fine. sab teekh hai. bas bhai ko thode problem ahi.ab teekh hai bas behosh hai

Mus: thank god. Patha hai mujhe kithna dar lag raha tha, thank god aap sab safe hai.

Sam: I love you Muskan

Mus: love you too Sam. Don't worry. bhai will be safe.

They speak for a few more minute and also calls Raghu sir to inform about Shaleen. Choti was worried too for her brother and also for….

She felt something when she was away from everyone. She wished to be with them… always.

It was the by the dawn that Shaleen was stirring up. He opens his eyes and strains to adjust with the surroundings. He felt so weak. He looked around. Arjun was sleeping on the sigle sofa. Sam had rolled himself on the long one. Both looked like a baby. He smiled. And then he saw her. She was sleeping with her head on his bed while she sitting on the floor. She looked so tired. He remembered her words "I think I like you…."

Shaleen smiled again. "I think I like you too Riya…" he gently placed his arms on her cheeks. She mumbled in sleep.and then kept her hands on his hands holding it tight. She was still sleeping soundly.

He looked around. It was the beginning of a new life.


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Edited by kunchu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hai everyone... we know that you are looking for the precap.. so here it goes...
PRECAP: EPILOGUE...

yes you read it right... I know that you are upset with this line..but its true.
please read ahead to understand our reason for this decision.
Tum bin was the joint work from me and Payal... and without any one of us, it is incomplete...
our studies and exams are taking us to a stand were it becomes difficult to continue. My end sem thesis is about to take its final leap and her sem exams are coming up. we didn't want to leave it in half way. we wished to give it a beautiful ending...

we promise to give you a beautiful epilogue.. for the first ever ARNI FF of the forum, Tum bin...

We hope you understand our situation.
I know, stopping 2 FFs in almost the same week is very irritating. but I promise to continue Khamoshiyaan... though its a bit confusing yet...

and maybe I'll come with something spl soon too...

not yet finally decided... but on thought process...
Please don't be upset with us... if its hurting you .. then please understand its hurting me more... as this FF was too special for me.. or rather for us...

thank you all
Epilogue coming soon too...
Edited by kunchu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing part...It was a beautiful story! family entertainer and thriller one too!!

a fitting action filled end to a dhamakedar story!

loved the last bit where Shaleen hopes for a new beginning!

great job!

I understand your pressures...so all the best to both of u!

Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing fantastic wonderful story...
loved it so much...
this was one of my fav ff on forum...
You people had written it so beautifully...amazing concept
but feeling so sad that its ending so soon...
plz write New ffs when both of u 2 r done with ur exams...
best of luck for your exams n thanks payal for reminding me to unres..
Helna di n payal you both rock...
thanks again for such a beautiful story...
Edited by samiya.059 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
That was an awesome update!
I enjoyed reading it, the emotions were beautifully portrayed.
Awww..the story is gonna end soon, will miss this!
Waiting eagerly for the Epilogue!
Continue soon and thanks for the PM.
Edited by dmegha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update dear
as usual superb...
Exams r important
but promise that after exams u'l write more awesome stories.
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update :) loved it
i am glad they diffused the bomb on the right time
and finally they caught shekhar as well
riya was so worried for shaleen
thank god shaleen is fine :)
everyone realized that riya likes shaleen
love how arjun called roshni and sam called muskaan and told them that they are fine :)
and then the last scene was super cute :) riya was sleeping next to his bed and yes shaleen likes her as well 😃
even though i am so sad you are ending it 😭 it was one of my favorite FF's
this FF was very special to me as it was first Arni ff on this forum
but i absolutely understand your reason for ending it
studies are really important
wish both of you all the best for your exams
please make the epilogue real long one
a big hug for both of you for writing such a beautiful FF 🤗
eagerly waiting for epilogue
thanks for the pm
Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
but sad as the story is towards its end
hope you'll b back soon
thanks
happy holi
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
everyone is safe now
happy that shaleen decided to move on his life further
eagerly waiting for epilogue
cont soon

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