What happens next;OS- updated chapter 4- pg6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys, take a read of my story on what may happen next. We have to wait so long, like forever to see whats gonna happen...so decided to use my imagination a little and share it with my family on this forum 😉

Let me know what you guys think



All four were still embracing; Zoya stood from afar looking on, and tears rolling down her eyes. Dilshad looked over her way and called out to her, at that time everyone fell out of the embrace. Zoya hesitantly walked over'Asad picked up his guitar and started to sing "Jab Koi Baat Bigad Jaye." Dishad took Zoya by the hand on brought her in the circle, she stood her next to Asad and went over to Najma. Dilshad, Najma and Tanveer (MSK) had huge smiles on their faces, singing along, while the pain felt in the hearts' of both Zoya and Asad was pronounced in their eyes. For the entire song, Asad and Zoya looked at each other'.she felt like falling into his arms'and he felt like rushing towards her, to caress her and to hold her in his arms'he wanted to kiss away her tears. He missed seeing that vibrant smile that she always had'.but'before the song could even finish, Zoya turned around and ran. She ran outside into the garden and fell at the feet of the bench there. She remained on the ground and rest her head on the seat with her hands hiding her face'.she was crying.
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Asad followed her outside but he stood by the door to the house looking on at her'he saw her looking up, gazing at the stars. He was lost in her beauty; she never looked so beautiful with the moonlight shining down on her face; even her teardrops looked like diamonds sparkling on her flawless face. She was perfect'he thought to himself.
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She longed to be up there with the stars'even though they are so far away; they don't at all look lonely like she was feeling. She started to again think about the moments that she and Asad had when they were under the influence of bhang. More tears welled up in her eyes and she began to sing from her heart. Her choice of song'Bol Halke Halke, but a sad and slower version (I guess made up her own). She let all her feelings out, thinking about all the times she had with Asad'every time she fell in his arms, every time he has helped her and even the times when they had their arguments.
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Asad thought to himself that it was the most beautiful voice he had ever heard in his entire life; she sang so sweetly. But, he couldn't help but notice the pain in her voice and the longing for love. He too began to feel hurt and wanted to go to her and to assure her everything would be alright. He wanted to go say out loud "I love you Zoya Farooqui." He started to take steps towards her; heart over mind'the heart was winning! All of a sudden, the words to the song that Zoya was singing hit him with much confusion in his head'he started to finally remember all the things that happened between him and Zoya under the influence in bhang'the part that echoed the most was'THE CONFESSION! He was so shocked; he started to think to himself that Zoya may have remembered everything. He couldn't believe it all! He stepped backwards, again and again. He turned and started to race to his room. "Asad" called Tanveer, noticing tears in Asad's eyes. He brushed past her in haste and didn't even want to hear what she had to say.
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Tanveer was all the more confused as she didn't know what was going on. She looked in the direction that Asad came from. She saw Zoya outside, crying her eyes out and lost in thoughts. She decided to approach Zoya and ask her what was going on between her and Asad.
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Asad stood by his window, also looking up at the stars, remembering his moments with Zoya'He thought to himself that he loves her sooo much, but he can't act on it'because she wasn't what he thought the perfect wife would be. He wanted to be with her so much, my his head told him no'He broke down in tears, confused as to what to do.
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After a long conversation with Zoya, Tanveer started to walk to her room'and thought to herself'"I HAVE TO HELP ASAD AND ZOYA!"

Chapter 2 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3477663&TPN=3

Chapter 3 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3477663&TPN=3

Chapter 4 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3477663&TPN=6

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saina01 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This was so beautifully written! I really wish tanveer was here to help AsYa like a good friend but I guess we'll just have to wait and watch what happens next:)
Posted: 13 years ago
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Hummm it would be cool to watch
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks a tons for a changed outlook for tanveer.
i was like "wow nice, zoya n tanveer heart to heart",..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A very beautiful OS indeed.
I really loved it how you wrote about Asad and Zoe's side of story.
Asad loves Zoe but denies to accept that she is perfect for him while Zoe remembered her wonderful moments with Mr. Khan...The whole scene was written wonderfully.
Tanveer's determination to help ASYA makes me really happy.I wish she does the same in the show as well.
This OS was amazing and I loved it a lot.
Keep writing dear!
Take care!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please please please continue
soon
i cant wait to read more
n love this side of tanveer
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really really nice do continue soo!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This was amazingly written! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice.
i loved it. please write again.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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If realy tanveer is a positive charecter she will definetly try to sort out the problems of our asya if she is a vamp we all can expect what happens.pls cvs dont make us loose faith on u.just asya forever.

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