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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ll_piya_ll

Edit-
ups realy sorry..
mera last val res he pada hai..
i forget to edd..
omggg story getting day by day interesting...
lolll arjun again stairng riya n again lost...
riya ko pata chal gaya..lolll
both smiling but didnt know the reason..
he he he he..
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waooo riya ka malika avtar to kitana cooll hai...
riya or aman fb is awesome...
.
felt bad for riya...poor baby lot of pain in her heart..
.
ariya kiss was super magicalll..or hottt..
me blushinggg blushinggh ahum ahum...
.canndy test...
loll arjun lose his controled..
omggg riya kidnappp..
ab kya hoga..
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part14
bahoot se dout clear ho gaye..
So canddy ke pichhe chip the..
ab samajh aya why riya did that..
Lolll sabko pata chal gaya both i
kiss..
embracinggg
ohh to sik n aman...
si thats why she killed aman..
very strong girl..
i m realy feel proud..
.
data ne riya ko free ker diya..
kiska call aya tha...????
precape is interesting update soon..
good job...
Ps:show aman flash yr..
verna pata kaide chalega,...sab kuch


no sorry di
mai b kabhi kabhi bhul jati hoon..lolz

itna lamba comment 😳
thank u di
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sumbulqaiser

great update
nice part
love brave Riya,
Candy DNA nice lines.
interesting Promo,
continue soon sorry for late comments


thank you sumbul di
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...
awesome update...
loved it...
so riya finally escaped...
hehehe...liza nay to almost kiss ka kissa khol diya tha...
interesting precap...
update soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepikz

nice update<div></div>


thank u 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: umamah70

wow...

awesome update...
loved it...
so riyafinally escaped...
hehehe...lizanay to almost kiss ka kissakholdiyatha...
interesting precap...
update soon...


he he
wo toh khulna hi tha..lolz

thnks for comment
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Posted: 12 years ago


PART- 15




Reykjavik
Iceland


Rajiya took out the packet and opened it. She found one card and it will help her achieving the next link. She took the cab and headed towards the Bio Research Center of Iceland. She reached there and the guard stopped her.
They never allow any stranger in that center, only very few recomended peoples can enter in the center.

Rajiya showed her card and the card undergoes many scanning machine. Her fingers were crossed. After they were done with all the scanning processess they let her enters in the center.

This is a center for all biological research, including food technology and also biotechnogical research in advance. Rajiya asked to the recpnst. for the way for any Dr. Richard.

Dr. Richard is a qualified, food technologies and a specialist in food bio-technology. He was busy in his lab while rajiya enters in. As she was taught, '' never knock on a scientist's door''. She observed him from head to toe.

Then finally she called him. "Dr. Richard!!!" He never answered her questions as he was engrossed in the microscope. Rajiya asked him many questiong after that but he never replied and in the end only glared at her. She turned her heel but said, " it was all about Dr. Safeena, if you still won'2 answer me , i will better leave".

Rajiya turned her head to go but she only hear a sound like a dropped coin and a small wishper, " saffy ".

She again turned and looked at Dr. Richard and a metal foreshape on the ground. He seemed lost somewhere while she could see the moist in his eyes. She took small steps towards him.
"Love ,love love.. Huh.. This thing will make even any scientist's sense week."-rajiya concluded in her mind.
"ask me any damn thing , I will answer"!! Claimed Dr. Richard. Rajiya could see the pain, the anger and the helplessness of his inner side. But she couldn't do.
She repeated the same question and the answer she got was more than shocking before. She stood up and thanked Dr. Richard.
" thank you Dr. Richard"-said rajiya.
"anything for my saffy, "- he said with a faint smile on his face.
Rajiya smiled back and left the research center. Now she need to inform the messege to riya. This is the most important link of this case. She returned back to her hotel.


ETF conf room
Mumbai
India-



Arjun was there late night. Now his mind is revolving with the files of the chip. Arjun again tried access the files but it needs shree's help. He thought to call shree over here in the ETF. He couldn't do this in the day time as Rathod would never allow him this. But he is very much patientless to know the relation of roshni with this case. He dialed shree's number.

Shree was sleeping peacfully while his specky sleep was broken by one phone call. He never opened his eyes and clicked the receive button.
"shree," arjun shouted from the other side.
"kya hai, thoda pyaar se nahi le sakte mera naam"- shree said in a dreamy and sleepy voice.

"shree, "he again said but this time in a low voice.
"haan aise lena chahiye naam, but tumhe raath ko nind nahi aati, nahi aati toh mujhe bolo na sleeping pills mai kharid ke de dunga". He said, still in sleep.

"Shree, 15 mins mai ETF control room mai milo, samjhe ya samjhaun"-arjun barked this time and he woke up screaming and fell for the bed.
'' he..he..hello, " shree said. But the line from another side went dead.
"uri baba, ab kya karu? Chal shree, tera aaj cheer haran hone wala hai" he murmered and stood up.


After some time
ETf control room


shree was again in the same condition , scared , fear gripping eyes. And arjun infront of him.

"shree un files reopen karo"-oredred arjun.
Shree sighed in relief that he didn't say him anything about the phone conversation.
"phirse ...sir" he asked.
"sayad ek baar kaha , tumne suna nahi" arjun replied.

He opened the file and there was another high profiles file but that was locked and it would take time to open. Arjun never showed pity on the technical exper infront of him while all shree could do is yawing at his questions and getting hard glares from him and shuting his mouth immediately.

Arjun needs his answer and at any cost. He is also ready hack the chip that was given by riya. But for his bad luck the chip was with rathod and he never give this , nor he would tell him anything. Now two people left, Riya nd Liza. He couldn't talk with Liza and only one option, ''riya''. Now he have trace riya, at any cost. He knows that she will better protect herself so he didn't reated much about the fact that she is missing.







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Here riya was heading towards the old place where she and rajiya used to stay. She entered in that room and looked herself in the mirror.

She knows that why she easly came in their hands. Her only goal was to keep Dutta away from that chip. Dutta thought that the chip was with her so he tried to strangle her but riya knows wht she was was doing.

In that club , when she was there in the 2nd bar counter with that man, she also took the candy from his pocket along with his mobile. He seduction skill worked and the man never know about what happened to the chip. But Dutta have an eye on her and she also known to his gazes. She tried to escape from there but unpredictably she found arjun there. So she kissed him there. And in this way she transfered the chip . Now only one work left. She have to go away from him. When
riya heard arjun's calling she intentnaly turned so that Dutta could see her and then he dragged her.

In the parking she struggled, but not fight with them but just to remove her band so that it would also reach to arjun as she knows that arjun will defenately find her. She just wanted to keep tht links of the case away from dutta and his men.

She sighed in relief as she knows that those chips are in good hand i.e. Arjun.

Arjun, this name again gain her attention as she rememberd the past thing with him. She cursed herself for the sensatuon she shared with him. She shouldn't have done that. Her mind repeatedly said such thing. And now she is regretting this. Why she lost her control. Why she let desire took control over her , she never wnated this. And that to with arjun. No, this is not right.
" NOO... This is not rigth, "
she still have a place for Aman in her life. Whatever Aman may be but she loved him she loves him and she will. How could she let anyone else enter in her already broken heart to shatter this into pieces, which would only cause immense pain. There was a reason of all this thing that have happened , a very strong reason.

" Riya shoot me..
Her hands was trmbling with fear.. She could she her love infront of him. "
and she shot him right in his heart but that didn't hit his heart.
That bullet hits to the ribs just a little below to his heart and he way now lying down. But he knows that he will be dead in few minutes.

Riya threw the gun and again rushed to him , she placed his head on her lap.
" aman , i.. I.. Am sorry.. Why ! Why this all happened Aman.."-she was crying hysterically.
Even in that condition, Aman couldn't see her crying.
He slowly raised his hand and wiped away her tear.

" riya there, is a reason of everything that happened.." -aman said, slowly as he have no more strengeh in his body. He was already shot by her 2 times.

" why aman , why this only with us.. Hamare saath hi kyun aman..'' said between her sobs. She have never thought that she would face situation like this in her life.

" ye sab hona hi likha tha..pehele se riya.."-he said, looking helplessly at his girlfriend.

" matlab tumhe pata tha, ye sab hone wala hain"- she asked as he could see the anger rised in her eyes.

He nodded hid head and blinked his eyes.

" phir bhi aman.. Phir bhi. Why??? Why?? Ye sab jan ne ka baad bhi tum yaha aaye.."-she accused him.

" tum ek officer ho riya, ye baat samajh sakti ho..
Par mai .. Aa..aah"

"aman," riya again cried out.

"par tumne mujhe itni badi saza kyun di Aman, zindegi bhar ke liye tadapne keliye.."

" no riya tumhe jeea hai... Mere liye nahi.. Uss maqsad ke liye jise tumhe pura karna hai"

" kya ye sab badal nahi sakta kya mai kahi dur tumhe le kar chupa nahi sakti Aman. Kya ek baar mai tumhare saath ye zindegi nahi jeeni hai.."
she holds his hand.
" wada mat karna riya..
Vada mat karna...

dil tut chuka hai..
Bikharne mat dena abhi

saans tham rahi hai mera..
Ab bas zindegi rukna baki hai..

Koi umeed mat dena zindegi ki
kahi iss zindegi se naata na jud jaye

phir mohabbat se nafrat karna muskil ho jayega


she placed her lips on his forehead and cried her heart out..


meri dhadkane toh tumhare saanso se hain..
Inhe tham ne kaise doon..

Meri zindegi toh tum ho
tumhe khone kaise doon.


she ould hear his heart rate rising..

He touched her cheek and she looked at him.
" riya "..he called her in a faint voice.
She placed her fingers on his lips .
" tisha, ...tisha aman..tumne tisha se pyaar kiya tha." she corrected him.

"kiya tha nahi tisha , karta hoon..
He said and smiled.

Riya closed her eyes and tears rolled down her cheeks.

She bent down, took his lips with her.. For one last time, to feel him.. To capture his sensation and save this for whole life.

He also kissed her, it was his last kiss.. His kiss of death.. His kiss for his love . For his tisha..

" i love you.. T..ti..sha" - he only could managed to say this btween the kiss.


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She opened her eyes as she couldn't hear his heartbeats. She parted her lips from his and looked at his face and at his opened eyes.

She bent down and and kissed his eyes and closed his eyes by her lips and she again kissed his another eye and shut the close.

She raised his body a little up, and hugged him tightly and again cried. She was also shot in her right hand, and now she couldn't stand anymore. This pain is nothing infront of the pain of her heart. But her body gave up and she got unconcious.

flashback ends

A lone tear drop fell from her eyes and she banged her hand into the mirror hurting herself.
She slumped on the floor and blood comes out of her hand.

" no aman , i will never forget you ..no.."
she again screamed.

And again cried out.

Another one person was looking at her from the door step and he was standing there helpless.

it was not the first time he is viewing this site of her but everytime he saw her , she found the pain is increasing in her.

She was haunted by this memories from past 3 years.

He closed the door and give her some personal peace of mind.


after 2 hours

Shree was still working on the codes. And arjun was marching inside the room here to there.
It was almost morning and shree finally opened the file.

Shree called him and arjun looked at the files. Then she found something very different. And when this thing set in his mind, it was again gave him a big shock.
It was the same date .. When and roshni and aman died. He was in a big shock.


here in riyas place


Rajiya called sarif and told all the things about Dr. Rchard and she told him to inform this to riya.

Sarif was the one who was watching riya. He entered in her room. And she was still sitting on the floor emmersed in her own thoughts.

"mallika.. " he called her name as if to bring her back to the real worold.

She looked at him and he said, " mallika.. Raiya ne contact kiya tha." stressing more the word mallika. As she have to remember that she is on a mission.

"bolo" , she asked him to move forward.
This girl will always prove him wrong.
So he started saying.

" rajiya wahan Dr. Richard se mili.. And wahan se pata chala hai ki T saal pehele Dr. Safeena ki maut ho gayi hai.. Lekin sach kuch aur hi gai" he claimed.

" matlab", mallika asked curiously.

" matlab ki , unke paas wo body toh hai. But jab uska DNA test karwaya gaya, wo kisi aur ka tha!!"

" par kaise, death cerificate ki copy hai hamare paas. "

" nahi, Dr. Richard ne khud chupke se uski sample testing ki thi..
Iska matlab"

" matlabb Dr. Safeena zinda hai.."par kaise.. Aur kahan??


" rajiya tumhe ek messege bhejegi.. With the original reports..
Ussi mai se pata chalega..okay"

riya nodded her head.

" mujhe dutta ke bakiyon ke aadmi ke sare movements ka report chahiye."
and she sprinted out of that room.




Here in the conference room, shree received a call. And somebody informed that there was a deadbody found and it was of a girl.

Shree- sir ek ladki ki lash mili hai.
He informed this to arjun and ajun told him to inform rathod and he asked to drop shree home as he needs to freshn up.
Shree was surprised but he never spoke anything and just followed arjun.


No preap...



Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you ariyans for all your support.

And this part, I know this is hurting.. It was also hurting me while writing..
But all wanted to tell you that, it was his pure and true love for his tisha..❤️

it was his true love😭

Sorry couldn't say much. I am not in that condition.

Do share your views.

Thank you

Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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Heart touching update dr.

Loved Rajiya's MV about love n her convo with the doc.

She got the most important link. That's great.

The way Shree talked to Arjun n tht sleeping pills wala dialogue were really hilarious.

Wow before Shree realised tht whom was he talking to, Arjun hung up the phone.

Poor Shree. Arjun nay to uski neend haram kar di hai.

Loved the confidence he hv on Riya n that's why he didn't traced her down.

Wow she did all tht to keep Dutta away frm the chip. How smartly she put the chip in Arjun's hand. Intelligent n brave girl.

She felt guilty for the sweet moments she shared with Arjun. Poor gal.

FB of Aman n Riya was really heart wrenching.

The poetic lines described their miseries perfectly n their immence love for eachother.

Wow she again hurt herself caz of the pain which she got frm her past.

Wht the!!!!! Roshini n Aman died on the same day.

Whats the connection btwn thm???????

The case was getting more n more exciting?????

Thy found the dead body of the girl. Is that girl also related to the case?????

Cant wait to read more.

Thanks for pm dr.

Continue soon.

Edited by Aks13 - 12 years ago

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