MG FF- *Love Story* #3 Pt 13_pg 66.. IMP NT pg77 march20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: Susegad
I just realized ki in all my excitement of reading the update I just forgot to comment on this update. I was searching for this thread on my commented list, tab pata chala ki comment hi nahi kiya.Sab galti uss gundi ki hain jo bechare Maan ko badi badi aakhon se darati hai. Main bhi darke bhul gayi.😆

Awww she was so happy on knowing that she can finally go to school. Bechari Geet I felt sad when she acted so maturely when Dadi took her shopping. Aisi bacchi ko toh kisiko bhi spoil karne ko dil karega. She deserves it.😃

Mann was so adorable in the car, admiring his little pari. Bechare ko pehli baar shanti se jo uska chehra dekhne ko mila hoga uss toofann mail ka.😆

Fluffy tum jaante nahi ho tumne kisse dushmani mod li hain. Gundi tumhe chodegi nahi.
Par end mein I loved how Maan got her back to normal. Abhi se handle karna sikh liya hain bacchu ne uss gundi ko.

Totally loved the update bacchu and sorry once again for missing out on commenting earlier.😉

Owww, Lobe Ya Nishu diii 🤗
Moi was actually waiting for your comment 😉
And koi na agar u forgot toh, hota hai 😳
Anywaysss me really happyyy you liked it. 😃

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kiran_rati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

waiting for update dear

update plz

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anyaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

UPDATING!!!!

I know am in for good bashing to not update this one for almost over 1 month now but I'm helpless, exams starting this 15th and only studies and studies going round my head 😭...

Not getting any time to even come through PC, but abhi getting bored with studies came here and thought to update 😉
Sooo, anyone Waiting?????? 😳

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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Eagerly waiting, but I feel guilty for saying that.

Nobody is blaming you. Exam times hain. Khoob dil lagake padhna.

IF pe bhatakne ki zaroorat nahi hain. We will all wait.

Busy with exams ka sign chipka de apne thread pe bas, aur khoob mann lagake padh.

As good as you are at writing stories, we all want you to be even better at your studies.

All the best for your exams. I and hoping and praying that you will ace them with flying colors.😃

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anyaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

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(Another cute banner by Dazzling Divz, had it since loong so finally putting it 😃 Tell me howzz it?)

Extremely soryy for late update ... Reason given below so do read the NOTE.
And alsoo PMs tomorrow, too tired to do it now 😭

PART-10

"Arre haa, wo toh me bhul hi gaya, geet dekho ajj me tayyar bhi ho gaya aur tumne to abhi tak brush bhi nahi kiya, kitni aalsi (lazy) ho tum" he ended with scrunched nose making a 'yuck' face "(whinning)hum aalsi nahii, abhi ruko hum 2 min me aate hai tayyar ho kar" saying so sniffing she jumped off rano's arms running into the bathroom.

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Both maneet were sitting in maan's room watching TV, enjoying the antics of the crazy 'shinchan'... That too on geet's demand who by mistake saw the show once while checking out the diffrent channels sitting in maans room while he was out to get water. Since then her fascination just grew for the cartoon, and poor Maan too had to tolerate it. Both the kids were fighting over the remote as maan wanted to watch his 'doraemon' during the break but Geet being stubborn as always hid it below her while maan cribbed at it. Both stopped as rano shouted for geet from hall "Geeettt" startling geet "ayii maaa..." saying she gave one last pouting glance towards the TV and rushed downstairs.

It have been over 5 minutes that geet is'nt back from down, as curiosity grew inside maan, he came down to check. As he descended the steps slowly, he spotted geet sitting on the sofa with a excieted face opposite to someone who by appearance looked quiet descent and proffessional, yet the way he kept adjusting his glasses nervousely gave him a nerd look. Shrugging of his thoughts maan came down the hall to find out himself.

Finding geets eyes moving in a random direction, and the twinkle in her little eyes Rano too looked that direction and finding maan stood there she called out for him "arre maan app aa gaye, yaha ayiye, innse miliye, yeh geet ke teacher hai. Ayiye.." as maan came in front of the man, daadi introduced him "Mr Singh, yeh maan hai, my grandson" "good afternoon sir" "good afternon" Mr Singh replied. "Umm daadi ji, I guess abb hume Geet ke lessons start kar dene chahiye, already we have very less time" "Sure bete, geet, sir ko apna kamra btayiye" Daadi told Geet. She hopped off the sofa speedily walking towards their quarter while poor Mr singh too tried matching her speed, adjusting his bag over his shoulder now and then.

Maan stood their dissapointed, he would be bored now without her "maa, geet ka tution kab khatam hoga?" Rano saw his saddened face and cupped his face, "maan, abhi toh tution start bhi nahi hua, abhi to waqt lagega na" he nodded cutely "par, me abb kisske sath khelu?" "app, app fluffy ke sath khel lijiye, tab tak geet ki tution bhi khatam ho jayegi" but seeing him frown at the mention of fluffy she added "achaa, ek kaam karte hai, jab tak geet padti hai, app bhi ajj ki homework khatam kar lijiye, phir baad me dono aram se khelna, thik hai?" Maan readily nodded and ran to his room to do as his maa said, engrossed himself in his maths book.

Here in geet's room-

"Aah, dhire pakdo na humara hath, itne pyare se chote se hath ko kya todna chahte ho app?" she blasted the poor teacher who was trying to teach her the skill of writing by holding her small hand gently into his, but each time he would hold her hand she would scold him just as now.
"m..ei meine dhire hi to.h pak..da appka hath" he stammered nervousely, he never had experienced someone like her in his lifetime surely, at the first place he alwayz had this fear for girls, and here handling this GEET only gave him goosebumbs. "yeh dhire pakadna hota hai? Dekho, laal laal kar diya humara haath" saying she carressed her hand dramatically, "achaa, ab mei halke se pakdunga" "sachi??" she asked cutely pouting this time "hmm" "sachi k baad hmm nahi bolte buddhu, muchi bolte hai" saying she smacked mr singh's head lightly shaking her head at the blunder her teacher made. Mr singh recovering from the shock caused by the 'smack' cleared his throat trying to gain his composure "ahem ahem, abb h..ume ja..ldi ajj ke lessons khatam karne honge, issiliye tum dhyaan do yaha" still his voice was shaky. Mr singh after lots of efforts managed to make her scribble an 'A' which at first was difficult to decipher but after several tries she scribble a near perfect A. He already gave her the required practical knowlege, and now written knowledge wasnt far either. Their lessons for the day finally ended after teaching her few more such alphabets. Bidding them bye Mr sharma left and an enthusiastic geet ran away to maan's room to show and tell him whatever she learnt.

"Nanguuu... kaha hoo??" screaming she entered the room, "mil gaye" she breathed out seeing him sat at the bed.
"Tumhara tution khatm ho gaya?" "Hmm, wo sir bas abhi gaye, phew thak gaya mei" she slumped on the bed beside him acting all tired but then again got back to jolly self within next second, and beamed in joy remembering something "pata hai, humne ajj bohot kuch seekha, ABDC.. aul.." "ABDC nahi ABCD" she frowned but then shrugged it "ha wo hi... aul humne wo sab likhna bhi seekha" she said proudly "achaa? tumhe likhna bhi aa gaya??" maan asked serprised, coz he knew learning to write is the most difficult task for a child "haa, ruko hum likh k batate hai" and she showed him her scribbling skills, her A was ohk, but had a lot of difficulty in making B, maan patiently taught her once again, helping her revise..

This continued for long, everyday after Mr singh's lessons Geet would come to Maan whinning about the new things she didnt get in the class and eat maan's head for the same..

Maan along with his studies would help her. Their this small study session became a reason for their extended togetherness, almost all the time both would be together, either playing, watching tv or studying. Their bond only grew stronger in these few weeks time and both became all the more comfortable with each other. The elders, Rano and Daadi only admired their little babies bonding this well, from having their breakfast in morning to their dinner in night both would do it together. A gradual change dadi observed in her maan, he never openned up to anyone ever except her mother due to his quiet nature, but with geet he was something total new, a happy child..

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Today the mansion was unusually extra active, everyone rushing from here and there, none of the servants could have a second to breath, among whome the busiest of all was rano. Her hands were full with the tasks to be done. The reason behind this unusual hustle bustle was the two babies of the house, who were to leave the mansion in next half an hour and each and everyone were running to get the preperations done.. Maan's vaccations were ended by now and his school resumed from today, he was more than excieted to resume his school as his pari too would be accompanying him.

Geet's admission procedures were completed all smoothly thanx to daadima, on her say they even allowed geet to enter in mid session..
And today was finally the day she was to live her tiny dream, to start her school. Rano's happines knew no limits, her heart swell with little joy, and mainly satisfaction seeing geet. She just prayed to her babaji to always keep her baby happy in every turn of life.

Geet sat on the sofa with her half of the shoulder length hairs tied neatly in a high pony while other half of the hairs being combed by rano. She looked quiet funny but mainly cute in that condition. She was already in her little school uniform, just hairs were to be done. Just then maan too entered the hall calling for rano. He too was in no better condition, his shoes jst hung in his feet with the lace all open "maa, dekho na mere shoes tie nahi ho rahe" saying he came in front of her "Maan, bas do minute geet ki pony kar du" Rano said looking at him "Nahi pehle mere shoes kar do naa..." he said with a pleading face "Oyee nangu pehle humari pony hogi usske baad appke shoes" "Maaa" maan said whinning. Just then Daadima came "Arre baccho abhi tak app tayyar nahi huye?" she asked serprised seeing maneet's condition. "Daadiii dekho na nangu humari pony nahi hone de rahaa" "daadi dekho mere shoes tie nahi ho rahe aur yeh maa ko tie karne nahi de rahi" maan too complained. "Huh!! jao karwa lo shoe tie, hum daadi sey pony banwa lenge" saying she hopped down sofa and ran to daadi with the comb and band in her hands. Rano just shooked her head at Geet's nautanki smiling and making maan sit on sofa she tied his shoe lace while daadi made geet's pony.

Once all ready Geet kept admiring herself in the mirror of Maan's room. She twirled and hopped flaunting her little black skirt with white shirt and that cute tie. It was very much different from the 2 or three frocks she had, something vey different and excieting. "Geet Maan kaha hai app??? school ka time ho gayaa" Rano called for maneet coming in Maan's room where Geet was buzy in herself "Maaa dekhoo hum acche lag rahe hai na" Geet said running to her. Rano smiled affectionately and kissed her head "bohottt acche, ekdum pari jaise. Arre Geet yeh Maan kaha gaye? Daadi app dono ko bula rahi hai neeche" Rano ended with a worried tone "Allee maa wo maan na appni book dhund rahe the, niche daadi ke room mei" "Uff Maan niche hi hai aur hum yaha pura ghar chaan maare unhe dhundne. Abb app jaldi chaliye niche driver uncle wait kar rahe hai app dono ka niche" saying she picked Geet up and headed downstairs.

Daadi kissed both the kids goodbye as the driver stood there to take them along. Rano was a silent spectator, whirlpool of emotions going inside her. She just couldnt believe her baby grew up so quickly that today she was to step out of her protective embrace and enter an entirely new world all alone. Though she would be going with Maan along her but still it was the first time ever that Geet would be away from her. She would surely miss her a lot although just few hours of her dissapearance but that too seemed a huge duration to her. Same for Maan, the little boy conquered a special place in her heart just similar as Geet, now Maneet seemed similar to her, both as her babies. Her trance broke as Maan and Geet called out for her. Rubbing that lone tear off her eyes she went upto them and sat on her knees as Geet ran and clinged to her all lively s always but mainly extremely excieted.

Maan watched from far as Rano instructed Geet about all the do's and dont's while Geet like an obedient kid just nodded her head though they both knew she wasnt actually getting anything of Rano's words. Maan's eyes slowly burned as a painful layer of tears filled up his eyes as he remembered his own mom. His mind played tricks as he could watch himself in Geet's place and his mother at Rano's place. The same way she used to pamper and bid him bye each day as he would leave to school. A sense of emptiness and loneliness filled his heart as he felt himself yet again all alone. His face dipped as he silently wept and sniffed hiding his tears from others... But he was unaware of the person whom he couldnt fool no matter what, who was non other than Rano his MAA. Rano's mind instantly covered with concern as she saw tears cascading down maan's cheeks while he tried hiding them. "Maan bete kya huyaa??? App ro rahe hai?" Rano asked highly scared as she came and cupped his face in her palms "Kyaa huyaa?" she asked softly. Maan's eyes met hers and he broke down finallly in her arms crying out his pain to her "Ma..mmaa ki yaad ayi" he said in broken voice before Rano pulled him to herself consoling him.

Geet got sad looking at Maan so sad and she too came to them "App dono ro kyuu rahe ho?? Ro mat na nahi toh mei bhi ro dungi" she said with a teary pout as Rano laughed at her cuteness "Arre baba koi nahi ro raha bass, sabb appne appne rotlu mooh thik karo abb. School nahi jana kya??" Both maneet nodded sniffing off their tears "Chalo chalo abb jaldi jao warna late ho jayega... aur Maan ajj app ro liye par aggli baar ek aansu bhi bahaya na toh dekh lena appki maa se bura koi ni hoga, Samjhe" Maan chuckled at her fake stern voice "Maan mumma nahi toh kya huya Maa toh hai na appke paas?" she asked tenderly. Maan nodded as Rano kissed him and Geet by turn. Both ran as the car honked quickly kissing Rano on her cheek. Rano waved both babies bye as the car started dissapearing out of their site.

Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 12 years ago

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anyaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

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I am here to inform that I wont be able to update next till atleast 26th of this months.. and the reason is EXAMS. My exams starting from this 15th and me buzy in studies. Cant update till my exams end.

Am really sorry but cant help it.
Hope you all understand and support me 😊

BTW updated PART 10 above for you all now but PMs will be sent tomorrow. Too tired

Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 12 years ago

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anyaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: Susegad
Eagerly waiting, but I feel guilty for saying that.
Nobody is blaming you. Exam times hain. Khoob dil lagake padhna.
IF pe bhatakne ki zaroorat nahi hain. We will all wait.
Busy with exams ka sign chipka de apne thread pe bas, aur khoob mann lagake padh.
As good as you are at writing stories, we all want you to be even better at your studies.
All the best for your exams. I and hoping and praying that you will ace them with flying colors.😃
🤗

Dii plzzz app guilty feel na karo 😊
And yepss, me too will just concentrate on studies now 😃
Thanx for supporting and sorry for delay
Love yaa 🤗