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charlotte74

@charlotte74

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

That was good writing. I would definitely like to see how this story moves forward.

So Khushi is going to be designing the ethnic collection for AR? Nice.

Don't separate them for too long though.

Good luck!

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redwine1

@redwine1

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

My dear Phoolan Devi ..

Incredibly well written piece .. very happy to see u write . the base has been well set ..looking forward to reading the next chapter ..

Keep up the writing my sweet ..

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meghavn

@meghavn

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

👍🏼 good job girl... continue writing...

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GirlOfFire

@GirlOfFire

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Sammy 🤗

Thats a beautiful start.. Arnav Khushi missing each other... awww... its a very sweet start. its good, and I definitely want to read more..!!

👍🏼

Madhu

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aditi07

@aditi07

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

great start .. would love to read ahead 😊

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incandescent

@incandescent

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Hey Sammy,

Your exams got cancelled...should I say lucky you? 😕😆

Congrats for your first SS.

This is a fresh concept. I am on an FF reading spree these days and I haven't come across anything which is a continuation after 30th November. I did wonder a couple of times how it would be after Mrs. India competition. I am glad there is no Aarav in it...I don't read stories with Aarav and Sheetal in it.😳😆

Toilet soap ?? 🤣

They had a fight and she refused to have sex with him for two days !! 😲 Poor Arnav !! 🤣🤣

Khushi working for AR...Fawad...insecure Arnav...friendly and zany Khushi !! Interesting !! 😃They are missing each other...awww !! 😳

Kahi hidden meanings toh nahin hai?? 😆

I like it...wanna read more so update soon !!! 😳

Edited by incandescent - 12 years ago

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abavi

@abavi

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Samwa! Welcome to the world of writers dear!

A very good start...I would say, you have introduced the insecurities, you have introduced the longing and what not... This part will definetely bring me back here when you update next :D

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Jessie

@jessjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

nice one... do continue soon.

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Cute6

@Cute6

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Lovely start..
U rote der pain of seperation thots perfectly wud luv 2 read more..
If u send pms do add me or il only visits dis page often 2 see d next part..
Vaiting