virman NEW ff LINMFA * teaser pg 142 * 15 jan 2014 - Page 51

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Posted: 12 years ago
Naina superb update ⭐️⭐️.. Very well written 👏👏.. Dont know from where to start but I loved everything 😛.. Virat's passion for Manvi is a treat to read.. He is making plans to stop Manvi from leaving instead of thinking about Maya!!! Wow 😃.. Manvi-Kabir convo was very good.. Manvi is just crazy about Kabir.. And thats something fresh.. She is ready to leave her di and partner for Kabir.. Quite shocking but Im liking it 😉.. Really eager to know whats gonna happen next.. Thank you for this update Naina.. Good luck for your exams 👍🏼.. Take care 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome...like all ways...thnk god i notice that u updted...any ways come to the point...loved manvi n kabirs convo...poor virat felt bad fr him...awww he even kissed her...shooo cute...any ways all the best fr ur exams do well...dont take tension abt it we will wait...take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww... nainaji...that was really one sweet update..
the way virat reacted on manvi's leave news was fab... i looved his stubborn side... i hope he succeed in stoping her...
u have exams naina... oh then... BEST OF LUCK DEAR:)
do welll... loads of love ...shilpa:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
virat apni frend ke liye itna possessiveness dikha raha hai
Haye kya dosti hai 😉


Kabir mein mujhe kuch gadbad lag raha hai manvi ke liye theek nai hai hata do usse 🤣

Naina nice update
Specially virat ne jo manvi ko kaha full of emotions
Nd viren ne jo kiya i like tht
And virat manvi ko itne haq se rok raha hai
Par am sure woi nai manegi

Exams ke liye all the best 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Naina...👏👏👏...really loved every bit of it...😃...especially virat restlessness...
😉...hayee...kya bechani hai...aakir uskaa partner jaa rahaa hai naa...😳...love the bedroom scene...virat kissed on manvi forehead...awwn...😳...manvi toh kabir ki dewaani hai...😃...waah kya love tirangle hai...😉...virat manvi ko rokne keliyee kuch bhi kareegaa...😃...really looking forward for next update ...thank u so much for the pm...N good luck for the exams🤗
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Edited by yaminnthida - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
*sigh* finally i've read that one too...
it was somewhat like the serial... but it has some new twists 😊😊
😊
after reading it i've found that i had missed many scenes 😆😆😆😆
this story is amazing as welll👏👏👏👏

sb will not stop interferinf na 😲😲😲
manvi being a matchmaker here too 😳😳😳

so kabir is the twist in the story...manvi n kabir's convo were so cutee⭐️⭐️⭐️
but wat is this nainu...virat n maya are united but no problem... they are tou temporary na 😉😉😉
ow virat was worried for manvi when she broke down but he wont force her to tell the truth but gave her some space... that was so nyc of him 😊😊😊
hmm virat is developing feelings for manvi...hope he will realise soon...!!! but wat would be his reaction wen he'll come to know about kabir...???
i guess he is gonna help manvi n will support him and will suppress his own feelingxx...for that we have to wait n read 😆😆😆😆
see IF had made me so predictable n i've started imagining 😃😃😃

hey naina that was so sweet of u that u gavee us an update that too in ur examss...thank u sooo much dear 😊😊😊
u dont need stress urself 4 the updates...we can wait na..
u just focus on ur studies now...best of luck ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update naina
Luved it to the core
Luved virat reaction when he get to noe maanvi is leaving
Luved the bedroom scene between virman
Maanvi and kabir convi is very cute
I hope virat succeded in making maanvi stop
Updte soon
Good luck fr ur exams
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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER 12

manvi got up, freshened up and went to beeji's room.
manvi : beeji... main taiyaar hoon... hum kab nikal rahe hain...??? (beeji... i am ready... when are we leaving...??)
beeji : putar train ki ticket hi nahi mili... hum kaise jayege...?? (beta we didnt get he train tickets... how will we go...???)
manvi got worried listening this because now she couldnt think of being away from kabir.
manvi : toh... toh we can go by road... by car...
beeji : yes we can... but...
manvi : dont worry i will talk to jeeju... he will make the arrangements...
beeji : okk... go n talk to viren...
manvi went to viren n asked him to make the needed arrangements...
viren : saali sahiba dnt worry... when jiju is here not to fear... i have already made the arrangements... baburam is waiting for u all... get ready manvi...
manvi : i am all set jiju... thanks... but take care of di... she is alittle emotional emotional...
viren : little...??? anyways she is my personal FM... i will handle her...
manvi : yes you are always there for my di...
viren : always...
virat : manvi...
manvi : aa gya sadu... jiju are you sure ye apka hi bhai hai...
viren : haan haan mera hi hai... 100%
manvi giggled in reponse and looked at virat who was staring at her...
manvi : partner...
virat : why are you bent on going...??? why are you being so stubborn...???
manvi : copy paste...
virat : manvi i am serious...
manvi : so am i...
virat : u really wanna go partner...???
manvi made a cout pout and nodded her head in positive...
virat sighed and smiled and said " hmm... okk go... but on one condition...?? "
manvi : manjoor hai... (i agree...)
virat : i will go to drop to you... thats it...
manvi : bas itni si baat... done...
virat : chal jaldi se ready ho ja... mere paas faaltu time nahi hai...
manvi : hehe... haan ok...

after some time
the chaudharys were ready to leave, manvi was meeting everybody and virat was just looking at her but still praying to god for any miracle to happen last minute...
" hey... "
everybody turned around and saw maya standing at the doorstep...
virat : maya...???
maya : hey... i thought i should come n meet you all...
manvi : hey maya...
maya : hey manvi... how are you...???
manvi : i am good... how are you...???
maya : you are leaving...??
manvi : yes...
maya : okkk take care and see you soon... virat...??
virat : hmm...
maya : wont you introduce me to all... i mean...
virat : oh yeah... ofcourse...
virat introduced maya to all the family members...
manvi : ahem ahem...
virat : yes yes we are leaving...
maya : leaving...??? means...
viren felt like banging maya 's head to the nearest wall...
virat : i am going for dropping manvi...
maya : but i thought we would go out together...
virat : we can go out tomorrow... no big deal...
manvi : arrey virat.. go out with with maya na... we all will go with the driver... no big deal... (and winked at virat)
virat : but partner...
manvi : cmon partner... its ok...
virat : but i really wanted to...
manvi : better luck next time... and bye everybody... and and and maya have fun...
maya : hey thanks n bye manvi...
manvi went back with her family with the driver. maya had breakfast with vaderas that day and after that they both went out...

after few hours, chanudharys reach rishikesh and manvi felt like she got a new birth. she felt as if she got her everything back and the thought of being close to kabir made shivers sent down her spine... she wanted to see him and engulf herself in his arms... she wanted to breathe in his scent, hide herself in his chest and run he fingers thorugh his hair.
pinky : haaye re manvi... tu itna kyun muskura rahi hai puttar...??? (manvi why are you smiling so much...???)
manvi : nothing chachi... bas ghar akar bahut accha lag raha hai... (it feels good to be back home chachi...)
pinky : woh toh hai puttar...
manvi : beeji...??
beeji : hmm...
manvi : can i go to ganga ghat...??? i want to meet mama papa...
beeji : lets go home forst manvi then you can go to ganga ghat...
madan : haan mannu...
manvi : please chachu... beeji...
beeji : accha jaa... par jaldi wapas aa jaio...
manvi : love you beeji... thank you... bye...
dabbu : main bhi saath chalu di...??? (di can i come with you...??)
manvi : nahi dabbe... ghar ja... tu ek lauta beta hai iss ghar... bye...
manvi ran from the railway station and went to meet kabir...

precap : manvi meets kabir

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Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
both the updates were great...
continue soon and thanks for the pm dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yaminnthida

Awesome update Naina...👏👏👏...really loved every bit of it...😃...especially virat restlessness...
😉...hayee...kya bechani hai...aakir uskaa partner jaa rahaa hai naa...😳...love the bedroom scene...virat kissed on manvi forehead...awwn...😳...manvi toh kabir ki dewaani hai...😃...waah kya love tirangle hai...😉...virat manvi ko rokne keliyee kuch bhi kareegaa...😃...really looking forward for next update ...thank u so much for the pm...N good luck for the exams🤗
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hey thanks yamin... 🤗
virat toh pagal hai apni manvi ke piche... tera piccha na chodunga soniye types ho gya hai virat... 😆
manvi toh kabir pujaran hai... 😉
woww u are loving this love triangle... thats great...!!!!! 😃
thank u soo much n exams went great... 😊

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