SS: REALIZATIONS AND RECONCILIATIONS (LAST PT-PG7)

Srivi01 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#1

Guys I am writing in this forum for the first time. So forgive me if there are any mistakes.

*******************************************************************************************

PART 1:


Place: Asad's room same as today's epi after she interrupts ASYA's convo.

Tanveer: so Asad tell me what's the problem between you and your mother?

Asad: what are you talking about (facing away from her)

Tanveer: Asad pls don't play dumb with me. Don't forget I have known you for long enough to detect your lie.

Asad then explains everything that has happened till now.

Tanveer: so you think your father is the culprit and he tried to kill your mother.

Asad: I don't think I know for sure.

Tanveer: how can you be so sure?

Asad: because all evidences are pointing towards him.

Tanveer: so you mean to say that if I had seen you in the warehouse and if I had seen that the last call was made by you to your ammi's killer I can say you are the culprit

Asad: what the hell are you talking about?

Tanveer: what you don't want to think

Asad: I don't understand what you want to say

Tanveer: what if he is saying the truth? What if he was really framed? What if he was forced to leave you? What if he was really innocent? Will you be able to forgive yourself for your mistake? Will you be able to rectify it?

Asad just stood there unable to answer

Tanveer: you have no answers right? Then please search the house once for that doll and try finding out the truth. Nothing is going to be lost by doing so. But if you don't and if your doubts are proved otherwise everything will be lost and you will not be able to forgive yourself

Asad: ok I will investigate further for ammi's sake.

Tanveer: good I am happy you got some sense.

Asad: thank you.

Zoya could not see hear what they spoke but after seeing them both so comfortable with each other she felt a tug in her heart and ran away crying which was not unnoticed by Tanveer.


PLS LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS. NEXT PART WILL BE CONTINUED SOON 😊😊


***********************************************************************

INDEX:

PART 2: SCROLL DOWN

PART 3: PG 2

PART 3: PG 4

PART 5: PG 7

Edited by Srivi01 - 12 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

41

Views

14.4k

Users

23

Likes

218

Frequent Posters

Srivi01 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#2

PART 2:

Tanveer and Asad search the whole house and finds the doll. Asad plays it and gets to know the truth.

Asad: oh my god. How much I have mistaken my abbu and now he is innocent. I feel pathetic. I hurt everyone I love. Ammi, Najma, Ayaan and Zoya. How much they would have suffered.

Tanveer's head popped up when he said Zoya in his loved ones. She smirked to herself.

Tanveer: Asad it's ok. Mistakes happen. I am glad you realized your mistakes.

Asad: I have to apologisze to everyone and I will make that Razia and Siddiquie suffer.

Because of them my ammi lost her love and Najma and I lost our father.

Tanveer: first you take back your complaint. Then you can do the other things.

Asad called the police commissioner and took back his complaint.

Then he went to the police station with Tanveer and filed a case against Razia and Siddiquie with the proofs.

They returned back to Asad's place.

None of the family members were aware of the recent developments.

They were all sitting in each corner of the house sadness evident in their faces.

Asad: ammi asad called out but as usual there was no response

Tanveer: khala please listen to what Asad wants to say

Zoya's head snapped up seeing Asad and Tanveer together and she felt that constricting pain in her heart again.

Dilshad: yes Tanveer what does he want to say?

Asad: ammi call abbu and his family here immediately.

Dishad was shocked to hear him call him abbu. Najma and Zoya were equally shocked.

Dilshad: did you just call him abbu?

Asad: yes ammi we will discuss about all that later first you call them.

Dishad did as he said and everyone came in sometime.

Asad: I know you all must bw wondering why I have called you all here. Well the thing is I know I am wrong and I want to apologize to everyone for the hurt that I have caused. I got the doll and got to know the real culprit is that Razia and her husband Siddiquie. I know what I did was a big crime and I hope everyone will forgive me.

Ayaan ran and hugged Asad. Rashid also was very happy.

Shireen: it's ok beta. I too misunderstood you and din't know their true intentions.

Asad: it's ok. I would like you all to come and stay here from now on like before. And the 2 will rot in jail for putting us through all this I will make sure of that.

Rashid: I am happy that everything is fine now. Yes now we all can be a family.

Dilshad looked at her son proudly.

Rashid: ok so we will leave now so that we can pack our things and get here

Asad: ok abbu.

Rashid, shireen, dadi, Ayaan, Nikhat and Nuzrat left.

Dilshad: Tanveer thank you for everything.

Najma: yes without you all this would not have been possible.

Tanveer: pls don't make me feel like an outsider. I din't do anything.

Asad: no Tanveer you have done so much to us. Thank you is such a small word.

Saying so he hugged her.

Zoya(ST): Zoya was watching all this standing far way. None of them remembered her. Asad and Tanveer are perfect for each other. Mr. Khan is quite comfortable with her. Why not? They have known each other for so long. Maybe that's why he doesn't like me. Because he loves her. Why wouldn't he? She is beautiful, traditional nd good at managing a home. She is perfect for him. As Mr. Khan said I am a guest and will leave as a guest. It's my fault that I got my hopes high. Seeing them hug and seeing the family praise Tanveer, Zoya felt her heart breaking into pieces. The 4 looked like a perfect family. She was a guest. An outsider. She has to leave from here as soon as possible. She din't have the capacity to be strong anymore. She slowly left the place.

This again was noticed by Tanveer.

Tanveer(ST): hmmm my work is almost complete. Only one more thing should be done now.


ONE OR TWO MORE PARTS.

PLS DO PROVIDE YOUR COMMENTS😊😊

princessradhika thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#3
JUST LOVED IT⭐️...PLS CONTINUE SOON..I AM HAPPY THAT U DIDN'T MAKE TANVEER A NEGATIVE CHARACTER HERE.😃.WISH THE ORIGINAL STORY WAS ALSO LIKE THAT.
UPDATE FAST ...EVERYONE IS WAITING..
batgirl67 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#4
i cant wait for the next part! hopefully you update soon!
malini96 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#5

i loved it ...cant wait for the next part

plz update soon

grad2011 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#6
omg really nice update soon!!!!!
-Prinky- thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#7

Amazing !!! Nice OS

I am waiting for next hope u continue soon

Srivi01 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#8

😊PART 3:

PLACE: ZOYA'S ROOM

Zoya was sitting in the room packing her stuff. Her heart was broken into million pieces seeing the perfect family. Of course she was happy that the family is united now and all the problems are solved. But she too wanted to be a part of their celebrations. She too wanted to be the part of the family.

Zoya(ST): don't be selfish Zoya. You are destined to be alone without a family. It has never been a problem for you. You are a strong, independent girl don't forget that. You have been alone, taking care of yourself for so long now what is your problem? You are a guest here. Just because they were kind and treated you like a family that doesn't mean you will take advantage of their kindness. It was your fault to have dreams of being a part of the family. Not all are blessed to get a family. That doesn't matter. Phuphi, Najma and Mr. Khan all are happy. You should be happy for them instead of brooding over nothing. Now wash your face and put up your happy and bubbly girl act. You should never let anyone know your weakness.

PLACE: LIVING ROOM

Dilshad, Najma, Tanveer and Asad were happily chatting in the living room.

That's when Asad noticed that something was missing. Yes all their problems were solved but he still dint feel contented. He felt incomplete. He felt something was amiss. That's when he noticed that Zoya was missing.

In all these commotion he forgot about Zoya. He wondered where she would be. Why hasn't she joined them like always poking her nose? She was there with them at the time of their problems but where is she when everything is settled and happy?

Asad: ammi where is Zoya?

That's when dilshad also noticed that Zoya was missing.

Dilshad: I don't know beta she was here till sometime back.

Najma: she must be in her room

Asad: why did she suddenly go? I am going to check if she is fine.

Dilshad nodded and Asad proceeded to her room.

Asad slowly knocked her room. On not getting any reply he opened the door slowly and saw Zoya lost in thoughts.

He cleared his throat to make her aware of his presence.

Zoya immediately came out of her thoughts and looked at Asad questioningly

Asad: so what are you doing here Ms. Farooqui?

Zoya: nothing Mr. Khan. Tell me what makes you come here?

Asad: why are you sitting here all alone? Why weren't you down with us.

Zoya: you ppl were having fun as family. So I dint want to intrude that's why.

Asad(ST): what the hell is she talking? Doesn't he consider herself a part of the family?

Asad: from when did you need a permission to poke your nose in others affairs?

Zoya: well I am sorry for my behavior in the past Mr. Khan. But from now I will stay in my limits. I know am a guest here for a few days and I will behave like that and stay in my limits till I am gone

Asad(ST): what? Guest? What the hell is she talking? He suddenly remembered how he introduced her as a guest to Tanveer. He felt angry on himself for making Zoya feel like an outsider. And why the hell is she talking about leaving? She can't leave him

In the meantime Tanveer enters the room.

Tanveer: am sorry did I disturb you guys?

Asad: no no tell me

Tanveer: I want to talk to you about something. We will talk later if you are busy.

Asad looked at Zoya and felt that she was not willing to talk anything now. So he unwillingly agreed to go with Tanveer.

Zoya looked at their retreating backs and sighed slumping her shoulders.


PLS PROVIDE YOUR COMMENTS 😊😊

Edited by Srivi01 - 12 years ago
kdramafan thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#9
A beautiful update yet again. Xontinue soon dear. I'm already hooked
ABBY92 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Like the flow that you've set for the story. Do PM me when you update the next chapter !!

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".