FF-Seduced in the Dark#3(END/pg42)*20thMarch*

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Zara

@Zara_92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: Nukti
Very hot and passionate update☺️☺️
This ff is coming to an end😭😭
Update soon😊

Thankyou :)

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lullaby_bhoot

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Woohoo.. it was so fast..

Well.. am so happy... it was awesme... waiting for the last part..!!

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Sid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Uhh.. Zara wen r u gng to update the last part? Can't wait for it nw!

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Zara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: shanaya123
Uhh.. Zara wen r u gng to update the last part? Can't wait for it nw!

Aww InshAllah tomorrow I shall ! Its a long part !! So yeah ! Tomorrow hopefully <33

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Sid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: zara.92

Aww InshAllah tomorrow I shall ! Its a long part !! So yeah ! Tomorrow hopefully <33

Yayy! Waitng for it! <3

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Zara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

CHAPTER 28 - THE PERFECT END

The Kundra's and the Mallik's were both very happy with RK and Madhu's decision to get Married . The Mallik's approved of RK considering their daughter loves him , and he earns well as well !!

The Kundra's mainly Radhaji was totally fond of Madhu , so it didn't take a second fr her to accept Madhu as her daughter in law.

They both started of with the marriage preparations !

RK and Madhu weren't allowed to meet until their marriage wich was the very next day but these 24hrs were falling heavy on RK .

Madhu was getting her mehendi when she got a call from RK , a friend of Madhu kept the phone near her ear

'What is this bullshitt ?' RK spoke

'What RK ?'

'Why can't we meet till tom??? I can't stay widout meeting u now '

Madhu blushed ' its just few hours RK ! And then we'l be together forever ! Right ?'

'Right or wrong I don't know I just know I'm coming to see u right now ! '

'NOOO ' she yelled

Everyone around Madhu asked her 'what's wrong?'

'Nothing' an embarassed Madhu replied

'NO RK ! Ur not coming here '

'Yes I am '

'No ur not '

'I am and I will ! U wait n watch Mrs Kundra ' RK said and kept the phone

Madhu got worried , her whole house was full of guests and she just got her mehendi .

'Oh GOD ! Plz help me what do I do ?? How do I go to my room ?? Uff so many guests !!!' Madhu grew tensed

'Maa maa ! ' Madhu shouted

'What hpnd Madhu ? I have too much work ' padmini replied

'I'm having a very bad headache ma , I think I'll throw up , can I rest in my room fr sometime ?'

'Ohh ho ! Haan haan u rest warna if u fall sick tomorrow itl be a problem . U go rest now , I'll send Trishna wid u '

'NO ! ' Madhu shouted

'I mean no no Trish is busy don't bother her , I'll take a nap and will b ok.'

'Hmmm . Okay u go take rest ! Call me if u need anything'

Madhu went to her room

She was pacing from here to there in anticipation , when suddenly she felt the dori of her green kurta fell loose , she immediately turned around to see a smirking RK standing handsome in a black shirt and jeans , she immediately blushed and looked down.

He pulled her by her waist , and lifted her chin up ' told u I will come ' he spoke against her lips

She immediately pushed him away ' not before tom ' she teased

'Ahaaan ! Tomorrow would be diff Madhubala , tomorrow would be new !! But for now I need to finish what I cme here for '

RK started moving towards her , while she moved backward , finally she hit the wall ... He came close to her , makin her lose her breath , just when he was next to her lips , he took both her hands and saw her mehendi

'Beautiful ' he spoke in a whisper

Madhu lowered her eyes like a would be bride , as RK softly kissed her palms . Makin madhu grow red

'This is why I was here '

'From tomorrow our new life start . Are u ready Mrs Kundra ?'

'Would be Mrs Kundra ' madhu smirked

'Ahaan ! Means right now u aren't sure of me ?'

'Leme think ummm...'

And RK kissed her lips roughly .. Leaving a stunned madhu

'Don't u even dare to that !! Ur just mine Madhubala and thrs no 'thinking' to that' he spoke

Madhu hugged him tight ' I love u '

'I love u too '

Suddenly there was a knock ' Madhu!? Madhu ?'

'Omg Trish !!! RK leave now !!! Fast go '

'Okay okay m leaving ! Bt tom I'll come to pick u up and then I won't leave u ever '

Madhu blushed and hugged him ' go now '

RK left n Madhu opened the door ..

The rest of the day went by , but tht night both Madhu n RK couldn't sleep.. They were excited, nervous , happy , apprehensive all at the sme time.
And they didn't even realize when the sun showed up..

'Madhu! ? Ur up already ? ' Trish asked surprised.

'Didn't sleep Trish'

'Ohhh excited ? Nervous ?' Trishna teased Madhu

She slightly hit trishna ' shut up trish ! Get me chai ! I need my right frame of mind'

'Sweetheart u need ur right frame of heart and umm body too ' she laughed making Madhu blush like crazy .

'CHAI ! ' She yelled btw her smile

'Yeah yeah ! Gettin chai fr the would be bride ' Trishna left just wen Madhu's phone beeped

'Big day Mrs Kundra '

Madhu smiled and replied ' a very very big day for Would be Mrs Kundra '

Beep again ' ahaaan ! Still doubtful? Don't u rmr yest's encounter'

Madhu replied ' not at all doubtful since yest'

And she smiled just when Padmini walked in

'How u feeling Madhu?' Padmini caressed her head

'I'm better maa'

' Its a big day for u Madhu . I just wanted to ask one thing . Only becoz I'm ur mom and I want my daughter to be happy always '

'I know what ul ask me maa . Yes I'm sure of RK , he's one man who made me realize what is love , and till what extent he can go for his love. Hez the guy made for me maa . I'm as sure as death maa ..I'll be happy ' Madhu smiled as a tear fell down her eyes

Padmini was in tears too , she hugged Madhu and said ' I'm so happy for u beta . I'm glad u found someone like RK , who loves u passionately . I can see it in his eyes . '

'Okay okay enough of drama . Common Madhu drink ur chai fast , u have to get ready then ' Trishna cooled down the emotional air .

Madhu drank her tea and went for a shower . She felt so diff today , so unlike Madhu . After the shower when she looked at herself in the mirror , she saw a diff Madhu standing , who is stronger , and more determined than before , she even felt beautiful , beautiful frm inside out , her wet hair and dark mehendi was just makin her look like a gorgeous lady .

Trishna helped Madhu get ready , and Madhubala Shamsher Mallik looked Smashingly Stunning wearing this

Just as Trishna completed her look by putting the dupatta on her head , Madhu looked up in the mirror only to find herself as Mrs Madhubala Kundra .

'U look Beautiful Madhu' Trishna spoke softly

'ThankYou Trish' Madhu spoke blushing.

Just when they both heard lot of dhol noise.

'I guess ur RK has arrived' Trishna spoke teasing Madhu has she ran out leaving an anxious Beautiful bride behind.

As RK entered the house , his eyes searched for Madhu but he couldn't find her anywhr .

When suddenly he heard ' she's there ' Mr Mallik pointed towards Madhu who was coming down the stairs .

Seeing Madhu dressed as a bride , RK could only think of 1 word

'Beautiful '

As Madhu's eyes met RK's , she was stunned to see RK dressed in this

He looked so Handsome that her stomach got instant butterflies .

their wedding was attended by all HIGH CLASS VVIPS AND MEDIA covering the big fat KUNDRA wedding...

both RK n MADHU proceeded the Mandap and began with the rituals .
As RK put the sindoor in Madhu's maang , it made her look even more beautiful. It seemed like she was complete now.

The shaadi got over and the time was for bidaai. Madhu got quite emotional as she hugged her dad , Maa , Trish and roma . But at the sme time she was excited to spend the rest of her life with tht handsome man who was waiting for her near his car.

As Madhu sat in the car , RK put an arm around her ' are u alright ?'

'Yeah ! ' She responded with a smile

They reached the mansion and Radhaji welcomed her with the thali and kalash. She kissed Madhu's forehead and expressed her happiness.

After all the rituals were over . Madhu was made to sit like a typical bride on RK's huge master size bed wich was decorated with Rose petals and aroma candles.

As RK came in the room , Madhu's heart skipped a beat . He did make out with her a number out times bt today was diff , today they"l make love and bcme one forever !

RK came and sat besides Madhu and took her hand in his ' so finally Mrs Kundra '

Madhu blushed ' yeah !Mrs Madhubala Rishabh Kundra '

RK kissed her hands and said ' Madhu , all that is mine is now urs , I give u my heart my life my soul and my love from this moment on for as long as we both shall live '

Madhu instantly had tears in her eyes ' I never believed fairytales existed until I made mine wid u . U made me believe in fairytales RK '

RK kissed her tears and spoke against her fluttering eyes ' I love u Mrs Kundra'

'I love u too Mr Kundra' madhu replied

'So now let's get u rid of these clothes ' he said smirking Making madhu red as she lowered her eyes .

'I don't believe Mrs Kundra blushes also ?' He spoke against a whisper

He softly stroked her cheeks , as Madhu's eyes closed.

' Did I tell u look beautiful tonight ! And I'll make u mine tonight all mine ' RK spoke removing her dupatta .

He slowly removed her maang tika and kissed her forehead.

Then removed her big nosepin kissing her cheeks

As he came dwn to her neck she shivered, RK removed her heavy neck piece leaving trails of feather kisses all over her neck.

Then he removed her her earrings as he sucked on her earlobe , making Madhu moan.

He slowly made her lie dwn on the bed as he came on top of her.

'Mine' he said huskily before brushing his lips onto her red lips and taking them in one go , RK kissed Madhu like he's kissing her for the first time , a soft passionate torturing kiss . He sucked on her lower lip before meeting her tongue wid his own . Madhu let out a soft moan beneath the kiss making RK wilder.
He removed his Kurta as she saw Madhu staring at him with hot intense hungry eyes . He couldn't control claiming her cmpletely as he started kissing her moistly on her neck , he lowered the side of her short choli , exposing her cleavage as he licked there for long minutes making Madhu's body shudder . He cme down kissing her assets abv her choli , and down further to her milky bare stomach , he nibbled for long minutes on her belly button, making it as moist as possible , he licked all over her stomach , leaving light red marks .
As he came up , he saw Madhu's eyes closed as her lips were curved into a smile wich made him insane coz he was sure she was enjoying it . Within a second he unclasped Madhu's choli and threw it away , kissing all over her exposed area , he made her moans get louder n louder . She came on top of RK as the wild Goddess inside her took over , she bit him wildly all over his bare body , makin him insane , she sucked on his throat , digging her nails on to his back , as she realized RK was opening her lehenga. A sense of Passion and nervousness took over .
As he gt rid of her lehenga and his lowers , he covered them both wid satin sheets

'I'm with u! Till death do us apart ' RK spoke softly

As madhu closed her eyes and gave him a nod

And within seconds he claimed her virgin body , making it all his own.
Madhu gasped in pain and pleasure .

They finally made love , and became one ! They made love on the bed , on the couch , in the bathtub and finally exhausted went to sleep in each others arms under the white satin sheets.

As the sun came up , RK was the first one to wake up . Only to find Madhu hugging him and sleeping comfortably in his arms .

'She looks Beautiful ' he thought as she lay covered in satin sheets with just her mangalsutra and red sindoor in her maang .

He couldn't resist himself as he kissed her exposed lower neck , making her moan early morning'

'Uhmmm stop it RK ! Let me sleep '

'Uve married me to waste ur time sleeping ?' RK spoke pulling her on top of him .

Madhu smiled and kissed him passionately as the rolled over to other end of the bed

'I married u to do this every morning ' Madhu spoke smirking

'Ahaan I like ! Biwi '

'Biwi?' Madhu asked

'Yes Biwi ! It sounds so passionate just like us ' he spoke stroking her neck .

'Btw I have a surprise for u ' RK spoke

'What ? What? Tell me fast ' asked an excited madhu

'Nahhh biwi ! First tell me what will u give in return ?'

'Anything ! I'll give anything now tell me na plz '

'Biwi are u sure about anything ?'

'Yes RK I am now tell me na '

'Okay okay my impatient biwi ' and RK handed her an envelope

As Madhu opened it , she was left stunned

'We are going to Italy????'' She literally jumped on him fallin on top of him.

'Woahhh ! Look at u ! As if a lil child just got her fav chocolate '

'Oh RK I cnt tell u I'm soo happpyyy . I always wanted to go to italy ! Thankyou so much ' she spoke kissing his cheeks .

RK rolled on top of her

'Thankyou isn't enough biwi ! Remember u promised ul do anything ?'

'Ya but what ? '

RK went and closed the curtains as he got on top of her and slowly removed her sheets .

'A round 2 biwi ' he spoke taking her lips again.

Madhu was initially seduced by a Dark Man with a dark past that haunted him all his life , but she her love and determination had the power to change that Dark Man into a Lively man who still didn't know how to smile showing his teeth but yeah whenever Madhu was around he did smile .
Madhu's pure Love made RK fall for her beyond his control . No matter how much he tried to stay away , he yet got attracted to her like crazy .
Love can break every boundation and pure love can win every battle . RK and Madhu's Love stood strong infront of his dark past and other hurdles they went through.

Thus , they lived happily ever after ...

NOTE - so finally my FF has come to an end. Im really grateful to each and every person who appreciated my FF and made it reach thread #3 thats a huge achievement in itself . Only ur positive comments and love towards my writing has motivated me to write more n more. And i promise INSHALLAH sooon il start with another FF and make all ur time pass worthwhile 😳

Edited by zara.92 - 12 years ago

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-Snowdrop-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Firstly

I congragulate you for succesfully completing your FF

and the ending was fabulous.😃

happy ending.🤗

Its my sincere request for you.

PLS

PLS
PLS
PLS...Start a new FF asap.😊

Edited by tamanna10 - 12 years ago

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

👏Well deserved happily ever after.

A man who dares to dress in pink, brownie points!

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Aliya

@..Aliya..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

Ur FF ended 😭..but everything has an end

Amazing,fantastic,superb,awesome dowesome update Zara
Loooved it..thanks for the pics..🤗
I think my fav update.. 😉 😃

Thanks for writing such an awesome FF 👏 🤗
Thank u for all ur PMs till date

Can't wait for ur next FF 😃

Edited by ..Aliya.. - 12 years ago

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

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Posted: 12 years ago

#240

Beautiful fairytale ending of this awsm FF👏 I'm gonna miss reading it😔.
I'm really happy to know u would write another one...thanx yar...🤗 I enjoyed both ur FFs...and im sure i'll enjoy the third one 😃

Edited by Monami_50 - 12 years ago