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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

awesome os
fell sad for his this state
thanx 4 the pm

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Amazing OS

beautifully written

thanks for the PM :)

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ALEKHYA VENDRA

@alee001

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

u penned down veryy welll!!!

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏!!!!

superbbb!!!!

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Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

@mishree

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

hai de it is awesome os

arjun has lot of pain which is not much discrb in show bt u really amazing who express the felling f his lonlyness thanx 4 pm

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rocking_gal

@rocking_gal

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

wow!

it was gud...

i liked ur way of writing,the way u play with words and show the feelings of the person to readers is really good...!👏

loved ur os!!!😊😊

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Ohh realy awesome os..
ohh my poor arjun...
chalo finaly pata chal gaya ke arjun..raat main kerta kya hai..

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

superb... it was very emotional...
very well written. beautiful portray of emotions... could imagine every scene in front of my eyes...
feeling so bad for arjun... :'(

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Raato ki neend jise na aaye... Din ka chayn kaise wo paaye... Sapno k liye neend hai zaruri, neend bin raath kaisi hai majboori... Jagti hu mai, jaagta hai ye sheher... Bin palke jhaptaye na jane kab aagayi ye seher... Kash mai sou paati, neend k liye nahi, par sapne dekhne ko... Kaash mai firse jeepaati, firse jeeno._________ di it was very impactful... Ye parh k dilse ek hi dua nikli... Kaash ye banda so paaye, chand palo k liye hi sahi... Isse neend aajaye...

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

beautifully penned down.

10 on 10

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