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Diya121 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing job dii..
Seriouslt this is one of the hillarious SS...
Cute nokh jokh...
Uff Arjun the Angry smart Rawte..Again got angry..
But this time riya's Tears attracted him...
Loved the end so emotional he called Roshni..
Aww his lonliness😭

Wese all the way amazing job👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
riya nd arjun part was great
loved the last part
it was emotional nd sad
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update. arjun's covo with roshni was soo sweet and emotional. i really hope he gets enough courage to let go of roshni and move on. Riya is soo naive. i really liked the characterisation of riya who has the courage to stand upto arjun. contiue soon thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
riya ki pagalpanti ki toh had nahi hai yaar...

Literally woh Arjun ko dara rahi hai...

emotional update...

Roshni ab kya answer degi...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello Ariyans...back with a new part...

pls read and comment on it..

PS: its a crazy OS...so expect all crazy things before you start reading it...yes, thats a disclaimer...dont tell me that i didnt warn you...

Thanks to all who liked it and commented on it...

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Part8:

He smiled faintly as he spoke up "ghussa ho?? Aakhar mujhe dhaanto na? mujhse jagda karo
.chaahe ek dho taphad bhi maarlena
.lekin mujhse aise mooh matth modhna
.plz Roshni, I cant live without you
..pls baahar aajaao
.I love you! I need you Roshni
.I need you"

His emotions welled up as tears and rolled down
.

Chan se jo tute koi sapna
Jag Suna Suna Lage Jag Suna Suna Lage

Koi Rahe Na Jab Apna
Jag Suna Suna Lage Jag Suna Suna Lage Jag Suna Suna

Hai To Yeh Kyun Hota Hai
Jab Yeh Dil Rota Hai
Roye Sisak Sisak Ki Hawayein
Jag Suna Lage

Chan Se Jo Tute Koi Sapna
Jag Suna Suna Lage Jag Suna Suna Lage

Even the cool sea breeze seemed to be affected by his sorrowful state

there was a misty cloudy tinge of sadness in that engulfing breeze too
.

****************************

Roshini didn't come that night
..she wouldn't because obviously she was just a reflection of his mind state and that day, he was guilty for what he did to Riya
.the momentary slip from his side was making him think that he betrayed his wife
his love
his Roshni
..So, she wouldn't come to him as she was angry
.and it exactly happened that way
..

He lay there on the cold beach sand, his hands entwined with each other and kept under his head
.His eyes fixed to the sky constantly looking out for that bright star which would turn into Roshni and come down to him
.to live the night with him
..

But it never happened and he didn't blink his eyes even once, not willing to lose sight of her at any cost!

*****************

Next morning


The team was getting ready to leave
.Arjun hadn't come down yet
.

"ab yeh Rawte kahaan gaya??
.nikhalne ka waqt hogaya aur isska koyi atha patha nahi
.Chotu, usske kamre mein phir se ek baar check karo
.Shree, Riya
.guest house ke baahar jaake dekho
shaayad jogging pe ho
.beach mein jog karne ki aadhat
." [He stopped abruptly but the entire team was looking at Rathod in shock wondering how he knew it] I mean aadhat hone ki chances hai
.ab kadhe kadhe mera mooh kya dekh rahe ho
.jaao
.we don't have an entire day
."

All set out on Mission Find Rawte
.

Shree and Riya are just walking around when Shree spots Arjun lying on the sand a little far away
.."wahaan dekho Ri
." Points to the sight which caught his eyes!

Riya looks at that and then wonders what happened
..Riya suddenly gets a feeling that may be he was angry for her behavior
and so he had come there straight from her room the previous night
.

She asks Shree to wait there and walks up to him leaving behind a totally puzzled Shree
..He couldn't understand the reason for her going alone there but he decide to let it go
.he would ask her the reason later
.

Riya walked up to the spot and saw that his eyes were still staring at the blue sky up above
.

As her frame came into his vision, he blinked his eyes and turned to her
..no in fact glared at her
.The futile wait for Roshni, the entire night had left him frustrated and according to him she was responsible for that! His guilt had taken the form of anger for Riya, the girl who had made him lose his self control!

He got up quickly and furiously spoke up "mere Roshni ko mujhse dhoor toh kardiya tumne
ab aur kya karne aayi ho??kitni baar kaha ke dhoor raho mujhse
.[after a fuming look at her] chale jaao yahaan se
"

Saying that, Arjun walked away leaving Riya with tears
..She didn't understand what was wrong
All she could get from his outburst that Roshni was someone very important to Arjun
..

Shree saw Arjun walking away and came to Riya
the tears in her eyes weren't hidden from him
."kya hua Ri? Khadoos ne kuch kaha kya?"

Riya wiped the tears
"kuch nahi
.chalo, chalthe hai"

Shree nodded but he knew that all wasn't well


They were soon on their way back to Mumbai
..Riya had decided to keep her distance from Arjun no matter what
.

***************************

Days passed on and cases weren't any less too
.

True to her promise to herself, she maintained strict professional relationships with him
.and at times avoided his company too
.It wasn't hidden from him either
.though it irked him at times, he chose to ignore it
..

Meanwhile, she had known about his past and about who Roshni was to him from Shree and Chotu
.She felt a strange kind of sympathy for the man he was but then she didn't dare to express it even once
.one reason being the insults he had hurled upon her and his warning to her to keep away from him
.and the other reason was Shree's warning to her that she should never broach this topic in his presence
..

She couldn't break her promises
.so she never stepped out of her own self enforced walls
.but again, his accusation of she had distanced Roshni from him poked her somewhere
.Why did he say that?? What did she do??Though she wanted to know the reason, she didn't dare confront him even once
..

It was one of those days when she had purposefully ducked the chance of going with him for a questioning session
..She had opted out on the pretext of having some research work to do
.It somehow pricked him
.

Rathod: Riya, tum Rawte ke saath Jain's ke ghar jaavo
.

Riya took her stand now, "sir, mujhe kuch important kaam hai
.[When she saw Rathod's enquiring expressions]
.woh aapne unn sab family members ke call records check karne ko kaha tha na?kya main yahi rukh ke Shree ke saat woh karloom? That's more important na?waise bhi Arjun sir ko kisi aur ke zaroorat hi kya hai? woh toh sab kuch khud karne mein vishwas rakhte hai
.phir
."

Arjun cut her short glaring at her
"haan Rathod
main chala jaatha hoom
waise bhi isske saat chalne se case mein kuch zyaadha farq nahi padhne waala"

[He smirked at her while she glared back and that insult didn't go well with her]

********************************

But he had marked it in his mind to get answers from her
..He had conveniently forgotten his warnings and insults or perhaps he hadn't voiced it out in his perfect senses and so, now he felt his ego bruised when she ignored him and his presence
..

He wanted a reply from her as to why she was avoiding him
..He didn't know why it was important but still he wanted to know


[To be continued]

so how was it?? reply to me in ur comments...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Di ab kaho lol...
yipee aahun aahun me 1st...!
party đŸ€Ł
Gud morning di
hv a grt sunday wid arjun day as well đŸ„ł
Di đŸ€—
gud update di...
aww arjun bhaiya pain...
omg sam knws abt arjun routine too gud..
uff arjun bro confuse person hehe
riya se drm!!
loved it di
love u
tc..
me dance first yahoo...!
pm se bi pehle!!
Edited by Payal_156 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res!
Edited*
Woww 👏
This Os has come a long way from where I had last read 😆 😉
I loved the crazy bit 😆
Riya was Mashallah 😉 ...So daring 😆
Arjun ki hawwa hi nikal di 😆
Hmm...So Arj is angry now đŸ„±
Waiting for more 😳
Edited by lola123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update : loved it
feeling so bad for arjun he is thinking he betrayed roshni that's why she is not coming today 😭
arjun yelled at riya :(
riya decided to stay away from arjun and it irked him sometimes
so riya knows about roshni now
arjun wants to know why is riya avoiding him
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice change in the mode chechi
its good to see the sudden change from the cute scenes to much more intense part
waiting for the face off

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Posted: 13 years ago
hmmm so arjun is blaming riya that she made him away frm roshni and riya was left confused😭
riya is trying to ignore arjun and arjun is miffed wit this his male ego is hurt...
i hope arjun realises soon that he is actually attracted towards her
interesting part waiting for the next part😊

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