Holi OS Challenge: Yadon ke rang...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey everyone!!!
So Aliya came up with this brilliant idea of OS based on holi... so here I come...
will be posting as 2 parts as I had to write a whole episode on it...
hope you like and enjoy...
so here's the first part...

YADON KE RANG...


Terrace of a building:

A girl in white kurta and blue jeans walking in unsteady steps. She miss her slips once in a while but hold on to the railing. Her head is heavy. She could feel stinging sensation on her arms and shoulder. She touches it gently and winces in pain. Her eyes are blurry with tears. She walks to the end of the terrace. She looks down, its not at all clear. the tears were flowing nonstop from her eyes.

Same time: below the building:

All are enjoying well. Its holi after all. All are putting colors on each other. Some are throwing colored water and also water balloons at each other. Drinks are served with some amount of bhang also added in some.

The party is interrupted with a loud shriek of a girl. All rush to the area.

The girl who was above the terrace is dead on the floor with blood spattered around her head.

***

Sometime later, an SUV pulls up in front of the building, ie, St. John's college, where a holi party have been changed to a death ground. 2 men and a lady walk in with their majestic stride towards the spot. One among them pulls out his glares and shoves it to his shirt. The other two are pulling in the gloves to their hands. "Sree, ab thak kya khabar hai?" the Chief had his command tone.

Sr: sir, victim ke naam hai, Sanya Gupta. Issi college ke Computer Science department ka first year student thi. Aaj yaha holi celebrations me ayi thi. Lekin beech me ye gayab hui. Sab party me enjoy kar rahe the aur yaha inke mauth hogayi. Lagtha hai, issi terrace ke upar se giri hai. hum waha jane wale hi hai.

Arj: inke kisike saath kuch jhagda ya kuch aur?

Sre: abhi thak kuch patha nahi hai sir. Bas ithna patha hai ke, kafi popular thi. Aur bohot jald ye koi student exchange program me London ke ek bade university me jane wali thi.

Sam: Liza, anything you can add on?

Liza: sir, body me idhar udhar chot hai, jaise koi zor se pakda ho. no external sign of any serious violence. Lekin kafi bhang ke smell hai. looks like she was not in her full conscious. Baki ke reports keliye autopsy karni hogi.

Sam: ok go for it.

Liza arranges to take the body to the lab. A girl is found weeping in a side. Aisha goes to her. "Excuse me. Please control yourself. Can you help us with this case? Kya aap Sanya ko janthi thi?"

She nods yes. Arjun and Sameer moves to her.

Girl: Sanya meri best friend thi.

Ais: aur apke naam?

Girl: Gauri khanna.

Ais: ok Gauri, bolo when did you see her last?

Gau: mam, wo... hum sab neeche enjoy kar rahe the. Beech me usse ek call ayi. Aur fir wo party se thode dur gaye. Gautam bhi uske piche gaye the. Lekin fir wo kuch kaha aur Gautam wapas party me aya aur Sanya building ke aur gaye. She looked a bit upset.

Arj: ye Gautam kaun hai?

Gau: Gautam, Sanya ka BF hai. bohot pyaar karthe hai wo ek dusre se. Sanya ko iss hal me dekhne ke baad wo bilkul tuut gaye hai. pagal hogaye the wo. Chilla rahe the. Sab bohot koshish kiya usse sambhalne me. Patha nahi ab wo sab kaise sehpayega. I'm really worried for him.

Arjun notice a change in her face when she spoke about him.

Arj: tho ab Gautam kaha hai?

Gau: after all those crying and shouting wo behosh hogaya. He is now in hospital. Stable hai, lekin abhi bhi behosh hai.

Sam: ok lets check the tearrace.

They reach the terrace and search. They find an earring that was worn by Sanya. And later Sree calls out. In a corner was a paper. They read it. it was typed and not handwritten.

Sorry, its over. Mien jarahi hu... Sanya

Sam: it's a suicide note.

Arj: ithne jaldi kuch nateeje me math pohoncho Rathod. It can even be planted here. Koi suicide karthe waqt aise print outs rakhna... aur wo bhi bhang ke nashe me... kuch ajeeb tho nahi hai na? aur wo hathapayi ke nishan jo Liza ne mention kiya tha. We cant ignore it.

Sam : (glaring) ok then aur puchthach karthe hai.

They go down and ask again. A name comes forward. Siva. He is a senior who was taunting Sanya form day 1 in the college. And as a coincidence, he was missing from the college now.

Arj: Chotu patha lagao ke ye Siva ahi kaha. Mujhe uske sare details chahiye. Sree, check Sanya calls. Patha lagao ke wo last call kaha se hai. Aisha, try to get more info about Sanya.

Sam: aur hum do, hospital chalthe hai. Gautam se milne.

All nods and try to leave. Arjun walks into the party area again while Sam speaks and accidently knocks a tray of colors that was held on a big stand. It falls with red colored dust filling the air. All look at him in between the colors. He was just looking at the colors when he meets Sam's eye which was on him again. They look at each other sharing many unsaid words. Suddenly Arjun breaks the eyelock and walks away. Sameer follows him to the SUV.

***

Hospital:

Gautam was awake and was feeling terrible. Tears were flowing from his eyes. Arjun and Sameer knocks and get in. they feel bad to see his state. He tries to sit up and Sameer helps him too.

Sam: I know you are not in a state to discuss, but stil we need your help. Do you anyone who could have done this?

Gautham: sab mere galthi hai. she wanted a quite holi with just me and her. Par meine hi zid kiya tha, ke London jane se pehle ye celebration me bhag le. After all it was friends time na? but she needed just to be with me.

He cries out. Arjun feel a lot of pain now. he walks to Gautham. "kabhi kabhi kuch aise bathen hothe hai, jo dil ko bohot hi chu lethe hai. usse yadien banake jeena seekho. Zindagi abhi bohot choti hai tumhare. You will have to live"

Sam looks at Arjun when he said it.

Gaut: ji sir, koshish zaroor karunga.

Sam: do you know if she had any enemies?

Gaut: waise tho koi nahi the sir. She was really sweet. Par wo Siva usse kafi disturb kartha tha. She was really pissed off from him.

Sam: aur wo phone call kiske the?

Gaut: patha nahi. She didn't tell me. Bas ithna kaha tha ke washroom hoke athe hai. but she never came back.

He was crying again. Sam assures him and walks out with Arjun. the ride to the office was a silent one.

ETF discussion room:

Arj: wo phone call ke bare me kya kabar hai?

Sre: sir, call Siva ke number se the, lekin abhi wo switched off hai. usse dead body dekhne ke baad kisine nahi dekha hai.

Sam: Aisha, Sanya ke bare me bathao.

Ais: as we know she was a bright and popular students. Sabke sath ache barthav bhi the. Best friend was Gauri. Sanya ke parents Delhi me hai, aur bade businessmen bhi hai. they are on their way to Mumbai.

Liza walks in. "sir, death se pehle usse zabardasti me bhang wala drinks pilayi hai. wo chot ussi ka hai. no sign of molesting. Bhang ke amount kafi zyada bhi hai. aur death wo girne se hi hue hai.

Chotu comes in now. "Sir, Siva ka location patha chal gaya. Wo R. K housing colony me hai. aur waha ab holi celebrations ho rahi hai!

All reach the colony. Full on celebrations were going on. There was color in the air. They moved in thereby soaking in the colors. At last they spot Siva. Arjun and sam chase him for a while and later catch him up and brings to the interrogation room.

Interrogation room:

Sam slapped Siva hard. "abhi bol raha hu, sach batha. Why did you kill her?

Siv: sir I swear I didn't kill her. Ha ye sach hai, ke meine hi wo message kiya tha. Aur meine hi usse bhang wali drinks pilaya tha. But I didn't kill her. Trust me.

Arj: tho fir ye sab kiya hi kyu? Why where you harassing her?

Siv: sir, jabhi koi fresher athe hai, tho pranks tho hothe hi na? I too did it. but usne mujhe thappad mara. Mien bas usse bhnag wali drinks dekar uske badla lena wala tha. I never thought of doing any harm. Mien tho bas usse nashe ke saath sab ke samne lana chahatha tha. Thaki sab uske mazak uthaye. Nothing more. it was just a prank.

All ask again still his answer was the same.

Discussion room:

Sam: dammit!! Ye kithna jhoot bol raha hai!! he killed her.

Arj: nahi Rathod. He didn't kill her. Ha, maana ke wo drink usne pilaya hai. lekin he didn't kill her.

Sam: kehna kya chahthe ho tum?

Arj: socho, agar wo marne hi wala tha, tho wo suicide note kaha se aye?

All start to think on it. yes they had indeed missed that point.

Cho: patha nahi, ek choti se prank ithna bhi bada asar chodthe hai

Arj: kabhi kuch pranks is kadar girthi hai Chotu, ke wo mehsoos karne walon ko bohot gehra chot lagtha hai.

Arjun shares an eyelock with Sameer. There was an intensity in it. but someone else had similar eyelock too... Sree and Liza.

Sam looked down. Was there a guilt in his eyes?

Arj: Sree, chalo mere saath we need to speak to Gauri again.

Sree was more than willing to leave the room. He sprints behind Arjun. that leaves Liza in thoughts.



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Posted: 12 years ago
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SUV:

Arjun and Sree was lost in their own thoughts.

Arjun's POV:

He was annoyed. It was holi and his 2 BFFs have vanished away. He was frustrated and opened the TV. It was showing holi celebrations all over. He off the tv and throws the remote to the sofa.

"Ane do un dono ko. Roshni… usse apne saheli ko uske BFs se milwane gayi hai. yaha koi uske wait kar rahe hai, iske koi chinta nahi. Aur wo gadha Sam, usse bhi aaj hi ghar jana tha. Acha khasa holi tha. Sab bigaad diya. Ane do, I wont speak to them."

As if answering his thoughts, his phone rang. It was from Roshni. A smile crept his lips. "hello… ab agayi madam ko mere yaad!!!"

Ros: Arjun…. help…please…

Arjun stands up immediately. "Roshni, kya hua? Kaha ho tum??"

Rosh: Arjun.. mien.. college…help pls…. aaah…."

The phone cuts now. "hello?? Roshni?? Hello??" he barks. He dials again. But the phone was switched off. He takes his keys and rushes to the college in his bike as a maniac.

He reaches the college. It looked empty. "ROSHNI…." He screams aloud. He runs through the corridor screaming her name. and at last he found her. She was lying at the end of the staircase. She was in her white salwar. And near to her abdomen was red. It looked as if she was bleeding. He rushes to her and pulls her to his lap. She was not in her sense. "Roshni. Ankhen kholo. Please… Roshni…."

He tries to wake her up. But she dosent. He feels her pulse. It looked ok. But she was not getting up. He hugs her to his chest, "Roshni please utho…" his tears were soaking her hair.

Suddenly from nowhere a huge amount of water falls on them from above. He jerks and looks around. He was soaked in red color. He looks up to see Sam grinning at him with an empty bucket. "bura na mano… holi hai…!!!"

Roshni gets up from his arms and laughs aloud. "WOW Arjun, you so cute now!!! haye…."

He was fuming now. he looks at them with a lot of anger. They were dying laughing at him. He gets up and walks away in fast pace. That diminished Sam's and Roshni's smile.

Arjun walks away. He felt like hitting something hard. How could they play with his feeling like this?? He walks to the fence and holds on to the sharp edge hurting himself to control his anger. He feels them behind him. "Arjun…." came her soft voice. He just closed his eyes holding tight on the fence. He could feel the pain and also blood oozing from there. But it was nowhere close to what he felt at heart.

"Arjun…" now it was Sam. He turns sideways facing Sam, still clutching the fence.

Sam: sorry yaar. Mazak kar raha tha.

Arj: mazak huh?? Ye mazak lagtha hai tumhe? Isse tho akal nahi hai, tum bhi iske saath diya Sam?? How disgusting??

Ros: Arjun…please I'm sorry. Ha, it was my idea. Please maaf karo.

He was not even looking at her. He pressed hard on to the fence. "for your both info, it really hurt!! Ye mazak kuch zyada hi tha… how could you…??" his voice chocked. Roshni looks at his hand that was on the fence. She rushes to him and pulls his hands away. It was covered with blood. "Arjun ye kya ?? ithne khoon?? Pagal hogaye ho kya?? Chalo doctor ke paas"

She tries to pull him, but he takes away his hands and looks at her angry. He then walks off from there, leaving Sam with Roshni.

Sree's POV:

It was almost noon. He was completing his assignment. Someone knocks his room. He opens it. it was a peon. "tumhe principle bula rahe hai!!"

He walks to the cabin, on the way he sees a bunch of boys and girls having funny faces.

Boy: dekho kisiko princi ne bulaya hai.

Girl: shayad home work na kiya hoga. Isliye bula rahe hai!!

Girl: shayad isse bhi badi bath hoge!!!

He looks at the girl who said the last line. The college diva Liza D'Cruse. She gave him a naughty wink and he walked to the office. princi looked really pissed off. He gulped.

Pri: how dare you Sreekant? Ek bar first position se 2nd aye aur ye harkat ki tumne. Ke tum mujhe mail karoge? Aur wo bhi ithne gandhe?? How could you do it?? I had hopes on you Sreekant and you broke it today.

Sre: ye aap kya keh rahe hai mam? Meine kya kiya?

Prin: don't you give that looks to me. After half an hour board members arahe hai, to decide on your actions. Wait outside till that time.

He tried to say something, but she didn't allow. He stood outside the corridor all tensed. He didn't know what was happening. The bunch of boys and girls again came in his way. They looked at him.

Boy: oye… specky tho rone wale hai!!!

Girl: oh… rona darling…

Sree: SHUT UP... AND LEAVE ME!!

But she was silent. Somewhere she felt something was wrong. The board members arrive and then a peon comes again. "tumhe hearing keliye bula rahe hai!!"

All the boys and girls are silent now. they knew it was out of the hands now. Sree looks at them with lot of pain and walks in.

Inside everyone was firing him with abuse. His eyes were full. He didn't know how to convince them. suddenly everyone's mobile buzz together. All stop for a while and looks at the message. He didn't know what was happening again.

Prin: it seems someone really want to save you. The message says that you are innocent. It is done by someone else. Naam tho nahi hai. aur kisine tumhara mail hack karke bheja hai.

Sre: I swear mam, meine aise kuch nahi kiya.

Pri: we'll try to look into it again. And try to prove that who hacked your mail. You are an expert in IT. so get me results soon.

He walks out with teary eyes. The team was again there. He looks at them with rage and walks off. He checks everything and find someone named 'prankster' had done it. he submitted every report and was cleared of all doubts. But what he had to hear hurt him a lot.

***

They reached Gauri's home.

Arj: tum Gautam ko kaise janthe ho?

Gau: he is my friend from day 1. Mien, Sanya aur Gautam. BFF.

Arj: aur Gautam Sanya se pyaar karthe the.

She is silent and nods yes.

Arj: aur tum??

She looks shocked. "nahi sir… we.. were… just friends…"

Arj: was there any fights between you and Sanya?

Gau: ya aap kya puch rahe hai?? we were friends. Is that clear. Now please leave me alone.

Arjun looks at her and walks out. "Sree, mujhe Gauri ke bare me sare info chahiye"

Sre: yes sir.

***

ETF Discussion room:

Sree comes and gives some papers to Arjun , Sameer and Aisha.

Sam: hm, tho ye bath hai! Aisha bring her in!

Aisha brings Gauri to the interrogation room.

Ais: jis student exchange prog me Sanya jane wale the, usme tum bhi jane wale the right?

She nods yes.

Ais: par last moment pe cancel hua. Kyu?

Gau: kyunki mujhe wo scholarship nahi mile the. I didn't have enough money.

Ais: par Sanya ke paas thi.

Gau: Sanya ke papa ke paas bohot paisa hai. she can afford it.

Arj: par tum us prog keliye bohor mehnat bhi kithi. Right?

Gau: jaan lagadi thi. Par, wo kam thi…

Ais: aur ye ek wajah thi kisike jaan lene keliye!!!

Gau: (shocked) what??

Sam: you lost that prog because Sanya had a lot of connections. Tum jalthe the usse!!

Gau: no… ye galtha hai!!

Ais: tho fir tum ye kyu notice diya tha princi ko, ke Sanya ke application me jo likha hai, wo fake hai? you tried your best not let her go. Aur jab wo jaane lage tho tumse dacha nahi gaya right??

Gau: no… ha ye sab meine kiya hai!! but that was not enough for me to kill her.

Arjun moves close to her. "teekh kaha tumne. Prog gaye, tum seh liya. Tumhare paas paise nahi the. Tum sehliya. Par… jab tumhare pyaar bhi gaye… thab seh nahi paya na??

All looked at him shocked. Even Gauri. Tears fill her eyes and she cries out aloud.

Gau: ha nahi she payi. So I killed her. She got everything she wanted. Aur mien hamesha piche hi thi. She was good to me. Jo chahiye dethi thi. Kabhi koi kami nahi thi. But I was back of her. Aur jab Gautam ne usse propose kiya, I was dead. I lost everything. Every damn thing. So I kiiled her. Siva ne usse drinks pilayi thi. Wo hosh me nahi thi. Meine hi usse Dhaka diya. Wo note bhi meine hi rakhi thi. Thaki aap confuse hojaye. I did it!!!

All were silent at the confession.

Arj: tum jo kiya wo galath hi hai Gauri. Chahe tum kitne bhi safayi de. Aisha take her.

She takes her away. He looks at the retreating back for a while. and then puts on his glass, grabs his gun and walks away. Sameer looks at him walking away.

Sameer POV:

He kept on looking Arjun when he walked away with that bleeding hand. Roshni was weeping bitterly. He goes to her.

Ros: kyu Sam?? It was just a prank! Usse ithne kyu gussa aya?

Sam: because he loves you Roshni. He cant see you hurt. Aur jo hum dono ne kiya, it was a bit too much. Ab jao, manao usse. Hath me bandage lagao and take him to a hospital. Usse tetanus ke injection lagane hai. go now.

She wipes her tears and walks in Arjun's direction.

Now:

Sam's POV: patha hai, uss prank ne tumhe bohot dard diya tha. And you forgave us too. But ab jo dard hum dono ek dusre ko derahe hai, patha nahi ye kab chale jayega.

He walks to his cabin.

Liza was in his lab. "I know Sree, uss din ke baad tum mujhse nafrat karthe ho. again I never knew all this would happen. But I'm sure tum mujhe ek din maaf zaroor karoge"

Arjun was driving to the beach. He stood at the seashore watching the sunset. He could feel her near to him, holding his hands. Her head was on his shoulder. She was cuddling close to him. "happy holi Arjun…" she whispered for him.

"happy holi meri jaan… miss you Roshni… really miss you…"



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Edited by kunchu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dear dis one was seriously terrific

loved d chapter

thank u so much for d chapter

i was missing arjun n now happy atleast kuch holi special read kiya

too gud

loved d case ...d interrogation

OMG arni Flashbacks ...were awesum

n so was shriza Flashbacks

both shree n arjun still had d pain in dere hearts ...bec of those pranks

sumtimes pranks can actually hurt sum 1 very badly

HUGS for u


Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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My holi challenge di...
arni only evil grin
hatke
on song
aaj na chodenge!..
khelenge hum holi
chalo ur time starts nw i want tom..
all d best di yay!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Everything was just SUPERB.
Loved it.
Read both the parts in one go.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow i am speechless👏
just mindblowing at the end!
Arni fbs,case,introgation..amazing!

THANKS FOR writing!
Edited by aliya_begh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanx 4 pm me
it is swt lovelyyyos
happy holi dr
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
Awww Girl its superb...
The case was mast.
While the case was being solved u showed the lives of ETF members..
The flashbacks were awesome..
Kudos to u girl..
Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Amazing and awesome. Loved it to bits!
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Hello di
seems like u r very influenced by school n clg life rofl...
holi ki os me bi rula diya nt fair hmm!!
pranks well i like it in a limit...
sam rosh prank was too much
case super interesting!!
last words made me sob n i mean it di
p.s. want my os ch long one
love u di..
tc...
yadein hamesha yad ati h...

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