maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13- Page 89

Originally posted by: sukklover

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this updates r just

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tons of 4 u dear...🤗🤗🤗...

lov,❤️

Tama

NOTE: SOMEONE ASKED ME WHOM FAN I AM...THAT ANS IS ONLY SUMIT KUMKUM & HUSSAIN JUHI..NONE OTHER ANY OF RESENT ON TV..

Originally posted by: ...Tanya-K...

Both poems were superbly written...

Loved them both

Thanks for pm 😊

I was following CL for some time but recently hadn't been able to read what had been happening, now reading the poem makes me want to catch up soon.. I'm guessing Maan is the one being ordered now. Hopefully I'd be able to catch up now..

Haven't read darmiyan but reading the poem I'm guessing it'd be quite an emotional ff..

Originally posted by: sarah_kelly

awesome one... ❤️

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poem no :21

its for Captured Love

ff by mrs.msk

maan (in his thoughts)

jab se hui hai shaadi

kya kya mein kar raha hu

aafat jo hai gaale mein daali

uss ko har pal bugat raha hu

jab woh pahli baar mili thi

thapaad ki khanak suni thi

par phutti kismat thi meri

jo uske baad bhi

mein wahi,biwwi banaane ke liye chuni thi

kya woh akele hi kafi nahi thi

kyu isse laga vicky ki kami thi

jo yeh isse mujh par chodti hai

jaise woh hai tommy

aur mein hu delicioue piece of chicken ponny

kya yeh kutte billi ka

jo circus meri life ban gaya hai woh kam nahi tha

jo mein ab

iske pyaar ke khatir

ban raha hu watchmen

apne hi kamre ke ,bahaar khada hua hu

madam hogi raazi

tabhi to paas hogi ,

meri bed par sone ki arzi

nahi toh ,kal ki yeh headline hogi

ki mein guest room mein sofe par so raha hu

darte the log mujhse

ab mein apni biwi ke terror se darr raha hu

dekh lo

oo duniya waalo

kya tha mera ateet

aur ab kya kya rahi hai mujhpe beet

waqt woh tha kuch aisa

hota tha sab waisa ,chata tha mein jaisa

ab woh madam chah rahi hai

aur mein usske nakkhre utta raha hu

madam ka order hua hai

is liye mein kitchen mein passina baha raha hu

fry pan aur spoon udd rahe hai

saare masaale bhi jal rahe hai

itne hai onion kaate

ke ab baarish ki tarah aasu tapak rahe hai

naksha badal gaya hai

is puri kitchen ka

lagta tha pahle baag phoolo ka

ab jang ka maidaan lag raha hai

aisa hi toh hoga

jab yaha duniya ka aathava ajooba ho raha

jisne aaj tak anda nahi hai ubbala

aaj woh madam ke liye BIRYAANI pakka raha hai

finally from maan

dekh mein tere pyaar mein kya kya na bana geet

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poem no :17

for ff life partnerby palindrome

from geet point of view

(spelling mistake count karna is not allowed)

rishto ka kaisa yeh pahlou

hai aaj nazar aaya

ke ab toh

ajnabi sa lag raha hai

mujhe mera hi saaya

kehna aasan hai ki

bada gaya hai woh

par woh to badala hi nahi

jo badle hai

woh to mere hi ahsaas hai

mein jaanti thi

ki woh rishte unke liye khaas hai

par kyu

par kyu aaj mujhe

unke liye sabse khaas hone ki

lagi yeh nayi aas hai

yeh sab to mere liye

ajnabi se ahsaas hai

kyu mein itna badal gayi

kya mein sach mein itni nazuk thi ki

rishto ki thodi si tapan se hi pighal gayi

aaj to mujhe

aarav bhi rishto mein mujh se pakka laga

kyoki uss masoom ne

khushi khushi de diya

apne khaas hone ka ahsaa

is nanhi pari ko

jis se bhi jyaada khaas hone ki

abhi hui thi mujhe aas

hey my dear mami

chillexxx

now you have to listen

so please relaxxx

mami batata hu mein

aapko ek sachai

jo yeh rishto mein jalan

aur sabse khaas hone hi aas ki havaa

abhi aap se hai takrai

yeh mujhse ho kar hai aaie

aur

rishto mein sabse khaas hone ki chah

yahi hai rishto ki sachai

yeh baat aur hai ke

aap khud kuud gai iss aag mein

aur mere charo aur

yeh meri pyaari dadi ne hai lagayi

please tell me guys

lines are good aur not

me waiting for your reply

Originally posted by: lovesia

awesome one dear

love it

Originally posted by: maanlovesgeet

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