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kunchu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Sumu4JayD
Raato ki neend jise na aaye... Din ka chayn kaise wo paaye... Sapno k liye neend hai zaruri, neend bin raath kaisi hai majboori... Jagti hu mai, jaagta hai ye sheher... Bin palke jhaptaye na jane kab aagayi ye seher... Kash mai sou paati, neend k liye nahi, par sapne dekhne ko... Kaash mai firse jeepaati, firse jeeno._________ di it was very impactful... Ye parh k dilse ek hi dua nikli... Kaash ye banda so paaye, chand palo k liye hi sahi... Isse neend aajaye...

that was awesome dear...

thank you so much...

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Hey ...

That was So heart-touching ...

It was wonderful !!!

Even I wondered what does Arjun actually do during the night time ... :S

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Amazing...
Arjun's sleepless nights was well described..

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-SREE93-

@-SREE93-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

wow di it was fab

poor arjun

feeling bad 4 him

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Surya Sinkar

@.9.Sara.9.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Nice 1 Heli

D feelings of Arjun ,u beautifully expressed here

Tfs to Tina fr dis wonderful challenge

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..pink..

@..pink..

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Awesome portrayel of Arjun's sleepless nights and pain...👏
the pain was very much visible😭
poor Arjun..felt bad for him..

U r an awesome writer Helna...⭐️wonderful writing..👏