maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#881

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#882

Originally posted by: sukklover
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Posted: 12 years ago

#883

Originally posted by: ...Tanya-K...
Both poems were superbly written...
Loved them both
Thanks for pm 😊

I was following CL for some time but recently hadn't been able to read what had been happening, now reading the poem makes me want to catch up soon.. I'm guessing Maan is the one being ordered now. Hopefully I'd be able to catch up now..

Haven't read darmiyan but reading the poem I'm guessing it'd be quite an emotional ff..

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some one got time

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Posted: 12 years ago

#884

Originally posted by: sarah_kelly
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Posted: 12 years ago

#885

poem no : 23

its or ss DASTAAN-E-WAFA

by sobia4 maaneet

woh saath tha uske saaye ki tarah

woh paas tha uske hum saans ki tarah

yeh baat aur thi

ki woh anjaan thi uss khushi se

jo aa basi thi usme

ban ke uska sahas

ek humsaaya saath hona hi toh tha uski wajah

ab jab woh aaya nahi

usko khud ke paas paaya nahi

dekhta hai har pal khuda mera mujhe

uske na dekhne se yah ahsaas bhi

ab mujhe mein aaya nahi

kyu hai yeh bechaani

kyu hai yeh betaabi

sab saath hai mere

sab sapne ho rahe hai pure

par kyu ek uske saath na chalne se

mr dil ko inme bhi chain aaya nahi

hi dar

its my first official commnt or you

my ew line comment

hop you like it

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Posted: 12 years ago

#886

poem no : 24

this one is for INNOCENT SEDUCTRESS

BY TANYA K

she was shy so got hide

he was ready for his first eternal ride

so ,when

their mouth meets in passionate need

its like ,they need this more than breath

this time ,

he want from her nothing but her smile

as he rises above her

her body to explore

their music of joy begin again

as he touch himself with her throbbing need

in vowing ,not to end this dance

unless she cries his name

enough

this going over board

pata nahi kya kya dimaag mein aa raha hai

tanya yaar tunedekh kya kar diya

please reply as soon as can by pm also

me waiting for reply

DID I TELL YOU GUYS

MY DEAR SONA HELP ME ALOT IN THIS POEM

AS SH IS THE ONE WHO GIVE THOUGHTS TO VIEW

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#887

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
poem no :21
its for Captured Love
ff by mrs.msk

maan (in his thoughts)
jab se hui hai shaadi
kya kya mein kar raha hu
aafat jo hai gaale mein daali
uss ko har pal bugat raha hu

jab woh pahli baar mili thi
thapaad ki khanak suni thi
par phutti kismat thi meri
jo uske baad bhi
mein wahi,biwwi banaane ke liye chuni thi

kya woh akele hi kafi nahi thi
kyu isse laga vicky ki kami thi
jo yeh isse mujh par chodti hai
jaise woh hai tommy
aur mein hu delicioue piece of chicken ponny

kya yeh kutte billi ka
jo circus meri life ban gaya hai woh kam nahi tha
jo mein ab
iske pyaar ke khatir
ban raha hu watchmen
apne hi kamre ke ,bahaar khada hua hu
madam hogi raazi
tabhi to paas hogi ,
meri bed par sone ki arzi
nahi toh ,kal ki yeh headline hogi
ki mein guest room mein sofe par so raha hu
darte the log mujhse
ab mein apni biwi ke terror se darr raha hu

dekh lo
oo duniya waalo
kya tha mera ateet
aur ab kya kya rahi hai mujhpe beet
waqt woh tha kuch aisa
hota tha sab waisa ,chata tha mein jaisa
ab woh madam chah rahi hai
aur mein usske nakkhre utta raha hu

madam ka order hua hai
is liye mein kitchen mein passina baha raha hu
fry pan aur spoon udd rahe hai
saare masaale bhi jal rahe hai
itne hai onion kaate
ke ab baarish ki tarah aasu tapak rahe hai

naksha badal gaya hai
is puri kitchen ka
lagta tha pahle baag phoolo ka
ab jang ka maidaan lag raha hai
aisa hi toh hoga
jab yaha duniya ka aathava ajooba ho raha
jisne aaj tak anda nahi hai ubbala
aaj woh madam ke liye BIRYAANI pakka raha hai

finally from maan
dekh mein tere pyaar mein kya kya na bana geet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#888

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
poem no :17
for ff life partnerby palindrome
from geet point of view
(spelling mistake count karna is not allowed)

rishto ka kaisa yeh pahlou
hai aaj nazar aaya
ke ab toh
ajnabi sa lag raha hai
mujhe mera hi saaya

kehna aasan hai ki
bada gaya hai woh
par woh to badala hi nahi
jo badle hai
woh to mere hi ahsaas hai
mein jaanti thi
ki woh rishte unke liye khaas hai
par kyu
par kyu aaj mujhe
unke liye sabse khaas hone ki
lagi yeh nayi aas hai
yeh sab to mere liye
ajnabi se ahsaas hai

kyu mein itna badal gayi
kya mein sach mein itni nazuk thi ki
rishto ki thodi si tapan se hi pighal gayi

aaj to mujhe
aarav bhi rishto mein mujh se pakka laga
kyoki uss masoom ne
khushi khushi de diya
apne khaas hone ka ahsaa
is nanhi pari ko
jis se bhi jyaada khaas hone ki
abhi hui thi mujhe aas

hey my dear mami
chillexxx
now you have to listen
so please relaxxx

mami batata hu mein
aapko ek sachai
jo yeh rishto mein jalan
aur sabse khaas hone hi aas ki havaa
abhi aap se hai takrai
yeh mujhse ho kar hai aaie
aur
rishto mein sabse khaas hone ki chah
yahi hai rishto ki sachai
yeh baat aur hai ke
aap khud kuud gai iss aag mein
aur mere charo aur
yeh meri pyaari dadi ne hai lagayi

please tell me guys
lines are good aur not
me waiting for your reply