SwaRon SS:Jodi Maker VS Dil Breaker [Completed] - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
Chota chapter and chota swaron part :-( :-( but awesome update ❤️ PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE want more swaron.. :-) and 30+ likes already plez update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lol poor sharon she have to eat soo much 😆
Soo she still love swayam n miss him alot.That pic part was cute.
Ahh finally they meet again.I can see some change in swayam.Hope he realise his feelings for sharon soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome chapter Tanya!
So swaron met aftr whole big 5 months!!
It luks as if dil breakr has fallen for someone!!😉
Update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update..
Sharon has moved on but still loves him n happy with watever happened.. on ther side swayam is changing n he is confused abt his felgs n change cumg in him..
Lookg forward how will swayam realise his feelings..




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Posted: 12 years ago
God, you guys are so fast, in such a small time you all completed my likes demand. 😆
Ya, again not such a big update! 😛

Part 6

It's been days but Swayam could not take his mind off from Sharon, and the incident in which they collided some days back in restaurant. He started partying every night thinking that it may help him re-cover into old care free Swayam back, but nothing helped.

He came home in morning after having fun in party full night and clashed on his bed. Almost after 4 hours of his sleep, someone knocked at his house door.

He stirred in his sleep and frowned on the loud thud noises, but the sounds kept alarming him and disturbed his beauty sleep.

He finally jerked up from the bed, pushing his blanket and walked to his house door like a wild dog ready to eat up his food. He opened the door and his friend [Reyaansh] was standing in front of him and tightly hugged him.

R: Hey buddy you are ready? He asked with a huge exciting grin on his face.

Sw: Help with you Reyaansh, and ready for what? He shouted.

R: Easy buddy easy; don't tell me you forgot that we had to leave for Chandigarh today? He asked looking low this time.

Sw: Shit! God how can I forgot? Reyaansh I am sorry, it slipped out of my mind! Give me 1 hour I be ready until you come my ass-hole! He said and winked at him.

R: Will you even going to stop calling me Ass-hole? My fianc Taani always join you in this. He said and made a disgusted face.

Sw: No, I won't ever. He sad and ran inside his house to pack his stuff.

Reyaansh said to himself: He will never change but I am noticing some changes in him, god knows how! He said and giggled.

Reyaansh walked in into his house and settled himself on couch with beer tin in his hand and enjoying mushy romantic chat with Taani while Swayam was confused in his room.

Swayam packed some of his casual clothes as they were visiting there for whole 1 week, but kept some Indian too for main ceremonies as her sister was getting married, and hell shit he was going to for main ceremonies and he knew that he is dead.

After some while Reyaansh finally ended his mushy chat and marched into his room.

R: What is this Swayam, it's your sister's wedding not mine sister! Taani and she is yelling at him from past 2 hours! Are we going there or not? He shouted.

Sw: Ok, I am done! We can go now, by the way this wedding was in Mumbai here right? Then why it's been shifted to Chandigarh all of a sudden? He asked.

R: Shame on you idiot. It's your sister's wedding and you don't even know why it has been shifted there? He said making "Tch tch tch" noises.

Sw: Yeah, sorry! So can we go now as we have to drive all the way to there? He asked and pulled Reyaansh out of his house, switching off lights and locking door they drove off.

While in the car, Rey was glaring Swayam all the time with smirking glint in his eyes.

Sw: Ok, that's it! What? He asked pushing the car break.

R: I didn't do anything. He said while controlling his laughter.

Sw: You want to go Chandigarh to Taani or I left you here in road only? He asked crossing his arm in his chest.

R: Who is she? He asked smiling.

Sw: Sharon.. He said and realized what he just said... What? Who she? No one!

R: Sharon! Nice kitty! He said and patted Swayam's shoulder.

Sw: Shut up ok? He said and drove again.

Rey kept teasing Swayam all the way to their destination, but that was good as Swayam was missing Sharon.

Swayam's POV

God, I hope this ass-hole just shut his mouth or else I have to stuff a rod in his mouth. I am confused, wait dil is confused,but for what? Umm, Sharon? May be. Swayam calm down and take a deep breath, she is just messing up with your head and nothing else, but why am I missing her? God, kill me. Arggh, I hate this feeling, it's disturbing me!

She looked dead gorgeous in her glasses too. I saw her in restaurant, I felt like her eyes was talking to me; trying to say something but what? I couldn't take my eyes off from her that moment. Shit, what am I thinking! Take a deep breath and chill boy!

Swayam took few breaths and again drove off, after tiring hours of journey they were finally in Chandigarh, in front of Shekhawat mansion.

Swayam rolled his eyes to his left side and found Rey sleeping and snoring like he was tired and drove till here. Swayam's blood got boiled to high temperature, he opened the door to his side and kicked him hard which cause him to fall down to road in front of house from the jeep.

Rey flung open his eyes and looked here and there, with horrified expression on his face.

Sw: Ass-hole we should go, come in? He said and without even waiting for him to stand, walked into mansion.

His house or rather call a huge size mansion was beautiful enough as a castle. He entered and there was a huge garden first, covered with many flowers all around on walls and everywhere, his cousins were chuckling at his position knowing he is dead today as it was wedding in 2 days and he is coming today. Some aunties were seated in garden with lots of different sweets and embroidery clothes and packing them to send them with his sister. He smiled and greeted everyone there but Rey was the lime light as he spent more time here then he himself in his own house.

Swayam walked into house and found his dad the great Shekhawat standing balancing a wooden stick in his hand and glaring at him.

Sw: Actually dad.. He started but cut off from his dad's life squeezing hug.

He was utter surprised to even speak a word.

Sw: Dad, dad, dadda, puppa, daddy, pops! He whispered these names with some seconds gap but didn't got any response.

Finally, his dad left him and shook him taking him from his shoulders, and poor he like a wind started blowing in front of the world champion boxer.

D: Welcome , my boy! He said and patted on his back, light enough to made him fall on floor like a stick.

Sw: dad you ok? He asked with full concern.

D: Yes, son I am! He said and started doing waltz with him.

D: tada tada, lala la la la lalalala! He was humming.

Sw: Dad we can go hospital you know? He said.

D: No my boy, you will need hospital; I am happy because I don't have to beat you up since my angel will do that part for herself and for me too! He said and smirked.

Sw: What? How mean dad! He said.

D: No, you are mean my Swayu, you are whole 2 weeks late on your own sister's wedding! Hahaha, now go and face her! He said, pulled his cheeks tightly and left.

Swayam gulped down and looked at the sky and whispered "Save me"

He slowly slowly slowly rather very slowly walked towards toward the princess's room and found lots of girls chuckling at him, some were his close and friendly girl-cousins who patted his back and encouraged him while laughing at him.

Sw: Good very good! He said to one of his cousin.

Before he could enter his cousin Shanti came running towards him very "Aarti Thaali" in her hand and put a large tillak on his forehead.

Shanti: I will miss you Swayam, God bless you! She said and laughed.

Sw: Hey Shanti, won't you help your brother? He asked pouting.

Shanti: Ummm, Why not! No actually no! She said and pushed him in the room.

There a girl standing with her back on him, and had a pistol in her hand.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update swayam is in confused state
Do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
ok nw we r meeting his family and rey and swayam part was gud. tganx for the pm



update asap plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay, what's happening with Swayam is really funny and looking forward to seeing whose the girl in the room !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Tanya!!
Cud imagine swayam's conditn cause it happens wid my brothers each time dey visit me...:P
Luvd da update!
God save swayam now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
lol ab swayam to gaya;-);-) hahaha
he is so cutie<3<3<3

awesome update dear<3<3<3:-):-):-):-)
cont soon...

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