Scarlet Tears...

Shrieks of agony
Muffle the lament ...
Of the shattered soul...

Shattered pieces..
Of dreams untouched..
Lie afore...

In the ruins,
Of a shattered dream...
Lies a bleeding heart...

And in agony, shall be shed now..
For a heart that bleeds....
......... Scarlet Tears...

- Sareeta

Copyright: Sarita Chitrapu. 2006- 2010 . All Rights Protected

- Penned for Gauri / Shiv, for one shall be shot and the other shall shed tears, while their weeps....

oh dear after so much time i've a seen a post of urs 😊
it's gr8, awsome 👏

Oh my god how do you come up with these words that have so much emotion. I remember writing poems in school for HW and I couldn't write one poetic line even if my life depended on it. Great job and always a treat read something with so much emotion and clarity that it adds words to what the actors are feeling. You should try to publish your poems. 👏 👏 👏

fantastic...touched my heart 😊
the words are so powerful!!

Originally posted by: Nancy_89

oh dear after so much time i've a seen a post of urs 😊
it's gr8, awsome 👏

Thank you so much Nancy. Its great to see you too! Its been a while!! Loved reading your comment!! 😊

Originally posted by: maragathm

Oh my god how do you come up with these words that have so much emotion. I remember writing poems in school for HW and I couldn't write one poetic line even if my life depended on it. Great job and always a treat read something with so much emotion and clarity that it adds words to what the actors are feeling. You should try to publish your poems. 👏 👏 👏

THank you so much for your kind words! You've left me speechless... I dont know how to respond.. I am deeply humbled and touched.. I dare not say nething further , for the tears shall give way...

I am so overwhelmed... with the appreciation here on KAA IF... suchadulation...😊

Yes , indeed I am publishing my words and hence the copyright notice.. Should be out sometime next year!!

Thank you so much yet again and I bow down.. humbled and moved! 😊

wow sareetha... ur words r haunting i must say... 😳
i have been an addict to ur posts... 😛 plz dont stop the daily dosages.. 😉

Originally posted by: mona05

fantastic...touched my heart 😊
the words are so powerful!!

Thank you so much Mona! I am so touched, by your appreciation too!😊

Boy.....u're in one poetic rhythm.
it seems as if the spirit of Shakespeare has come over u.
i like them.u had me thinking they were original.
keep it up.
peace
kirk

your words remind me of Petof Sandor... naive and realistic... 😊