FF-Gangster Diaries...(updated)-Page4

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Dear Guys...

I am starting my new FF.. "The Gangster Diaries.." The Diary will be written by sultan.. and thoughts will be presented from his angle... how he sees his kid, rishbala and madhu in particular.


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It was an eventful day.. From past 6 months.. rival ganster "Bhujang Shastri" was troubling me. Finally I thought of a well executed scheme. I shall use Aryan...

Everything was as per plan.. I kept aryan as a bait and hid inside the water... but then.. that girl.. she ruined everything.. Damn Her!!I hate people who are emotional.. Emotions are weak. I don't like weakness. That's why want Aryan to be strong. He has to be.. What if i die. tomorrow..??
I will make aryan heartless just like i am ...

I got to kill a few but still some escaped. Mazhar you shall bleed blood soon...

Anyways.. she was damn eyewitness about all i had planned... i wanted to kill her, but aryan was reluctant as she saved her. I too felt she did a favour. So i decided to help her and paid her back by dropping her home.

And then i knew.. she is Rk's wife... That same RK...How can i forget him...!!!!

I dropped her at the chawl... favour paid off.!!!

And then i got a glimpse of him... My blood started to boil... before he could see me .. i drove back..



Page 2.

That sound from my room shaook me for a while. Did BS men attack me? Where was aryan ?
When i rushed to the room i found aryan lying on the floor, i rushed to him. he had high fever.
He kept on calling for her. I think he called her "DOST". What the hell... how can somebody get so close to a stranger.

aryan refused to have anything. I had to find her right away.. i saw she had potential.

Finding her was easy, my links... I knew they were strong.

All thoughout the way.. she kept on talking.. she had courage i agree...

She handled aryan somehow.. but she seems to be getting out of my hands.. her courage threatens me sometime..

"It reminds me of someone special sometimes, i try not to remember.."

My past and my present.. are hurting me... it always hurts.. so much that i have got used to pain. Some day when it won't pain.. I might die... this pain.. is my addiction...

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She stayed the entire night.. Took care of aryan. I felt a little embaraased , maybe for the first time as i had suspected her for informing someone. I returned her phone. She again did a favor for me. I had heard Aryan laughing in all these years.. they sounded like shrills for me. Did i really keep Aryan unhappy??

But i wanted to make him strong. Anyways, I decided to drop the girl again. least i could do to pay the favour off. She is different. I agree...

Guts to be with a don's family and not flinch, Courage to speak to me upright and honesty ...
She is different...

Aryan is changing, things are changing...



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Posted: 12 years ago
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very good.
write something about his past also, especially about aryaan's mother. as he cares about his son, probably he cared about his wife/girl friend also.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start 😃 !
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Wow wow its just awesome...superb...

Its a treat to.me as i became goldie today.
Plz add me to ur buddy list n do pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is fantastic Enigma! I'm eager to read more! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice start...Please PM me I have buddy requested
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wow... please write about that someone you mentioned..
i would prefer if that someone is his girl friend, not wife.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome
pls pls PM me n uppdate soom
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Posted: 12 years ago
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in fact im not liking much this sultan track in da shw.but ur story really have da potential and i read it v keenly.a v nice start.thanx for pm.👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks a lot guys... :D
For all those fab comments..

Page 3 is updated.

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