SS- Suicide- part 2,3,4,5,6,7,8 page 5,10,12,16,18,21,25 updated(30/04

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Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 12 years ago

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wow awesoome loved it superb...🤣

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Buddy you are too Good.Main toh cell phone pe update padhke aise hasi,ke mom bhi shock ho gayi,that what happened to me suddenly.

The nano second I realised that Geet is gonna jump off the tree branch,I jst cant stop laughing.And the disarter struck as she jumped in front of Maan's jeep and to top that Maan himself was thrown over her!!!!!

Oh God I cud jst die laughing.

Cont. soon buddy.And You really seem to keep your fingers in all pies-Mystery bhi,comedy bhi...wats next buddy!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: sweetsampa39
Buddy you are too Good.Main toh cell phone pe update padhke aise hasi,ke mom bhi shock ho gayi,that what happened to me suddenly.

The nano second I realised that Geet is gonna jump off the tree branch,I jst cant stop laughing.And the disarter struck as she jumped in front of Maan's jeep and to top that Maan himself was thrown over her!!!!!

Oh God I cud jst die laughing.

Cont. soon buddy.And You really seem to keep your fingers in all pies-Mystery bhi,comedy bhi...wats next buddy!!!!

Wow 😆
I think this is the best comment i have got for this SS. 👍🏼
Aur has has ke hi sahi , par marne ki baat bhi na karna. 😡
Phir mere stories pe comment kaun karega.😉

And talking about next story . I am thinking of writing a dark story after finishing suicide.😊

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AKSashadow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Thesaurus
wow awesoome loved it superb...🤣

Thanks

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AKSashadow

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part 3

Pressing the brake maan was able to stop jeep but can't stop himself and thrown out of car. He landed straight on geet with her body beneath him. Maan was enjoying the comfort which he was getting on geet but putting that mood aside. He opened his eyes and stared deep in her eyes -"Tum !! Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?

"Aapke niche dabi padi hoon."-geet said very innocently .

Maan realised that he was still lying on top of her. He quickly got up and looked away embarrased.

Here geet extended her hand for help but on not getting any response from maan she complained-" Ek to aapne mujh par kud kar meri 206 haddiyo ka churan bana diya aur ab meri madad bhi nahi kar rahe."

At that statement maan looked on geet and took her extended hand to help. She standup on her feet and was looking for scratches in her palm and elbow -"Akhir humari pichli mulakat ka badla le hi liya na aapne, maan."

His name caught maan's attention. Who is she and how does she know his name. Geet too realised that she had speak too much.

Maan looked at her questioning- " Who are you and how do you know me?"

Geet tried to say something but fumbled-"wo.., wo... Maan darasal..."

Seeing her fumbling like this Maan got flashes of the time when he was 12 year old and met a scared and innocent girl of age around 9 year old.

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PAST

A small girl was crying sitting on bank of river. Maan was going to swim in river but watching her decided to know 'why she was crying?'

As maan reached her. He cleared his throat to gain her attention but on not getting any response placed his hand on her shoulder.

The girl stopped at once. She looked up scared and moved back little. Then ran away from there.

Next day he again saw her. He was swimming at that time. She was crying again.

He swam and came out of water. He looked at her and said-"hi"

Geet looked up and wiped her tears.
Maan was waiting for response but all he got was her silence.

"My name is maan and yours?"- Maan said trying his best to get her response.

Geet got up at once and said fumbling-"Wo.. Wo.. darasal mujhe jana hai."-and walk away hurriedly.

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Edited by AKSashadow - 12 years ago

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-gurtimaniac-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

awesome update dear

Geet know Maan name n Maan goes in the flashback

but y Geet is doing suicide???

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Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

wow awesome upd.loved it...superb...

so maaneet have met in d past...

but how geet recognised him?

cont.soon...it was very short...

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AKSashadow

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: -gurtimaniac-
awesome update dear

Geet know Maan name n Maan goes in the flashback

but y Geet is doing suicide???

Thanks
And about reason of suicide I think It will take 2 or 3 updates to reveal

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krati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

oh to geet knew maan... she is dng ds to gain his attention😉 chalu cheez hai😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: krati5
<font color="#6600cc" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">oh to geet knew maan... she is dng ds to gain his attention😉 chalu cheez hai😆</font><div></div>

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Sorry to disappoint you, but geet's both meeting to maan was accidental.