FF : The Butchered Souls (Chapter 1 : Pg18)

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FF : The Butchered Souls


Prologue :



He slowly entered the dilapidated building, that was residing at the poorly lit street. As he entered , the old receptionist smirked, looking at that bloodied being. He pick up his old phone and dialled a number.


"He's here.", informed the receptionist. After listening to the speaker he handed the phone to him. He came a put the old phone near his ears.


He listened to the voice on the other side and answered..

"He's dead.", he smirked, looking at the receptionist, who was leaning on the table, flossing his teeth with toothpick...smiling simultaneously.

The voice on other side said something...to which that being replied.

"Ah! No no...no one will know. You know my work Anna. I have butchered his body very well."

The person on the other side enquired something. He pacified..

"Don't worry! As per plan, Iqbal is staying in other place...you just worry about all this...we are experienced! Now just worry about our money."


"It is in your room.", receptionist interrupted.

He continued, " You know naa, how Anna works!"


He nodded in yes and bid the person on phone a good bye. He then ordered the receptionist about dinner.

"It will be in your room Babu. You bath and I have kept the kerosene and match box on the table. Money is in cupboard with a note is also attached to it. Read it.", he said, while patting on his shoulder.



He trolled through the narrow lobby and unlocked his room's door. He directly went towards the bathroom. As he stood under the shower, he saw the drainer engulfing the red water.




He wore his jeans, while the water still struck on his bare upper body . He then took the kerosene and poured it over the bloodied clothes.

"And, here goes another proof", he grinned and threw the burning matchstick over it.


While the clothes were burning, he walked towards the cupboard and took out money from it. He opened the note attached to it.

'Behind every great fortune there is a crime - Godfather'
'Way to go Arnav.'


Arnav grinned and counted his money. After he was done, he kissed it and looked back again at the clothes, that were now changed into ashes.


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When souls are butchered, result is unpredictable.

A story...which will show the shades of butchered hearts, their deeds. A story of crime, robbery, murders, cheating and most of all...how much deep these butchered hearts could go, to satisfy themselves.

A story, which will take you to world of crimes, where everything's is fair...! A cop, which is held bend to kill off these blood thirsty souls!



Simply my idea! Do not copy. If you feel that theme of my story matches yours, PM me! And, I will explain you! Thanks !



Edited by Gazal.. - 12 years ago


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Character Sketch



Arnav : No surname. A most wanted criminal. Charged under 20 murders and 30 robberies. Lives with his mother Devi and sister Avani. But, none has been able to trace him. His father was also a criminal. Last word he said to him : "Die, but don't let anyone catch you."








Khushi : A bar dancer but NOT a harlot. Her dad, Paresh, one of the most leading name in the criminal world. A very complex and bold character. As she as been nourished under crimes, she is one of the most manipulative, cunning and negative character.





Iqbal : Arnav's right hand and also one of the most wanted criminal. Escaped from jail 2 yrs back and still murdering and robbing fearlessly.





Rustam : Khushi's brother and a smuggler. This character has different shades, discover it while each chapter unfolds.




Paresh : A character, which changed the fates of other. One of the biggest name in criminal world. Involved in trafficking, smuggling, murders, robbery and endless list of crime. Father of Khushi and Rustam. Killed his own wife.





Arjun : One of the best Cop in the city. Knows, history of all the criminals and held bend them to erase them off. Either by hook or by crook.





Shyam : Look out for this Evil leech! Each chapter, new shade of this butchered, filthy being.





Avani : Arnav's sister. Don't fall for her innocent face. A sweet lady outside, criminal, manipulative mind inside. A smuggler and multi face being.




Devi : Arnav and Avani's mother. Proud of her children's deeds. A very evil character.



Karan : Cop with Arjun. Watch out for him!
Edited by Gazal.. - 12 years ago
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Hi all!

A new story, with a concept that is far off from what I write.😳

A brand new story, with crimes, murder , action and never ending surprises. An important note :

This is dark story, which, at a point will contain some adult content. That doesn't mean that every part will contain adult content and that would be written by Mrinu di 😳..Being a criminal tale, may contain contain some slang language...but, not much! I have to keep IF rules in mind😆.


So, fasten ur seat belts and get ready for the journey of numerous crimes and never ending deeds of butchered minds!



Happy Reading!


Love,
Gazal



P.S : New readers, pls buddy me for PMs😳






~INDEX~

Prologue : Scroll up

Edited by Gazal.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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un res

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Way to go Kiddo... Loved the update! 👏

You're a STAR ⭐️

Coming to the Prologue:

It's hooking and extremely addictive... 😳

Loving the new Arnav! 😉 😛

Loved to bits baby... ❤️

It is sooo different from other FFs...

Continue super soon! 😃

Love u loads,

Mrinu di...

P.S: I LOVE THE BANNER! 😉 ❤️ 😉
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gazal ab yeh kya hein. 😕😲
Arnav as a criminal 🤔🤔🤔😎
Ab kya Khushi bhi criminal niklega ya phir police
Edited by arnavkushi70 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh my freaking god now dats sumthing different...!
Awsum prolouge...
I loved it...
Gazu love u yaar...seriusly i am dam xcited abt dis story...a new concpt wit a total new shade of our ASR...ahhh loving it...!
Seriusly its hooking me up from now on itslf...😉
Kudoos to u baby 4 thinking abt dis brilliant concpt...!
👍🏼 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG...hai devi maiya raksha karna
Full evil ff lagta hai
Crimals and all
Khushi a bar dancer and arnav a criminal
Loved the start
Totally different...interesting
Please continue soon
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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What the?
Yeh kis type ka CS hein?😲
Arjun or Arnav?😕

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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg

totally different concept yaar

intresting,continue soon😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg awesome ...
Would love to read it...
Such an awesome unique concept..At first while reading about arnav's character i thought maybe khushi will be a positive character... but i was speachless after reading her character sketch as well...!!

Thanks for the pm...
--Shuchi
Edited by arshiobsessed - 12 years ago

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