IPKKND FF : Bezubaan... *Prologue Up*

Hello fellow readers ^__^

I'm completely new to Fan Fictions , I have written OS's before , but this is something new and long - term. I feel like the injustice Arnav has done to Khushi throughout their 6-month contract was too much :/ Any girl in her place wouldn't have tolerated him! I hope you all are happy with it and the updates will be based on likes etc etc ...

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Prologue

"If anything happens to Di or her baby, jaan kasam, tujhe maar dalunga Khushi! "

yelled an angered ASR.

"Arnavji , I was just trying to hel-"

Khushi held her cheek in disbelief , the pain stung from Arnav striking her against her cheek. The force of the slap caused her to fall back a few steps and falter near a cabin. The tears in her eyes streamed down onto her red cheeks. She ran out of his room , without looking and suddenly bumping into a tall , handsome , muscular stranger.

Armaan blinked at the damsel in distress.Her beautiful eyes crying out for help , pleading for freedom. Like a bird trapped in a golden cage.

He also saw the red marks on Khushi's face.

"Armaan-ji."

she quickly wiped her tears and forced a smile upon her face.

Armaan held her shoulders .

"What did he do Khushi?" Armaan asked.

"No-nothing. Main toh bas aisi hi..."

" Shut Up Khushi ! You don't know how to lie , so just tell me the truth or I could go in and personally ask him."

Khushi new by the tone of Armaan's voice that he was not lying , it would not be the first time Armaan had argued with his best friend for her sake.Armaan and Arnav's friendship was that of brothers. She felt like such a hindrance in all of Arnav's relationships , first Anjali-ji and now Armaan-ji. She bursted out to tears and hugged Armaan.

"Shhh...stop , Khushi , it's ok."

"No , it's not ok Armaan ji . He hates me , he'll kill me. I can't live here."

Khushi sobbed.

"Khushi , he can't harm you in my presence. Stop crying , it doesn't suit my Jalebi."

"Armaan-ji?"

"Hmm?"

"Aap bahut acche hai. (you're very nice.) "

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*Character Sketch Below*

Character Sketch

Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada

A 25 year old girl, tortured and abused to the point of depression. She married Arnav Singh Raizada to save both of their sisters' lives, but destroyed her own in the process. She has lost all faith in humanity and believes only in REVENGE.

Arnav Singh Raizada.

Khushi's [so-called] husband. A 28-year-old ruthless businessman. He married her to keep her under control and save his Di's marriage. He abused her a lot after marriage. He soon finds out the truth about Shyam and instead of being guilty, he convinces himself to blame Khushi for everything

Armaan Malik

Arnav's college friend. He comes to stay in Raizada Mansion after returning to India for his business. He realizes that no one in the house is truly happy. He sees his friend in the form of a beast towards. He soon develops a friendship with Khushi …maybe even more.

Rest of characters are the same.

Wow that was quite an emotional and heart breaking start, feeling so sorry for khushi and I can't believe Arnav slapped her. According to the character sketch even after he is going to realise khushi is innocent he is still going to be cruel to her, I hope she finds a supportive friend in Armaan. Just one question at this point in your story does Arnav know khushi is innocent? Please continue soon, would love to read further.

Originally posted by: P4rveen12

Wow that was quite an emotional and heart breaking start, feeling so sorry for khushi and I can't believe Arnav slapped her. According to the character sketch even after he is going to realise khushi is innocent he is still going to be cruel to her, I hope she finds a supportive friend in Armaan. Just one question at this point in your story does Arnav know khushi is innocent? Please continue soon, would love to read further.

Arnav knows Khushi is innocent but his Di is going through a turmoil after Shyam left which leads him to vent out everything on Khushi. He wants to avoid blame by finding a reason for Khushi to be wrong.
It will be explained more in the next few chapters... :)

Originally posted by: aaaziiz

<font color="#660066">OMG, I just LOVE your concept. It's so fresh and different.Even I hated what all Arnav did to Khushi during their contract marriage. Your Arnav is so negative.. I mean he finds a way to blame Khushi even after finding out the truth.I love Armaan's character.Have a feeling that he's going to be a gentleman.Cant wait for the story to unfold, continue soon.Oh and do P.M me if you send them out :)</font>

Glad you liked it :)
That one sorry from Arnav didn't make up for any of his actions at all and I still think he didnt give Khushi enough attention throughout IPKKND.
And yes Armaan seems to be a total sweetheart , but do expect many twists and turns in the story :)

nice concept

nice intro dear