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Posted: 12 years ago

Dobby Meets Maneet…..

Dobby is born again….

But a small problem…..

He somehow landed in Delhi instead of UK…..

He keeps wandering in the streets looking for his master…..

People are frightened seeing him and they throw stones at him…..

Dobby runs for his life and enters KC….

He gets into the lift….

It's almost 7 pm and everyone has left except Maneet….

Mann is working on a new project ….

Geet is tired of waiting for Maan and she decides to leave….

She is in a fight with Maan for not taking her to London as he had promised….

Maan tried to manofy her, but recently his tricks have not helped him win over his Mishty…..

Geet waits for the lift….lift opens and Dobby comes out running,he stops nearly hitting her…..

Geet dar jaathi….now she runs to Maan…..

She enters Maan's cabin and runs and hugs him….

Maan is surprised…..but he is happy….

Geet: Maan, Mujhe bachao

Maan: kya baat hai Geet?

Geet: dekho uss Marsi ko, mujhe daranne ke liye Dobby ko bheja hai

Maaan: hare tujhe darane nahi, humme milanne ke liye, aajkal toh tum mere taraf dekhthi bhi nahi, aur ye log Mahi ke bina kaise jiyenge, haina guys?

Dobby: who are you?

Maan: I'm Maan Singh Khurana

Dobby: Man?

Geet: haan, this is Man, I'm woman, tum abhi abhi English seekh rahe ho?

Maan: what are you doing here? I thought you were dead

Doby: yah, this is my next birth, just like you guys have 7 births we have 700 births to serve our masters

Geet: kya? Video game mein bhi itna life nahi miltha

Dobby: our life is too dangerous, you know

Maan: then you should go and see your master, why have you come here?

Dobby: I don't know how I got here, please help me find my master

Maan: what? You need my help? This is funny, you know magic, right?

Dobby: I lost my powers when I died, I need to get my maste'rs blessings to get back my powers

Geet: toh tummara bhi power cut ho gaya? hummare yahan toh hamesha aaisa hi hotha, kabhi bhi power cut hojaatha, bijjli ho ya politics

Maan: maybe Harry would know that you are back

Dobby: no, we have to inform him

Geet: tummare paas usska number hai kya?

Maan: Geet, ek minute chup raho, mein baat kartha hoon

Geet : toh teek hai, mein chalthi hoon

Maan: hare, rukho

Maan catches hold of her…

Geet falls, Maan catches…..maneet eyelock…….mahiii…….

Dobby is confused……ye kaisa game hai? what kind of game is this?..he wonders…

Maan: Geet, pehle hum issko ghar lekhe jaathe hai, koi isse dekh gaya toh problem ho jayega

Maan takes him to KM….

He hides him at the OH….

Geet: welcome to KM

Dobby: this place is wonderful, just like my master's place

Geet: hare tum hamesha yahi rukh jaane ki plan mat banao, ye toh mera maika hai, samje

Dobby blinks……

Geet: chalo, tum kya loge? What would you like to have? Black coffee? Ya koi scotch, Rum?

Dobby: anything, I'm hungry

Geet gets him some snacks…

Nakul has made her favorite gol gappe and vada pav….

Dobby likes them very much…he keeps asking for more….

Geet gets him more and more…but he is not satisfied…

He keeps on eating…..Geet gets tired running between KM and the OH….

Geet: kiyna khaoge? Najaane k itne saal se bhooka raha hai? Bechara

Dobby: what?

Geet: kuch nahi, dinner katam, it's over, see, empty, no more

Dobby: thanks, it's very nice, have you had your dinner?

Geet: kuch bacha hotha toh khathi

Dobby: can I have something to drink, I'm a little thirsty

Geet goes back to KM to get some drink…..

Geet: meinne kabhi Maan ko dekhne ke liye bhi itna dauda nahi, hamesha Maan hi mujhe milne aathe, haina babaji?

Maan just comes…..

Maan: tabhi toh babaji ne issko bheja hai, tumse badla lene ke liye

Geet: Maan, jaldhi isska kuch karo, warna mein issko police ke hawale kardhoongi, samje?

Maan: Geet, poor guy, he doesn't know anyone

Geet: toh teek hai, aap isske saath sojao, mein jaathi hoon

Geet tries to leave…..Maan stops her……

Maan: usska koi zaroorat nahi,meinne isske jaane ka sara intrezaam kardhiya hai

Geet: shukar hai baabji ki, mein bach gayi

Maan: toh Dobby, come on, let's go

Geet: aap bhi jaa rahe ho?

Maan: haan Geet, Dobby ke paas ab koi powers bhi nahi hai, ussko akhele kaise bhej sakthe?

Geet: aap UK jaa rahe ho? toh mein bhi aathi hoon

Maan: nahi Geet, tum yahi rukho, it's not safe

Geet: kya? Mujhe nahi lekhe jaoge?

Geet gets angry and runs away…..

Maan doesn't have the time to argue with her….he has to leave…..

Mann has arranged a private jet….

He takes Dobby to London….

After they reach London, Dhobby guides Maan to their secret palce….

On the way they come across a giant but he is just a giant with no magical powers….

Maan knocks him out with his tai chi & kick boxing combo attack….

Dobby is very happy…..

He meets an old friend who takes them to Harry….

Harry is very happy to see Dobby….

Harry: Dobby

Dobby: master

Harry touches Dobby's head with his magic wand and he gets back his powers…..

Dobby wants to test his powers…

Harry: come on, try it

Dobby: Mr.Man, what do you want?

Maan: Geet

Dobby closes his eyes and says Geet….

Geet comes from nowhere with her Gol gappe…..

Seeing Dobby in front of her Geet hides her Gol gappe...

Geet: ye mera hai

Dobby laughs and claps his hands…..

Thare appears a big table full of tasty dishes along with Geet's favorite chaat and ice cream….

Geet toh toot padi….

After a sumptuous feast……

Dobby: Geet, make a wish

Geet: mujhe uss magic broom mein goomna hai

Dobby claps his hand and the next moment Geet is sitting on the magic broom….

Dobby: enjoy your ride

Geet is a little scared….

Geet: Maan, aap bhi aao, mujhe bahut dar lagtha

Maan also accompanies her…..

They take an air tour around London, Big Ben, Thames, London bridge, London tower, queen's palace and all the other places….

Geet ka wish puri ho jaatha…

They return…..Maan looks disappointed…..

Maan: I helped you get back to your master, mera kya?

Dobby claps his hands and Geet disappears….

Geet yuhin gayab ho jaathi…Maan pareshaan ho jaatha….

Maan: Dobby, what have you done? Where is Geet? I'm sorry, please bring her back

Geet wapas KM chale jaathi….

Dadi: Geet bete, aap kahan gayab ho gaye the?

Geet: mein yahan kaise?

Maan begs dobby to give back his love…..

Dobby: Mr.Man, don't worry, just close your eyes and call out for your love

Maan closes his eyes and calls Geet

Maan: Geet

Geet comes back….

Dobby: Mr.Man, whenever you wish to see your Geet, just close your eyes and call her, she will be right there beside you

Maneet thank Dobby and return to India…..

Next morning at KM…..

Geet is taking bath…..Maan is still in bed….

Maan wakes up and finds Geet missing….

He wants to try his magic….

Maan closes his eyes and calls Geet….

To his surprise Geet comes back to the bed….

She is just lying beside him in her wet avatar……

Maan just hugs her….mahi……

Geet: Maan, chodo mujhe, apna magic ka galat isstamaal karoge toh Dobby aapka power wapas cheenlega

Maan: Geet, ye toh mera haq hai, issme kaunsi gakthi ho sakthi?

Dobby appears…..

Dobby: I don't have the rights to get back his power, so Man, don't worry

Dobby disappears…..

Maan: ab dekhtha hoon ki tum kaise bachkke jaathi ho?

Maan tightens his hold…..mahi……

Geet: Marsi, ye tumne teek nahi kiya

Maan: thank you Marsi…..

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Posted: 12 years ago
😊😆👏⭐️👍🏼🤣☺️


sare emotions kam padgaye


that was really awesone



i'm going to read it again and again
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haye allah..thank Dobby that he gave Maan powr to c his Geet whnevr he want.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc one..😊
Loved it😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Maan "JEALOUS" OF ????

"Not anymore .Am not going to give in for your demands...am saying u this is not good for health..All you want is pakore,samosa,and all those nonsense chats from street vendors..Do you even realize what are you askng for?" Screamed Maan in his Bluetooth..

"Am not asking its all your princess who is asking me that *SOB* *SOB*SOB*.You don't love me anymore.Yu think I have became fat..See in the last phrase also u didt address me by any sweet names you use to address me..I had enuf..Am katti with u..Dont call me" sobbed Geet Maan singh Khurana in the phone

"No mistie lis.."

"Bang" the line is disconnected..Maan all you do is end up getting into one of your wife's worst mood swings.."Argh now I need to put all my efforts in manofying her.."

Maan cursed himself mentally.Geet who is the wife of famous business tycoon Maan singh khurana is now seven months pregnanat.Maan was having tougher time in carrying out with her carvings.No that he blames her..All she ask for his roadside foods.Get something from the restarunt and she throws into floor and following that a big tantrum..But still he loved her with all his heart after all she is undergoing and have to undergo toomuch pain to give him his pride..

Now he started from KC to reach Km so that he could manofy his angry wife..He already called her for 15 times in the 10mins and all that reply he got was "THE SUBSCRIBER YOU ARE TRYING TO REACH IS CURRENTLY UNAVAILABLE"

She is not attending my calls.Why is she going to attend Maan .she is angry on you.She is showing the attitude of Mrs.MSK.With that he got whateve she asked for..Hot Samosa's ,pakore and gol gappe from a posh restarunt ad made his way to KM.

This is not the way Km use to be so quiet but today it was so odd that its so quiet..Usually his preggie wife use to throw tantrums on poor butlers..But today its so quiet..Maan feared this quietness and entered his room.He didn't find his wife..He was worried something is surely false..With that he scanned the whole mansion atlast to find her in the room which has its home theatre..

He slowly went in hearing some sounds..There he saw geet cuddled in a sofa and watching some movie..He made his way to her and took her head and placed it in his laps..

He was amused by the fact that she cuddled more into him.He thought she would be hell angry on him..

"Geet baby..What are you doing?"

"Am watching HP series Maan..Now am watching Second part.More 5 part and the last part has two seasons so more 6 movies."

She replied him calmly..

"Honey am sry fr shouting at u… you should take rest not watch movies."

"Par Maan its ok..i understand you were saying for my health haina?See this movie you will love it...See see that creature na its Dobby..It is so cute la.Actually it come's to Harry 's house to stop him from going to Hogwarts.n u know what it will do it will make acall fall on guests who had come to mee harry's aun and uncle..That would be fun...Dobby is said to be a house elf..This dobby loves harry too much s it wants Harry to be safe from villans..But poor harry will go to Hogwarts without lending ears to this creature..

You know thse house elves are soo poor they have to be bound to the masters through out their life..They ll be set fre only when they are given clothes from their masters.."

And she was going on and on and on..Maan was now getting frustrated with this creature which is so called Dobby..

"What the name Dobby is all about..Yuck..I wonder my wife is still a baby wtchin these fantasy kinda movies and a'dmiring such a creature Geet ki Babji save me from this pagali.."To divert her attention he said "Geetu baby I have got u those chats which u have asked for come switch off the moviw we will eat it.."

"No maan I don't want them any now..i am watching movies cant u see."

"Par Geet"

"NO more arguments Maan lemme watch now.."

Maan don't want to get into one of her cranky mood swings so he kept quiet..

It was nearly 10 in the night he was sitting with her for past 6 hrs she was non stop blabbering about Dobby that stupid elf and watching that moviegiving him a live relay..She is praising some cranky animal like thing not even the movie's hero.He had enuf..The only thing she was having for these past hours is pop corn..When he started to move out for his study she didn't let him out..So he had no othe way to escape from her DOBBY'S BIOGRAPHY by GEET.

He had enough by this time..His back started aching sitting in same position with Geet in his laps..Geet even made Nakul to serve their dinner in the room itself and agail it was him who fed her when she was watching her so called fav movie..

He just rested his head on the head rest of the couch when he heard a sob sound..

"Geet Geet mistie why are you crying..?The least thing he needs now is to see her crying..

"Wo Dobby died Maan"

That was the last ounce of patience he had..

"Geet mistie now you are going over board switch off that freaky thing now move on to our room.I don't want my baby to be tired"

"Maan don't shout on me..you only bother about your child not me but see dobby caress about maan so much that it died for him" she cried even more hearing him shout at her..

He realized his mistake for shouting at her..But not again..

"Shona now be quiet..Common lets move to our room..He took great patience to cool her.."

After hours of tears and consoling words from Maan like"Dobby is great honey..He died for Harry only na..Don't worry..See you need to sleep..Come and lie on my lap.."

After hearing loads and loads of praises from Maan about dobby..She fell asleep..

It was morning when Maan woke up he saw Geet's side empty..She will sleep for hours since she is pregnant..But alas she is not there.H e was afraid and started to search her..He went inside wash room to see whether she is having any morning sickness.But noope..

When he came out his eyes literaaly popped out..There what was he visioning he saw that creature standing infront of him with a coffee cup..

"Good morning master..Here is your coffee.Madam asked me to give it to you.." he was startled..

"Who ??Madam??who are u??"

"Sir am dobby..Your house elf..Am here to service Khurana family.."

"what the hell is happening around me..?"

That's when Geet entered the room with one hand on her swollen tummy and the other on her waist supporting her walk..

"Dobby don't wry he will be like that only..You carry on with other works..Don't bother him.."

Dobby bowed in front of Maan and geet went out..

"Hell with that dobby..Geet is asking that creature to not bother about me "thought Maan..

"Geet what is happening here.."Maan scremead at her..

"Maan slowly see baby is getting startled" she said holding her belly more close to her even if that's possible..

"I asked Dobby to work for us and it readily agreed .See its such a good elf..Now get ready and come down."

He is getting frustrated more and more..When he went down after getting ready Geet was sitting in front of Tv ..And dobby was standing way ahead of her..

Maan was disgusted with the very sight of it..

Before Maan could call geet for break fast Dobby came near Maan took his lappy from him and guided him to Dinner table..

Dobby served BF for him and took a plate to Geet..

"We will eat together" he said to no one and took his plate went to living room and sat with Geet.It was then when geet started her carvings..

"Maan I would like to eat mango with salt and chilly powder..Please get me na?" the cute pout could he resist..

He went out and searched whole super market for Mango and came home with what she asked for but he was greeted with the sight of geet savouring mango already..he was shocked.

"Geet how come u eating Mango"

Geet not even giving a glance to him said "Dobby got me"

Maan was geeting his Anger to peak and again she was like Maan "Kulfi??"

When he returned with tKulfi she was having already one..

"Geet how?"

"Dobby got me MAan.."

The answer was same..And it has repeated for "Samosa,chats .And so on"

Atlast by the evening Geet was tired when she was about to get up she slipped. Maan's world stopped b4 he could hold her dobby holded her..And that's it..Maan was a erupting Volcano..

"geet I had enuf of this stupid elf..Now get him out of here."

"Maan don't boss around me..You did nothing to me from morning its all dobby who did it..S I hate you And I love…"

Before she could complete Maan gave a shriek "GEEET"

He opened his eyes to see himself siiting in his bed and Geet was looking at him with concerned eyes holding her tummy..

"Maan are you ok?Don't wry it's a dream see nothing happened to me..Am all fyn"

She said him managing a smile..

"He hugged her tight and felt relived since that was all a dream..He laughed at his crazy dream..Glancing at the time it was alredy 8.00 in the morning..This crazy girl had made him go mad over a mere house elf.And what about all that dream..Was he Jealous of that HOUSE ELF which got more attention from Geet than him..

"Maan I need choco mousse" She winned like a child..

"Get ready Geet we will go out and get you.."

"Love u maan" she said kissing his cheeks and started to get ready..Poor Geet she doesn't know her husband fearing the dream may cum true.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

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awesome dear...
lovely...


thanksss deepa di...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KINGKHANFAN

Awesome Mali👏👏👏...loved it ..


thanksss😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor Maan..nw jealous of An Elf.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wk 9 OS 2
awesome...
OMG now Maan will call her at any time...
poor Geet...
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excellent...
that was so funny...
loved it...

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