maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13

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neha512

@neha512

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Posted: 12 years ago

#871

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

aisa hai kya
so osheen ko bhi thanxxx kahna chahiye mujhe👏

waiting for your view on other poem

yeah will read them soon and comment dr😉

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#872

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poem no :22
its for darmiyaan ff by neha 512
this poem
i write after reading the update
where they have their unusual SR😉😭😕

murado waali ghadi aayi thi
besabri se jiska intezaar kiya
woh haseen raat aayi thi

par kuch alag sa ,
na ho kabhi kissi ke saath jaisa
vaisa woh kuch apne saath layi thi

ek masoom si kali
o khilne se pahle hi
murjhaane si thi lagi
uske liye tho woh tufaan layi thi
is bechaari ne
thik se aasmaan na dekha tha
arre usne tho abhi osse ki thandak bhi na paayi thi
aur yeh raat ,
uske liye tufaani barsaat le aayi thi

yeh akeli hi nahi thi
is par yeh maayusi chaai thi
kyoki ,
sapno ke sach hone ki aas toh
iss bhavree ne bhi lagaayi thi

dekh kar iss kali ko
iske mann ne li angdaai thi
ek din yeh kali sirf hogi meri
pahli nazar mein hi yeh aas lagaayi thi

kya kasoor tha ,yeh iss bhavree ka
kee
isse pyaar hua is kali se ,
jo abhi phool bhi na ban paayi thi
NAHIII
NAHI
yeh kasoor toh hai uss maali ka
jisne sabse khubsurat kali ,
usske baag mein sajaai thi

tut gaye sab sapne inke
kyoki aaj ki raat sitaaro ki jhilmil hi nahi
apne ander chupa kar tufaan bhi laayi thi
ab dekhna hai ,
key kya sach tha pyaar bhavree ka
jisse hamne ,
kali ko sawaare ga woh ,yeh aas lagaayi thi

ok dear
me done with my few lines
please tell me
did you like them
me waiting for reply
please pm me soon😊

OMG love the poem!!

is this from Geet's piont of view?

so painful!😭😭

it actually makes me want to read the fan fic!!!😃😃

You already know how I loved the peom you wrote for my fan fic!!

When I read it, it still makes me laugh!!!

You keep going with this talent of yours!!!!😳

Edited by mrs.msk - 12 years ago

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#873

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

OMG love the poem!!
is this from Geet's piont of view?
so painful!😭😭
it actually makes me want to read the fan fic!!!😃😃
You already know how I loved the peom you wrote for my fan fic!!
When I read it, it still makes me laugh!!!

You keep going with this talent of yours!!!!😳

its not point of view

o maan aur geet

but this poem show their

present state of mind

geet as kali

and

maan as bhavraa

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#874

Originally posted by: doublecross
amazing poems
absolutely great!

thax alot dear

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#875

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

aur woh bhi atleast two year
poor maan
kaise kaatege yeh din😉
aur raat😳

😆bohat mushkil kaam hai😆

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#876

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
same problem darling

tera mera problem hamesha same2same hota hai😆😆

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#877

Originally posted by: sona-rai

😆bohat mushkil kaam hai😆

i knew😭

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#878

Originally posted by: sona-rai

tera mera problem hamesha same2same hota hai😆😆

what to do dear

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#879

Both poems were superbly written...

Loved them both

Thanks for pm 😊

I was following CL for some time but recently hadn't been able to read what had been happening, now reading the poem makes me want to catch up soon.. I'm guessing Maan is the one being ordered now. Hopefully I'd be able to catch up now..

Haven't read darmiyan but reading the poem I'm guessing it'd be quite an emotional ff..