SAJAN FF... A NIGHT TO REMEMBER... PART 8_Upd - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi everyone... Thank you for all the likes and comments and I really appreciate ur suggestions, that would help me improve my writings... So, here is the next part...
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PART - 2: GUNJAN??

GIRLS' HOSTEL:

Dia was in her room later that evening... In spite of being the daughter of Rishi Maalik, one of the well known businessman and trustee of Excel; she had to stay in the girl's hostel along with the other girls... Rishi Maalik is a very strict disciplinarian who had always made sure that his children Dia and Uday receives the best but should not get special treatment or attention for their status, family background or being the children of the college trustee... Hence, both the brother-sister duo in spite of their disliking the idea had to stay at the respective boys' and girls' hostel inside the college campus... But besides their disliking; both the siblings had only one factor each to prefer staying in the hostel... For Uday it was the Girls' hostel; which was just a few minute walk from the boys' hostel, and for Dia it was Sammy who loved to stay at the boys' hostel with his friends rather than staying at home...

After receiving the highest shock of the day; Dia was waiting grumpily for her new room partner Miss Gunjan London Bhushan... Freshers are always to be paired with a senior student was one of the rules of the hostel which was set by Indira aunty, or her would be mother-in-law which Dia likes to think of Indira Shergill; another trustee of the college and her Sammy's Mom... Earlier Dia had shared this room with Nupur when she was a fresher a year before... But now Nupur being a final year student has been shifted to another room along with her friend CJ, and Dia was left here to share the room with the new student in their department... Gunjan... How could she do this to her??

Staying with a fresher of her own year would be a much better idea than staying with a first year; was the new idea again proposed by none other than Indira aunty... Knowing Dia very well since her childhood Indira aunty knew it would be difficult for Dia to get along with a junior... And so, without changing the rule she had came up with this so called brilliant idea for saving her privacy; as Dia had requested her secretly... But who knew Dia would be just pissed off by the mention of this very girl... She had been in a really bad temper since morning due to this girl; and now the same girl would be staying with her in the same room for the next two years... That's intolerable, why is the whole world being so cruel to her?? She never did any harm to anyone, never behaved rudely to anyone; well except all those stupid girls who tries to befriend with her Sammy... Total injustice...

At sharp 4.30 pm she heard two knocks on the door which irked her utmost... So, finally Miss London has arrived, Dia's temper knew no bound as she got up and headed towards the door... She felt like screaming get lost after opening the door and slam it right on her face soon after... But no sooner did she open the door with a jerk, her jaw dropped at the sight... Before her stood a very slim girl of her own age wearing a light pink full sleeved salwar suit; her hair open and she was wearing specs and possess a milky white complexion... Who was she?? Dia wondered... May be the other girl; she thought, but wasn't the other girl supposed to be Annie's roommate?? Has she by mistake turned up to her room instead of Annie's room?? Annie is in room no. 309 just opposite to her room... But how could that be possible?? She should know her room no. and the no. 302 engraved on the door clearly says that this was not the right room... But soon another thought struck her mind... Did Indira aunty alter the arrangement?? Off course, it had to be... May be she had changed her decision knowing that Dia was upset... But Dia was left speechless once again as soon as the girl gave her a quiet smile and introduced herself '

"Hi, I'm Gunjan"...

What???

She???

Gunjan???

Miss London???

No way...

Wasn't she supposed to be stylish, modern, hot and what not, as per the college rumours?? Well, Nupur Di had told her several times that Gunjan is a sweet girl and either rich or hot, but she was not convinced whole heartedly... She had been upset all day long, ruined her makeup, smudged her eye liner, ignored Sammy when he came to the canteen with Benji and tried to pacify her, and on top of that she had even refused to attend the party which Nupur Di and Sammy had organized at their farmhouse in the evening... All because of her!!... She had spoiled her whole day for this behenji... She was definitely not Sammy's type... Dia's face glowed up immediately as she stretched out her hand towards her...

"Hey Gunjan, I'm Dia, your new roommate... Welcome to Excel"... Gunjan gave her a pleasant smile and shook hands with Dia while she chuckled; she would definitely be fun... "Please come in"... Dia stepped aside and let her enter in the room...

"So, this is our room for the next two years", Dia said spreading her arms wide... "The right side bed, wardrobe and study table is all yours as I'm already on the left side"... Gunjan in return gave her another pleasant smile followed by a thank you while she dragged her trolley bag to her bed...

"Do you need any help in unpacking??" Dia asked her reluctantly with a fake smile adorned on her face but was relaxed after hearing a polite denial from Gunjan's side... "Well then please make yourself comfortable, I will see you later"... She was about to leave but soon another idea struck her; why not invite this behenji at the evening party... With her it would definitely be fun... Besides that intentionally or not she was the reason Dia has spoiled a whole day, which means she has to pay for that... With another chuckle Dia turned towards her once again...

After a few minutes of persuasion and some gentle denial from Gunjan's side in the beginning she had finally agreed to join the evening party at Shergill farmhouse... Dia was already on cloud nine when she left Gunjan to freshen up and reached Annie's room... Annie's new roommate was yet to arrive and hence she was free as always to accompany Dia with her shopping for the evening party... She needs to look best; after all this was Sammy's party... But she was more impatient sharing her experience about Gunjan with their group and hatching out plans to make fun of her in the party... You know guys, she is a total behenji and we would not need to do much to make her fool was Dia's view about Gunjan and planning and all the arrangements to conduct it were made accordingly... She had only one hour in her hand to come out with a plan, make sure about the arrangements and then go for shopping before returning to the hostel...

One hour; Gunjan would be all alone in the room, she made it sure that the door was properly shut... Dia has asked her to be ready and she will come back after an hour to pick her up and together they will head towards the Shergill farmhouse which was about forty five minutes drive from the college campus... The party would begin at seven o'clock at the evening and Dia will return around five thirty in the hostel to get ready for the party, till then she has one hour in her hand... One hour she can be herself; be the way she is, but before that she has a pending task to be completed... Gunjan dialled a private number and a male voice answered over the phone in a stern tone...

- Where are you??

Gunjan: I have already reached here; in the girl's hostel... And right now I'm in my room...

Voice: What?? You're calling from your room?? How can you even do that?? Isn't your room partner present there??

Gunjan: Relax... I'm all alone in the room... I know my purpose in this college... Don't think I'll be so careless with such a crucial matter...

Voice: You better be... No one should doubt you...

A few seconds of silence prevailed between them... Both of them lost in some trance at the thought of their mission... They will have to be alert, very alert... Not a slightest mistake should happen, no one should doubt her intentions, and no one should get any minimal hint about the mission; or else everything will be ruined... He can't let that happen; not after waiting for so many years... This was his last chance and he can't effort to lose this one chance he had awaited nine long years... And Gunjan was very well aware of this...

The silence was broken by the voice-

-So, which room you are staying??

Gunjan: Room no. 302...

Voice: And your roommate I suppose is Dia Maalik??

Gunjan: Yes...

Voice: And?? What was her opinion about you??

Gunjan broadly grinned at this question... She couldn't help remembering how over excited Dia was after meeting her and realizing that she being dressed in traditional outfits, with specs and being soft spoken must be some behenji... She had treated her well and welcomed her so warmly; first in the hostel room and then even in the evening party, but what she couldn't figured out was that Gunjan is much smarter than her...

-She was overjoyed seeing me... And yes, she has invited me in the evening party at her friend's farmhouse... And she is up to some kinda plan for welcoming me; you know the typical her type of girls' ideas of having fun by teasing others...

Voice: Go for it; and pretend the way you are told... Be naive and nervous...

Gunjan: I will...

Voice: Fine, I'll call you later for further information...

With this the person over the phone ended the call...

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Hope you liked it... Looking forward for ur feedback...

Edited by blue_jay - 12 years ago
MahamRana thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Lovely update
what is gunjan upto??????????
is she on a mission??????
omg!!!!!!!!!! cant wait...
PLLLZZz continue soon👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update...really very interesting !!!!
can't wait for sajan frist meet.
plzz update next part soon !!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: MahamRana

Lovely update

what is gunjan upto??????????
is she on a mission??????
omg!!!!!!!!!! cant wait...
PLLLZZz continue soon👍🏼

Yes she is on a mission... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow gunjan is very smart than expected. Very interesting. Continue soon. Thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AUSOME :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb part, Soniya. I loved how you wrote every detail. I am very excited to read about Gunjan's mission. I know it will be some time till it is revealed, but yet, can you update the next part please??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwaNia_2

Superb part, Soniya. I loved how you wrote every detail. I am very excited to read about Gunjan's mission. I know it will be some time till it is revealed, but yet, can you update the next part please??

I will update soon, just adding some details and modifying some parts...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Excellent !!Gunjan's mission..hmm..plz plz do cont soon<33
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Hi everyone... Thanks for all the likes and comments... I really appreciate your suggestions, that would help me improve my writings... So, Here is the next part...
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PART - 3: FIRST SIGHT

SHERGILL FARMHOUSE:

Gunjan entered the party along with Dia... The place was completely dark but she could hear a faint music coming from the other side, but no one was visible to her... Saying she wasn't nervous at all would definitely be wrong... She was asked to act all novice which was making her even more nervous... She was fiddling with her dupatta and Dia seemed to enjoy watching her... She made a slight gesture with her eyes to someone which didn't go unnoticed by Gunjan... As expected Annie rushed out of nowhere- 'Come on Dia, everyone is waiting for you'... Saying this she pulled away Dia hurriedly as per their plan leaving Gunjan behind alone in the dark... And no sooner did they left her, Benji, Chaco and the other boys surrounded her and started teasing her...

Gunjan had no idea how to deal with all these crazy, harmless boys... She had to do something in order to stop this torture and she even got one chance when a boy was about to give her a welcome hug... Gunjan pushed him hard with all her forces resulting he stumble back and fell on the two other boys who were standing behind him... The place was lit up immediately with several blue neon lights and everyone witnessed Chaco and two other boys were rolling on the ground... Someone yelled calling out a name... Samrat... A chaos was created while Gunjan was trying to find a way to get out of that place but before she could do that someone stepped in the spot and blocked her escape route... He was standing in her way purposely leaving no way for her to walk away while his eyes were on the three boys on the ground... Gunjan could visibly sense the wry expression on his face; he was not going to let her go without apologising... A sweet Sorry from Gunjan reached him which made him turn his eyes from the boys to Gunjan when she observed him closely... He was clad in black with a tri colour wristband on his right hand and his hazel brown eyes were enhancing the cute chocolate boy looks even more...

But what she didn't observe was Samrat left speechless even for a few seconds seeing this doe eyed beauty before him... Her long open hairs were all ruffled by the wind and some locks of hair were caressing her face... She was wearing a silvery white salwar suit and the blue neon light was adding more mystery to her beauty and with all her appearance she was looking no less than an angel... She was saying something; maybe she was apologizing for her behaviour, but Samrat had no idea; he was too busy staring at her face... Some chirping noise he could hear around him, but had no idea what was that... But just then Nupur's voice was heard which quieten all the laughing and giggling of the boys around her... Just chill dude! She is definitely not your type, Samrat mentally checked himself and distracted his mind hearing his Di's voice... "What's going on here?? Everybody, leave her alone, Sam you too", Nupur stood by Gunjan and shooed the boys away from the place... All the boys left hurriedly including Samrat, but before leaving the sight finally for once he turned back to see Gunjan was smiling with his Di completely oblivious to a pair of eyes that was following her...

Nupur who had already formed a sisterly bond within few minutes with Gunjan took her along to introduce her to Mayank and CJ... Gunjan being a student of their category unlike the beauty queen Dia; CJ and Mayank too didn't took much time to open up with her... Not much time they got to spend together before Dia popped out of nowhere remembering Gunjan all of a sudden and took her along with her after excusing from the others... "I am so sorry Gunjan; I left you alone like this, but I promise it won't happen again"... Dia faked apologise to her... "Come, I will introduce you to others"... Nupur and Mayank exchanged a meaningful look knowing very well Dia's intentions behind her nice behaviour... Sure enough she was to play some pranks upon her...

Dia introduces Gunjan to her group Annie, Benji, Chaco and Dodo or ABCD KIDS as named by Mayank... She had to face a second round of teasing, this time regarding her clothes... But she didn't even considered to their remarks; she was not here to walk for a fashion show... She has other big things to achieve... "Hello Gunjan Ji"... Gunjan's chain of thoughts was broken and she turned towards the voice to find a geek with formal dress, neatly gelled hair and wearing high powered specs... "Myself Bhavesh Kumar", he introduced himself... But something more interesting about the geek caught her attention; his hazel brown eyes... She had seen those eyes before and would now recognize them anywhere, anytime... Those were His eyes... Samrat...

So, this was their childish plan... Pretending to be a geek, befriend her and pair up with her to make a fool of her... Had she been just a new student and nothing else; she would have really burst into laughter... But she wasn't just a student, moreover she was strictly ordered to be naive and nervous... Gunjan tried her best to compose herself and suppress a smile but could not succeed completely... Her attempt to suppress her smile and the slight glint at the corner of her eyes didn't go unnoticed by him...

Samrat felt awkward at the situation... He realized very well that he was caught by her and now going with the plan would mean making a fool of him before her... Damn Dia and her stupid plans, Samrat mentally cursed her and more than her he needed to curse himself... Damn you Samrat... She had seen him earlier and just some make up and change of clothes would not help... How could you even forget just like that that she was a scholarship student who was studying in London??... She is definitely not some brainless girl... But right now Samrat's main concern was his own reputation... What if she discloses everything, his image will be ruined... Backing out was not an option, everyone would question him for being a spoilsport and he would have to answer... In both the cases his image and reputation will be at stake...

Samrat gave one look towards Nupur and Mayank... Both of them were giggling being the ones to realize his situation very well, and his Di raised both her eyebrows to tease him... She is impossible; never leave any single chance to tease her brother... His Di is the only one girl in the whole Excel whom Samrat never dared to mess with... May be the girl in front of him would be another and he had already got the hunch... Right behind Gunjan; Rahul and Praveen were holding a banner for him in which Bhavesh's dialogues was written in case if he forgets...

In that helpless state when almost hundred pair of eyes was scanning him in desperation; Samrat heard a soft and calm voice that came to his rescue, "Bhavesh Ji, you were saying something"... It was Gunjan's... Samrat looked at her face completely bewildered to find her eyes which can speak volume gave him a quiet assurance to go on without except him noticing it... Samrat startled for once but then continued with their stupid plan while everyone enjoying thinking that they were fooling Gunjan... But the reality was something else, that together they were fooling each and everyone who were watching them... None of them said the word, but both the souls realized that they are definitely going to be very special Friend...

The rest of the evening Samrat spent his entire time with Gunjan... He had already left his Bhavesh avatar by then and went back to his real self, introduced her to all his friends and had formed a light hearted bonding which he hadn't shared with any girl till that day except Nupur... But whereas both Samrat and Gunjan were enjoying their newly formed friendship; someone pulled a completely annoying face throughout the party... It was Dia who was irked to the core witnessing this intimate relationship growing between her childhood crush and her new room partner whom she started to hate once again... She had tried her best to distract Samrat several times, but failed miserably every time... Doesn't Sam and Gunjan look good together?? Uday's comment worsen her mood even more resulting Dia leaving the party early with Annie after smacking Uday left, right and centre... Nupur had assured Gunjan that she will take her back to the hostel, but at the end of the party she was sitting on Samrat's bike while returning back...

After a nocturnal ride on their way back from the Shergill farmhouse; Samrat's bike entered the campus and stopped before the girls' hostel... After some more chit chats and bidding a sweet goodnight to each other Samrat finally headed towards the boys' hostel... Gunjan was about to enter when the screen of her phone glowed up and started to vibrate...

Call from a private number...

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Please do let me know how was it...

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