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Posted: 12 years ago
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GUYS i am back with another poem on taarey par phele mera bhashan😆😆😆 guys actually na this poem iss dedicated to mere pyaare se Taarey and its for the current taarey track as i want rey to tell taani ki how much he loves him...😊😊so here's my poem enjoy reading😊

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH TAANI

I see you in my dreams
I feel you when i close my eyes
Your love flows within my heart
You are within me as a part

No matter you are near or far
You are my one desire,my life
You are the one who I'll love forever
And will leave you never ever

I want to wrap you in my arms
To make you feel my love
Our love is as pure as snowhite's dove
Your touch makes the flowers grow
Your breath sends them to and fro

You're my life,you're my soul
You are the one who makes me whole
My love ,my passion rest with you
You make my each day
And i wake up with dreams new

I'll cherish our love until the end
My love for you will never bend
My life's journey will end
If that day will ever come
You'll know my love as you are the only one

so guys its done and now comments time guys i would just say if you loved the poem then hit like and comment as these very precious for me and silent readers atleast pls like yaar...so guys tell me hows it...😊😊😊.Hope i had not written a crap...
and sorry if bored you...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww..It's really lovely yaarr... It was really showing how much Rey loves Taani...😳... It's really awesome... Such a cute work u did yaarr...🤗...
Keep it up! 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its ossam dear,,,,.👍🏼.n seriously suits taarey's current track...n i luvd it...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww..It's really lovely yaarr... It was really showing how much Rey loves Taani...😳... It's really awesome... Such a cute work u did yaarr...🤗...
Keep it up! 👍🏼
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well i would say i am glad you loved it😊 and kya karun taarey hain itney pyaare ki i want them always together😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tareyfan

its ossam dear,,,,.👍🏼.n seriously suits taarey's current track...n i luvd it...😊



thanks yaar it means lot to me...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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means a lot to me thanks😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was so sweet poem. Loved it Anki. I was like, is that it? Very short.

My love ,my passion rest with you
You make my each day

Awesome lines
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShivTRSS

This was so sweet poem. Loved it Anki. I was like, is that it? Very short.

My love ,my passion rest with you
You make my each day

Awesome lines



yaar mera na bheja kharab ho chuka hai taarey ke gam mein devdas ho gyi hoon phir bhi haapy you liked it😊😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww..Anki..Missed ya sooo much!!

Nd taareef k pehele mein tumhe apni pillow se tmhe zor se hit karungi for calling diz beautiful,Lovely Poem of yours a crap! Don't do that plz..Aur tumhe meri bimari catch ki he kya apni works ko crap kehene ka..Don't even dare.. get that ?..You aint wanna call your works crap next time!

datz it 4 d scolding session..Ab iss poem k baare mein kya batau..It was Just amazing yaar!! 👏

I see you in my dreams
I feel you when i close my eyes
Your love flows within my heart
You are within me as a part

Awwiee dat Just expressed pure love..nd i loved it! muaah!

Your touch makes the flowers grow
Your breath sends them to and fro


I certainly loved these lines..I mean Itz...hmmm...PERFECT!


You make my each day
And i wake up with dreams new


Now that's what i call IMPRESSIVE..Good Job..Love ya!! 🤗

Edited by Itz.Me.Charleen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Itz.Me.Charleen

Awww..Anki..Missed ya sooo much!!


Nd taareef k pehele mein tumhe apni pillow se tmhe zor se hit karungi for calling diz beautiful,Lovely Poem of yours a crap! Don't do that plz..Aur tumhe meri bimari catch ki he kya apni works ko crap kehene ka..Don't even dare.. get that ?..You aint wanna call your works crap next time!

datz it 4 d scolding session..Ab iss poem k baare mein kya batau..It was Just amazing yaar!! 👏

I see you in my dreams
I feel you when i close my eyes
Your love flows within my heart
You are within me as a part

Awwiee dat Just expressed pure love..nd i loved it! muaah!

Your touch makes the flowers grow
Your breath sends them to and fro


I certainly loved these lines..I mean Itz...hmmm...PERFECT!


You make my each day
And i wake up with dreams new


Now that's what i call IMPRESSIVE..Good Job..Love ya!! 🤗




thik hai mataji aage aise galti nahi hogi and itna bada comment mein toh behoosh hi ho jaaungi chaarleen...😆😆.glad u loved the poem😊

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