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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
hi!!!...


im first!!!...
my "while away" saturday proved worthy of itself afterall !!...

now, to the update!!...

the starting was very 'homely'...with the description of what was happening in the house!!...

Babuji blinked the sleep from his eyes and then frowned at her, "Why shouldn't I be?"


he really doesnt remember what happened...
this is why the general was confident last night!!...

but, what is this "abbracadabra" that he has done??...
what kind of things woulod make you forget these things...
well, you will let me know right??...*atleast later*...

okay..."stroke"..
yes, stoke can cause that effect...
so, its shock?...but, what kind of shock??...defo, not the shock of seeing the general's true form...shashi is stronger than that!!
what kind of harm is the general capable of?...you have not described his beast to a killer, have you??..
we have seen arnav with blood on him, but, not the general...

*scratch head*...well, worth a try?😉

"I am fine, my dear," said her husband as he stood up and circled where he stood, "See? All fit and young as you remember me to be!"...

there !!>...we have such a lovely couple!...

"he stood up and circled where he stood"...im just imagining it!!...🤣..just like a little kid...

but, wait...he remembers everything till the dance he had with his wife...
then, he must remember to have recognised the general as lady anjali's husband!!>...

maybe, we can see something happening when they come face-face?...or the general has escaped already??

"It feels as though I slept for a hundred years and the world is not familiar to me anymore."...
he doesnt remember anything of seeing anjali's husband??...is that possible??

"Give it time, brother, and everything will become familiar again."...
are you telling this to your readers...that plz dont crack your pretty heads!!...😉😆

but, it ensures us that there will come a time where master sashi will remember the general n the events of the night...is it anytime near future?

"with a man she was not sure she knew well anymore."...tides of change that occur in one's heart even in the midst of a storm...

let us see the after-math of it...


"the darkness slowly surrendering to the morning light"...as the light plunges into the darkness, we will see that the castle will wake up to witness a arrival of "khushi"...

loved it...

waiting for more!!!🤗🤗


Edited by sansu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yepppii... i'm second...😃 👏


Awesome update...👍🏼

Gook to know that Master Gupta was not hurt... but he seems to have memory loss due to Generals attack...

i still didn't get General's character😕... he sure has grey shades... but is he a good man too or... is he the totally negative character...

hopefully all my doubts will be clear in next few updates...
Edited by Shalve - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a surprise... Shashi all fit n fine..
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Posted: 12 years ago
The l0ng ball night may have c0me t0 an end but the aftermath 0f the events is surely g0ing t0 linger and affect all 0f them. It has already started with the amnesia 0f Master Sashi. S0 the General is capable 0f that t00?? If s0, the curse surely has its benefits!!!
Khushi is the 0ne leaving f0r the castle. We may see the dawn in the castle t00. H0w strange! The dawn w0uld start there 0nly with Khushi. I guess the traditi0ns have already been started.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shashi nd khushi going to castle..? wow.. tat was gud..

I hope for Arshi meeting..

Nice update.. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a great relief on seeing Shashi fit again.It felt as though the sunrise has brought new hopes along with it.Now why do I feel that Khushi accompanying her father to the castle seems to set out a string of events?
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update..very interesting and intriguing...continue soon..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh wow!!

~~~Update~~~
@Shashi...Thats a jolly news... u are perfectly fine!!!!
@Lin...Thank gawd we do not have a paralyzed Shashi at the end of it!!

@Shashi...but what??you do not remember anything? what kinda effect did that winged creature have on him after all?
@Shashi ... okie so do you have to go to thank them?
@Khushi ... ya ya .. u had to join dint ya?
awww!! y am i having a sinking feeling? well no not exactly sinking ... i guess its more of anxiety!!
Shashi faces the winged creature while Khushi faces the Royal Monster!! something is bound to happen!!
@Lin... well lets just wait and see what u got Lin!! bring it on!!

Thanks for the update and the PM sweetie!!

~Leena
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Posted: 12 years ago
res...loved this update...and safe journey for you..

edited:

woah i got a chance to update...lin that was a really unexpected update...yeah kinda thought that General might have meddled in and made Shashi forget stuff but so son...and now im scared...

however loved the update...and the emotions...i love that shashi is strong and is hale and hearty, so that khushi wouldnt be in trouble cos he knows the truth about general that he is married to lady anjali...and now he wants to go and thank lordies...

loved the part where khushi goes...hmm so she tells payal cos of her marriage proposal she is not able to go and khushi goes...i smell something, is some looking forward see someone...however shell meet lordy and would get Lavanys letter, i really want to see what is there...

and thank you for clearing the confusion and special thanks to hoopie with the decoding cos even i thought shyam truly loves anjali, but its anjali who loves him and shyam is trying to benefit out of it...wow now i hate him...hope anjali gets her true happiness...

waiting for the meeting between the two souls...so theres another climax...why am i kinda worried about it...but waiting...
Edited by yush-swt - 12 years ago

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