KR OS:Perennial relations!!!

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Hey guys this is me again with an OS..and this time going against my own record its just a short one... so won't bore you for long...
May be there have been stories by other writers on the same concept or scenario..sorry for that in advance only..but it is purely my take on things...

And I just wanted to convey my thanks to everyone out their for your beautiful wishes..thanku thanku so much...

Okay here it is... please don't come with jootas and chappals after completing it...

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Main hoon gumsum tu bhi khamosh hai
Sach hai samay ka hi sab dosh hai
Dhadkan dhadkan ik gham rehta hai
Jaane kyu phir bhi dil kehta hai
Jee le zara, jee le zaraa
Kehta hai dil jee le zara
Aye humsafar, aye humnawa
Aa paas aa jee le zara...




"Shh...stop it...shhh..."
he extended his hand to turn off alarm clock and pulled the comforter over his head, rolled to other side only to feel feather soft lips of hers on his cheeks...

"Good morning rey..." she hummed into his ear... and pecked his cheek bone, winnowing her warmth over his face...

He snickered softly..
"Morning Baatcutter..." and again snuggled in his cozy bed...

she twitched his blanket off and passed him an angry glare...
" Rey wake up, its 6:30 already and you have a herculean job to do... just freshen up and wake..."

"Hey don't say anything against my princess okay..." he snapped back at her while getting off from bed...

"Fine.. you both father daughter duo are just insufferable" she admitted it while surrendering her hands in air and moving across the bed post...


He chuckled at her fake anger and yanked her into his manly frame...
" Rey what are you doing, just go get ready na... and..." but he embedded her mouth with his palm stopping her from further trivial talks...


" How much do you speak?? can't you be quiet... day and night keep on jabbering.. ain't you feel tired or something..."

she gasped at him with her eyes wide open...


"what?? now don't waste time and give my daily dose of kiss... as you see i have things to do.." rey grabbed her from waist and jostled her feminine body into his chiseled chest...


she beamed with demureness and dropped her lashes... turning scarlet...

Rey leaned in further holding her her chin which was now bathed in radiance of the morning sun... grazed her luscious lips ambit with his thumb... he enthusiastically reached out and placed his hands on her silk like cheeks... he could sense her having heavy inhales...not making her await more he brushed his tepid lips over hers... at that instant he felt the same passion he have for her, coursing through his body as a gush of fluid streaming down, even after years ...

he closed his eyes and let a droplet slip through them and shuddered uncontrollably...

He stroked her hair gently, planting a loving peck on her head and then nuzzling his nose button against it... she giggled and whooped loudly making him come out of her trance...

"whatt??" Rey asked her in confusion...

in response she just indicated him towards the wall clock which struck 7 'O' clock...


and in anxiety he ran up and down the room...
." Ohh god.. baatcutter i am again late... this is all because of you" he nonchalantly blabbered things...

"Excuse me"
she exclaimed in amazement...and arched her eyebrows in question..

"Ohh... yes, It is you my dear... If for not your this glorious beauty I had distracted myself, I would have been up with my routine already..." he chortled in her divine presence...

"You are such a Lousy Sloth Mr.singhania..." she scoffed and became red in anger...

"Aww... I love you baatcutter..." and he closed his washroom door...

"Be ready fast and get her also... have your breakfast..."


"Okay... I.. I captain..." he resonated from shower...


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"Hey little princess... wake up..." Rey perched himself beside his diminutive fay...

his small wonder, was interrupted by a cute yawn and stretch of his 13 year old daughter...

"Good Morning Daddy..." she cling towards his shoulder and nuzzled in his cozy embrace...

"Princess... so what's your schedule today??"


"Nothing much Pumpkin, just half day at school and salsa with Yash at Academy.. you know, how much Aunt Sharon was earnest for getting me on board with that nitwit for a couple dance..."

Rey knew why exactly sharon was decisive about his daughter dancing with her Son...
" I think I have some colloquy to be made with Swayam.. Arrghh!!! shar. they are only in teens..." he was sunken in his possessive Daddy shoes while on other hand his Baby was twaddling about her hostility for his best-friends son... He could feel the days of yore return back...

"You know Daddy I so loath that dork Yash... Urrghh... yesterday he was about to stick his gum in my hairs... look at his nerve.."
she threw verbal curses at her best friend...

and Rey kept on mooning over his angelic daughter's fierce face... he guffawed at thought of future of his two apple of eyes... may be same as his and baatcutter or like his besties...

He fondled with her hairs and asked her...
" Shriya baby why don't you get ready, as Swayam uncle will be arriving soon to pick you up" Reyaansh tried to pacify his over hyper and loquacious Kid...

"Yayy!! swayam uncle will be coming over for today's drive... i will be at dinning table in 20 pumpkin.." she gave him a warm kiss then popped up and lurch out of her canopy bed... while somersaulting made her way to washroom...


Rey nodded his head...
" she is a zealous Elf just like you Kriya..."

He made his way to Kitchen for breakfast...

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While having their breakfast both Rey and Shriya farced over things happening in school, Dance academy... about Rey's work in office... Shriya's constant nagging about Yash.. how he played pranks at her and she gave him a good lesson of not to mess with this Junior Singhania pixie...

"Shriya remember about tomorrow...??"
Rey pumped her with reminder...

"Yes Dad.. and I have already told Yash to be here in his ethnic attire...and warned him not to show his face in those yucky street type over baggy pants.. otherwise i will show him door straight away...
(at this he sneered) will granny coming too??"

"Yeah.. she will be visiting us too my princess..."
Rey became a bit solemn at this... Shriya acknowledged the tension and diverted him...

"Daddy these are worlds best paranthas you know.." shriya mumbled while gorging on them in haste... and sipping water to swallow down..


" I know baby after all it is your mommy's recipe...Hey easy...easy young lady.."
Rey spoke in solicitude as he saw her choking on some morsels...

"Sowwiee... I just can't stop relishing over them, they are just yummy.." she took another bite ...


they heard a blaring noise of horn following yelling voices of Yash calling for shriya to come...

causing her bouncing from chair exigently and rushing towards main door... but something made her stop in her tracks... she yawed at her place and passed a cheeky grin to Rey, who was by now standing just few steps from her...with his arms crossed at his chest, with mock annoying face... Shriya Roll in aisles, ruffled her Dad's velvety locks and Kissed him Goodbye...

"Bye pumpkin"
she waved her hand...to which her father replied joyfully...

Rey was looking at the retreating figure of his cherubic fairy... when he felt two hands enveloping around his torso from back... and blowing airs on his nape,his lips curved gingerly...and entwining his fingers with hers he admitted...

"I love you Kriya... for giving me the most precious gift of my life... Shriya... but I hate you for..."
He couldn't complete his sentence as his skin burned with fires under her petals which pressed on his shoulder blades...

"I had no option other then that Rey..."
as the last words reverberated, tears spilled down from both of their orbs...

"Okay... Now enough of this... don't you have office Mr.Lubber"
she pushed him out...

"Hey... do you have some vocab of most disgusting names in the world??? i mean what is with you and your daughter, both always calls me with different stupid titles..like nowadays she calls me Pumpkin... can you believe that..."


She laughed at his plight..
" You know I have my own supernatural namesake dictionary... and for Shriya i will only say this; like mother like daughter.."

"Ya..right"...

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There was a holy fire burning in middle and sharon-swayam with their son and smriti were present attending puja..just like from past two years...

Rey was sitting with Shriya adjacent to him..giving offerings of clarified butter (ghee) and other auspicious prayer elements...

"Now deceased husband will give last ritual offerings in this sacred fire...for Mrs.Kriya Singhania's soul to rest in peace"
Priest instructed Reyaansh to do the rituals...

everyone in the room was having moist eyes... they reminisced how three years ago...their Kriya abodes to heaven after meeting with a car accident, she was driving back from dance academy but on her way she collided with a truck coming from wrong side...It was lurid day for Reyaansh and everyone else..
.as someone lost his beloved, his soul-mate..his wife...someone lost her mother, her guide... one lost his best friend, his partner in crime, his support... someone lost her daughter, her own part, and someone lost her colleague, her best friend, her secret shoulder, her soul sister...
Most of it they were astrayed from one novel person who left deep imprints on their life with pure relations...she was thread who binds them with a string of love and ardor...

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Rey was standing in living area gazing at his elegant wife's portrait.. admiring her celestial persona, her alluring aura... when he felt a quivering hand at his shoulder...he turned around to find his mother-in-law in pools of tears... he held her for support and gestured to not cry...

"Till when rey... she has gone away, far away from us to live peacefully... Son you have to move on..." Smriti gripped his hand so that she won't fall down...

"No... Mom I have already cleared this.. I was, is and will always be husband of your daughter only... I belong to Kriya only, she was the first and last one... though she has ditched me but she herself can't take this right from me..."

"What about Shriya...rey she needs a mother, she is in a stage of life where she will be craving for a feminine love, she..."

Rey this time with utmost austere in his voice.
." You are there, sharon is... moreover I am here for her every precious step... It is difficult but not impossible, i will be her mother too..." he closed his eyelids leaving a trail of tears...

"And what about you rey?? Don't you need to have vibes of love again, give your life a chance... spread your wings..."
Sharon spoke for the first time sobbing...

To this Rey passed them most soothing smile as he felt her presence again... He opened his deer eyes to find her standing right next to him, with charming crescent smile on her face... her hands lingered over his...
" I have my love Sharon I don't need someone else to fill the place which can never be devoid.."

"Huu... your love??"
sharon stated in confusion...

To this Rey stretched his hand in direction of outhouse, on its porch was sitting his little princess 'Shriya'...

"Shriya?? But how can that be... she is your daughter rey" Sharon again probe him...

"Who said that one can't shower his love on their Kid..." Rey bluntly said...

"For heavens sake.. uurghhh... Swayam I can't do this...just deal with him" a very frustrated sharon stepped aside making way for her husband...

Swayam walked towards them with his hands shoved back in his pockets and a small grin on his face...

"I am with Rey... i know what he is saying, and i am into this..." as soon as swayam spoke Rey engulfed him in an embrace...

"Thank you buddy..."

"No need Rey... just Kameene, you can comprehend Kriya's aura around us, don't you??" Swayam catcalled in rey's ear...

Rey backed immediately and looked at Swayam in bewilderment...
"Don't lie... I can read your eyes, and I know kriya well..may be more than you..." swayam cleared...

both crackled and hugged again...

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Rey was lying on his bed after exhausting day full of mental and physical turmoils... when he heard her melodies words...

"
Why don't you agree with mom and sharon, why don't you..." he placed his finger on her lips...

" Shhh... it is not that I can't... it is simply that... I don't want to... " rey explained in most straight manner... "for Shriya you are her mother only... she will be having Mrs. Kriya Reyaansh Singhania only..."

She wiped her damp eyes...
Then only his door opened with a creak...
."Daddy...I am not able to sleep, can i sleep here tonight" Shriya asked with a childlike innocence...

"Of course...princess, come here..."
he patted to empty side of his bed...

She plunged on it and cradled herself between him and kriya...
"Dad..can you sing that lullaby for me, which mom used sing...please..."

"Whattt...you know i can't sing, i am a frog..."
to this he saw a chuckling kriya and glared at hard at her...

"pleaseee...please..please..."
shriya buttered him up...

"okay..will try but don't expect it to be like your mom..."


shriya nodded her head and rey started cosseting her forehead...

Chandaniya chhup jaana re
Chhan bhar ko luk jaana re
Nindiya aankhon mein aaye
Bitiya meri so jaaye
hmm mm...
Nindiya aankhon mein aaye
bitiyaa meri so jaaye
Leke god mein sulaao
Gaao raat bhar sunaao
Main lori lori
Ho main lori lori

Lori lori lori
Lori lori lori
Lori lori lori
Lori lori lori



Shriya wrapped her arms around Rey..and yawned feeling sleepy... Rey chortled at her antiques, she took all her features from her mother.. she was the last thing he possessed of Kriya's... Their only daughter... a tear skipped his eyes..when he felt a hand brushing them away.. he looked down and found Shriya peacefully sleeping wandered off to her dream land.. and found kriya smiling beautifully at him with utmost pride for him...

Gardhaniyaan chhun chhun baje
Palkan mein sapna saje
Dheeme-dheeme haule-haule
Pawan basanti dole
hmm hmm...
Dheeme dheeme haule haule
Pawan basanti dole
Leke god mein sulaao
Gaaon raat bhar sunaao
Main lori lori
Oh oh ho main lori lori

He thought while sweeping his fingers through shriya's hairs... "Although i gave away your belongings in charity as tradition but I am sorry kriya i couldn't part away your wedding attire and jewellery.. just a Little wish came to my heart that how our little fairy will look in that royal belonging of yours... hope you forgive me... "

Meri Muniya Rani bane
Mehlon ka Raja miley
Dekhe khushiyon ke mele
Dard kabhi na jhele
Oh ho..
Dekhe khushiyon ke mele
Dard kabhi na jhele
Leke god mein sulaao
Gaao raat bhar sunaao
Main lori lori
hmm hmm main lori lori

Both rey and shriya slept with kriya guarding over them like a shield from heaven...

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"You know Shriya its been years, since i am listening to Rey Dad and Kriya Mom's immortal love... their bond even after death... but whenever i listen this from you, I feel like falling more and more for Rey Dad's impeccable and self less love for her..."
Yash uttered to Shriya while cuddling her from back and rest his hand on her belly...

"Yash.. don't mind, but this is true...he is my first love, my hero... I love him for his undying love which even beaten unavoidable harshness of life...My mom's demise.."
shriya sniffed while glancing over her parents full sized portrait...but smirked in a second... while caressing her hand over her hardly seen baby bump...

"And...today on their 30th anniversary, you are gonna give him his most deserved gift...you should be proud honey... come lets break the news..." yash placed his one hand behind her lower back and another at the serene place where his angel is resting...

They both moved in Rey's direction and called for his attention...
"Dad..." Yash said...

"yes..dear..."

"pumpkin..wo...wo... I.. i..." shriya was fluttering inside her throat...

"Whatt... did he cheated on you or something for which he will regret"
Rey stood up in defense of his daughter.. aiming on yash...

"No..No.. why would I do something like that... I love her..." A very firghtened Yash hide himself behind Shriya...

"Dad.. he did nothing like that"
shriya made sure to bumped in between before Rey will beat him black and blue... like he did with her other Ex's...

"Besides it is done by me only...I am responsible for that only" yash meekly uttered only to get a hard glare from Shriya and strong nudge in his stomach...

After a silence of few seconds... shriya spoke...
"I..I..." but couldn't complete it...

"you are pregnant..and bringing back my kriya to me" he made it easy for them and pointed at her belly...

a very astonished yash recovered first...
"how did you know??"

Rey sighed...
"because when her mother was pregnant with my princess...she was having the same blossomy splendor on her... she looked just the way shriya is looking beauteous..."


he ran his fingers on her baby bump..
."You made me wait for long kriya..." and kissed shriya's cheek... rubbing her nose lovingly...

"Thank you to both of you for this gift"...and clasped the trio...yash, shriya and the little kriya in his bear hug... he saw a retreating figure of her in white passing by them and waving at him...
he heard a faint whisper..
."I will be their in your arms in few months.." and a smile adorned his face...


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I guess a lot of people will be waiting for me with danda's in their hands..so main bhaag rahi hun...
and sorry if i offended anyone's feelings by this..
I don't say a person shouldn't move on with life or should always remain in your Ex's memories but a thought came to me about a man loving immortally..stayed abide by his deceased wife's love his only first and last love...although she have been deceived by fates play...

okay enough of my bakwas... now you all can start with your re-views..and likes..
i would love to now everyone's suggestions...
Thanku for reading...

-Pallavi

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res
unres
...
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wah wah
wat did i heard in the start of this post
A Short one..
*Rofl*
are u kidding ur readers...
*Lol*
m sure they gonna love this short OS kum RETURN GIFT of yours...
...,...,...,,,...,...,...,,,...,...,,...,...,...,...,
cuming to the os

like i told it was amazing

beautiful usage of words

i loved the total concept

the start was fab...so convincing...did'nt had the slightest idea that what the story is gonna be...

Kria's death was a real shock...trust me...


and like i said
especially the small rey swayam convo...its so typical my fav reyam...

Oh so they got married...haha

sharon's whole idea of making them dance partner's work finally *wink*

awww

his baatcutter is cuming back to him...so touching...

Loved the end...which i did'nt knew... :D

Aur kuch bacha nai...sab keh dia...

Wait last line baki hai

thanx for the scrap and pm

dekha kinna fatafat unres kar dia...

*patting my back*

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PS - belated happy birthday again...

And ha
have a safe and happy journey
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- kinjal



i know tu kar chuki hai already first page pe but it was ur swthearts wish ur comment to be first one..
Edited by pallavi.14 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: GayatriJethani

Di mujhe 1st page par comment karna tha... aapne batya bhi nhi... 😡
mujhe baat nhi karni aapse... 😭 😭

par iska mtlb ye nhi ki me comment nhi karugi...
I know ki me bahut achi hu.. 😆 par phir bhi gussa hu...

coming back to os..
di r u sure ki ye chota os hai.. 🤣

Wonderful!!!!!
di me bhi bilkul aapki tarah sochti hu... for me my first nd last love should be same... if somebody leave u that doesnt mean that the person dnt love u or He/She is not there with u. very well written

worth reading... specially the words u have choose... amazing

firstly when i started reading.. i love the way u portrayed kriyaansh love in simple way..
rey-shriya bond was superb... awwiiieee pumpkin... hehe even i call my dad with such weird names...
i never thought that kriya is not there with them... she is always there standing with them...
shriya is totally copy of kriya... yash-shriya scene was cute..
atlast kriya will be back to him in form of grand daughter...
after reading that line, first thing came in my mind was how rey gone lookas grand father.. 😆
overall i love it... thank u for writing it...
Love,
Gayatri *hugs* 👏

Edited by pallavi.14 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res
unres
...
...,...,...,...,,,...,...,...,...,,...,...,...,...,
wah wah
wat did i heard in the start of this post
A Short one..
*Rofl*
are u kidding ur readers...
*Lol*
m sure they gonna love this short OS kum RETURN GIFT of yours...
...,...,...,,,...,...,...,,,...,...,,...,...,...,...,
cuming to the os

like i told it was amazing

beautiful usage of words

i loved the total concept

the start was fab...so convincing...did'nt had the slightest idea that what the story is gonna be...

Kria's death was a real shock...trust me...


and like i said
especially the small rey swayam convo...its so typical my fav reyam...

Oh so they got married...haha

sharon's whole idea of making them dance partner's work finally *wink*

awww

his baatcutter is cuming back to him...so touching...

Loved the end...which i did'nt knew... :D

Aur kuch bacha nai...sab keh dia...

Wait last line baki hai

thanx for the scrap and pm

dekha kinna fatafat unres kar dia...

*patting my back*

...,...,...,,,...,...,...,,,...,...,,...,...,...,...,

PS - belated happy birthday again...

And ha
have a safe and happy journey
...,...,...,,,...,...,...,,,...,...,,...,...,...,...,

- kinjal
Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gadho tumhare liye res kiya maine...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pallavi.14

gadho tumhare liye res kiya maine...

oopsy muje nai pata tha...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome work
Really heart touching...kriyaansh eternal love
I was having tears while reading it
Loved the total concept...n the end..superb
Thanx a lot for this wonderful os
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res...

unres...

okay u know wat it was really beautiful...

i jus loved it...

i don know i was feeling really emotional while reading this...

may be m stupid...

the way u showed rey's immortal love...

i jus love you for this...

hug from my side...🤗
Edited by ..Roop.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey pallavi...first f all...thnku fr such a beautiful os...nd nw coming to main topic...i luv ur os...

1. Rey flawless luv fr kriya after her death also.

2. Swayam understand rey nd kriya more thn nyone.

3. Daughter luv
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heart break story and beautiful os... amazing and loved it to core...

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