An AsYa OS : MISS YOU :

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hey all the lovely people.
i am backo with an OS. its the lamest i could manage. hope you can bear reading this.



OS : Miss you


Zoya hum ye kya kar rahe hain??"

"Allah Miyaah !!! app ek min chup nahi reh sakte?"

"Kisi ne dekh lia tou izzaat ka falooda ban jaye ga !"

"Kitne darpok hain app, yahan mey mar rahi hoon aur app ko izzat ki pari hai. Chalo now lift me up."

"Bhaijan mera khoon pii jayein gey, mujhe maaf kar do Zoya bi", Ayaan was scared like a kid.

"Arrey mujhe kis kambakkht kutte ne kataa tha jo mey app ki baton mey agai . app hi aye the mere pas apne bhai ka dukhra lekar", Zoya replied blaming him for everything.

"Haan haan mujhe yaad hai, who kambakht kutta mey hi hoon. Chalein ab upar". Ayaan said sulkily.

"Wohi tou mey bhi keh rahi hoon chalein", zoya was getting on to his nerves.

"Mujhe tou bahut practice hai khidki se andar jane ki, but kisi larki k sath choron ki tarha pehli baar hai", Ayaan said adjusting his collar high.

"Agar phoophhi and najma ghar par hoti tou mey main door ziyada prefer karti, ayaan miyah".

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She was just about to go out in the hall and wait for Mr khan there, when a ruffled and huffed up Asad barged in the room. He saw her standing besides his bed, he placed his bag on its usual place and sat down on the couch looking at her exasperated.

He is not saying anything to me, is he alright?? Zoya thought, as she had never seen Asad so calm and quiet with her.

"Mr Khan", she said to get his attention.

"don't talk to me right now, I am in a bad mood, and if I scream then you will disappear from my imagination too, as you have from my home",

What the ??? he thinks of me as a figment of his imagination, zoya was astonished and secretly glad that he imagined her to be around him.

"kya hua Mr Khan", she asked again after a few minutes.

"app bht ziddi hain zoya", he replied

Yes because there aint a thing I cant fix, I would be glad to be of help", she said joyfully

Asad loosened his tie and said "I was missing you, so now fix this"

"what?" was the only syllable she could utter.

"kyn zoya kyn, app mujhe chor kar chali gayi?? Mera pura din app ki ehsas mey guzar jata hai, ghar lootne ki jaldi hoti hai kyn k yahan k yahan har taraf app ki khusboo bassi hui hai", he confessed his emotional turmoil to his imagined Zoya.

Zoya stood like a statue, she couldn't believe her ears that these words came from Mr Khan, the ruthless arrogant heartless man was missing her, he was talking about ehsas and khushboo. Her heart was somersaulting. ye meri copy kar rahe hain, like i used to watch out for every glimpse of him, his scent, hayeee Zoya tere jahapanh ko Ishq ho gaya hai.

He got up and flicked on the lights, and the darkened area of the room came into light, one side of the wall was devoted to her pictures with najma, obviously it would have been too controversial for Asad to have her pictures only, so najma was just a 'bahana".

"kash app ne ye sb pehle kaha hota tou ye din na dekhna parta Mr Khan", she said, she would have never left him or his home. she would have confronted hima bout her feelings but she was scared of rejection, but now Mr Khan had pulled down all veils from his heart and it was all hers.

"Yes you are right zoya", he sighed "kash!!!! Laikin agar hum juda na hote tou shayad mujhey kabhi app ki kami mehsoos nahi hoti, aur na hi kabhi apni mohabbat ka ehsas hota. Ye sirf app hain zoya, app jis ne iss pathar k dil ko moom ka khilona bana dia"

He started to move towards her, when somewhere a dog began to bark, breaking the entire romantic aura. "aaj kal har jagah awara and badtameez kutte ghoomte rehte hain", said Asad irritated by the interruption to his mood.

Zoya face palmed k "jahapanah even wants the dog to be tameezdar, huh"

Ayaan fainted hearing such words from his Bhaijaan. But he had to signal ZOya about his departure, because he couldn't bear to be a kabab mey haddi anymore, no matter how much he giggled and wriggled witnessing such a scene, he could tease his Bhaijaan forever, but then they needed some privacy too.

Asad stood with his back towards Zoya when he heard the three magical words: I LOVE YOU too Mr Khan". He turned around in surprise; he moved his hand forward to cup her face but stopped inches away, thinking that the mirage would disappear.

Zoya sensed his hesitation and decided it was time to come out of the fantasy mode and have an ultimate face off. She held his hand put it on her heart so that he could feel her erratic heart beat and know that she was in the room for real.

His eyes widened in shock, he couldn't believe she was for real. He pulled away his hand as if scorched.

" I am here Asad", Zoya said quietly and Asad crushed her into a passionate embrace.



so people do let me know how bakwas it is.. 😳😳 as ts my first attempt at an OS, its bound to suck.

eggs tomatoes are welcome, never hesitate 😆

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WaqtZaya thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

un res

Dil ko dil ki raah hoti hai, you will know why i said that after reading my OS. 😆 😆

All i can say is, WAIT for mine. 😆 😆

This was Suppa Cute. 😳

The doggy thingy 🤣

Appi that was sooo 🤣 🤣

haiyee haiyee! 😳 😳 😳 😳

See Appii i was right, all our Writers Blockage go the moment Mitwas come in our way 🤣

Again, its sad that you are as lazy as me, cause i dont get to read much of you. 😆 😆

and Ayaan! *COLLARS UP* 🤣


Laoo you soo much Appii meri. :X v🤗

and yeaa, wait for mine, cause you will know why, i said Dil ko Dil ki Raah hoti hai, 😳




Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 12 years ago
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un res kar ditta! FB GAY HAI IF NAHI!! Why doesnt IF got a chat service UFFHH
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh man, this was so beautiful. I loved it. I guess dis needed in the serial too. I mean Zoya going away from Asad will make him realize wat she means to him.
u shud cont writing on AsYa, u're a wonderful writer n add me to ur pm list for future os too.
love,
Nimra.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww so sweet...Asad thought he was imagining her...
was it Ayaan who barked to signal her...so cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rarepearl

oh man, this was so beautiful. I loved it. I guess dis needed in the serial too. I mean Zoya going away from Asad will make him realize wat she means to him.

u shud cont writing on AsYa, u're a wonderful writer n add me to ur pm list for future os too.
love,
Nimra.


thank you for liking it.. yes yes we definitely need some Asya-licious moments and confessions in the show too, but that's a long shot. till then we have the fan fics to portray our dreams 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: neenabinu

aww so sweet...Asad thought he was imagining her...

was it Ayaan who barked to signal her...so cute


yes it was Ayaan barking to signal zoya 😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

res


un res

Dil ko dil ki raah hoti hai, you will know why i said that after reading my OS. 😆 😆

All i can say is, WAIT for mine. 😆 😆

This was Suppa Cute. 😳

The doggy thingy 🤣

Appi that was sooo 🤣 🤣

haiyee haiyee! 😳 😳 😳 😳

See Appii i was right, all our Writers Blockage go the moment Mitwas come in our way 🤣

Again, its sad that you are as lazy as me, cause i dont get to read much of you. 😆 😆

and Ayaan! *COLLARS UP* 🤣


Laoo you soo much Appii meri. :X v🤗

and yeaa, wait for mine, cause you will know why, i said Dil ko Dil ki Raah hoti hai, 😳





Allah Miyah !! ankiewa you are lazy seriously, then also manage to make one or two posts everyday, thats a cool type of laziness. 😳👏

yes this is my line "dil ko dil se rah hoti hai" n m waiting for your OS. its all because of you iw rote this last night, as i wanted to know how to write an OS,.😳

and agreeed that mitwas can remove writers block away and throw it in the deep sea 😆

and thanks for liking it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it!! Can you continue your SS??

aaj kal har jagah awara and badtameez kutte ghoomte rehte hain", said Asad irritated by the interruption to his mood.

🤣

I SO WANT THAT DIALOGUE IN THE SHOW!!
Edited by princessjojo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Cute os :-) please pm me when you write something new

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