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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: N0306

ha ha.. HP in sneakers.. it was hilarious imagine him with his clothes and sneakers.. hahahaha..

Why did Arnav say "temporary wife".. am I missing something?

Jivvy is something for sure.. The great Arnav singh raizada is gonna have a roller coaster ride..

good one girl..


Arnav and Khushi are still in the contract marriage; Khushi knows what he thinks about her, and had also told him the truth, but he thinks that Khushi's just making up a story and lying to cover her crimes. This issue isn't resolved yet, and there is a gap between Arshi.

The great ASR won't feel that great once he finds out what Akash has invited into the house. :D

Thanks for commenting! It motivates me :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pancakes

nice update

arnav will surely get mad now
first khushi and now azmih


😃 And then NK :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chavvi16

cant believe i almost missed out on this new and wonderful story man
awww our ASR doesnt know that jivy urf azmih is a teenager
and this is gonna come as a right shock to him
this is gonna be fun for sure
please arnie dont do anything silly will ya dude
but who am i kidding that man is famous of doign such things when in anger
no life without wife
so true your words there but when will this man realise it
and we hope its before her tenure is over
but for the time being am looking forward to when he comes to know who this child is that will be real fun
it looks as if khushi has another person she can gel with for the next 2-3 months
she got a partner in crime it seems
ahhh mamaji as dadaji well she is young enough to call him that right
i just loved the story so far
read it all in one go
and am sure it is gonna get more hilarious with time


I got the no life without wife from a hindi song...can't remember which one though :D
Oh yeah, Khushi and Jivvy are very similar, but I've also tried to make Jivvy like Arnav in some aspects... I always felt that the best person is one that is a mixture of Arshi. :D

I always wanted someone to call Mamaji "Dadaji" for two reasons - (1) I love Mamaji...he's sweet and amazing (remember the episode where Arnav's wearing a red shirt and Mamaji makes fun of him? And then the Bali in Delhi episodes? and (2) Mamaji = Dadaji means Mamiji = Dadiji :D

And yes, it will become more funny with NK's entry. I love NK as much as Arnav hates him 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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4: The First Fight

"What the – " Arnav was cut off by Naniji.

"Aare Azmih bitya! Aap itni jaldi kaha chali gayie the?" Nani had just walked into the hall, and stopped when she took in the sight of a panting HP. (Oh Azmih! Where had you gone so early in the morning?) Turning to her grandsons, she looked at both of them and said, "Anjali bitya aap dono ko pooja ke liya bula rahi hai." Akash dragged a visibly angry Arnav to the pooja room. Then, shifting her attention back to the girl, she told her to take a bath and come downstairs.

Azmih came back downstairs, to find all the Raizadas, except one, head towards the deity statue. When Anjaliji saw her, she said lovingly, "Azmih! Why are you standing there? Come here besides me, we all do the pooja together. You can join us too."

Azmih smiled and said, "I don't believe in God and doing poojas."

Everyone looked up at her when she said it. "Laad Governer ki tarah," Arnav heard Khushi whisper under her breath, and rolled his eyes at her remark. He was still not sure who she was, but let it go as a relative that Nani might have invited over. Nani asked, "But why?" She had liked Azmih very much because she had retained a lot of Indian culture and because of her friendly nature and chirpiness.

Azmih shrugged and replied, "There's no evidence of Gods, and I see no reason to waste money on some statue made out of clay. I'd much rather pay my respects to my parents, who have raised me, who have been by my side every time I needed them, and who get happiness by seeing me happy. Unlike Gods, my parents are available whenever I want them to be. I don't have to starve myself to please them. Instead of donating money to temples in the name of Gods, I'd spend it by giving food, shelter, and education to someone breathing, not some object."

Anjali, the advocate of God, said, "You shouldn't say that about Gods! They always help you and are looking out for you. And think, isn't it God who created your parents, who created you? Who made all these things happen in your life?"

Azmih had an instantaneous response. "God didn't create my parents. My grandma's egg and my grandpa's sperm did; the 46 sets of chromosomes did. And God didn't create me. My mom's egg and my dad's sperm did. And everything I have accomplished in life is not because of God. It's because of my hard work, my skills, my sweat, and my parents' support. I don't believe in giving fake credit to a non-existent God." Her reply was a bit strong, and everyone – except Akash and Arnav – was shocked to see the transformation from the jovial girl of yesterday to the atheist today. Arnav decided he liked her. Akash decided he didn't want a debate, and asked Anjali to start the pooja. Both Azmih and Arnav stood away from the temple and watched the others. To say that Arnav was watching others was incorrect, for he had eyes only for his wife who looked so beautiful in a purple and green anarkali. He realized what he had been staring at, got angry at himself, and went to the dining table to get a head start on breakfast. Time should not be wasted – that was one of his principles.

However, he saw that the girl had beaten him to it. She was sitting on the table with a bowl of milk and a box of cereals – Coco Krispy – besides her. She was talking on a Bluetooth, he noticed.

"Bye mummy!" She cut the call and looked up to see a furious face of ASR looking at her.

"That's my chair you are sitting on! And who are you?" he barked.

"Chill maro!" she said, unaffected by ASR, and slid over to the chair on the right. "People call me Azmih." She continued eating her cereals.

"I don't care about your name! What are you doing here? In this house?"

"Akash Singh Raizada invited me here. And right now, I'm eating."

"Why did Akash invite you here?" He was frustrated by her answers.

"I am not Akash. Why are you asking me?" She frowned at him, before resuming her meal.

Arnav would have shouted at her, not that he wasn't already, if Aman hadn't called to inform that Ms. Jivvy and her team did not set up meetings on weekends, so the earliest possible for the week was that afternoon. By the time Arnav had ended his call, the Raizadas were seated on their respective chairs. Arnav looked at Akash, sitting on the far left, smitten by his wife who sat opposite to him.

"Akash!" ASR yelled.

"Yes bhai?" Akash mentally cursed his brother for ruining the moment.

"We have a meeting with Ms. Jivvy and her team today in the afternoon – at 2 P.M. sharp." Arnav delivered the message to his brother before eating his toast and sugarless tea. A few seconds later, both the Raizada brothers looked up at each other, with one question in their mind – Where was Ms. Jivvy?

"Mamaji," Arnav spoke. "Did you meet Ms. Jivvy yesterday? You were at home, right?"

Mamaji nodded, unable to speak between the bites of chapatti he was gobbling down.

"Where is she then?" Akash asked.

"Hello hi bye bye!" Mami intercepted. "Do you need new glasses or something? She's sitting right there and you can't see her?" Mami pointed to the girl sitting on Arnav's right, eating oblivious to her surroundings.

"What the?" Arnav was shocked. Akash, who was drinking tea, opened his mouth unconsciously, and the tea poured out, marking his blue shirt.

"YOU are Ms. Jivvy? But you told me that people call you Azmih?" Arnav asked the girl besides him.

"Yeah, so what if the people call me Azmih? Don't people call you Chote and Laad Governor? Does that mean that you are not ASR? And I was going to tell you my real name, but you said 'I don't care about your name!'" Azmih snapped back.

"But you aren't a legal adult. How can you have a business?" Arnav feared the girl before him, but he would never admit it.

"Is there a rule that says you have to be an adult to have a business? And I follow rules – I refused to stay at a hotel since I couldn't book a room by myself."

"I still don't believe you. Show me your proof of identity!" Arnav asked. He was still suspicious of this being one of Khushi's pranks.

Azmih glared at Arnav before saying, "You have Ms. Jivvy's phone number, right? Then why don't you call the number and check!" Arnav did just that, and Azmih's phone rang – the song Chikne Chamilie played as a ringtone.

Now that Akash was sure that the girl was Ms. Jivvy, he decided to step in before the girl refused to sign the contract due to ill treatment. "We are so sorry, Ms. Jivvy. We were not aware of how you looked, and we apologize sincerely."

Azmih curtly nodded before saying, "Make sure that my age never comes as a question again." After that, she left the kitchen, leaving a flabbergasted family behind.

Edited by ipkknd_gbdfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
res
me first

i love the update
imagine arnav reaction
after he found just make me
laugh 😆
Edited by pancakes - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
It was good but now it is looking like the story is all about ms. Whatever her name is !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
good one dear
now this is how you get the ASRs to believe you
man this girl shall teach the LG a thing or two before going right
wow she is real cute and really good at handling the LG
waise her answer is right about who made her parents and yet not right
hey to each their own opinions right
well i think her stay is gonna be real good
why you ask as i think because of her a lot of changes are gonna come about due to her
and arnie is see we are busy admiring our wife or contract wife anyway but of course snapped out of that quickly
now you know why khushi was asking you what she did last night hai naa

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pancakes

res

me first

i love the update
imagine arnav reaction
after he found just make me
laugh 😆


Thanks!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: babydevil

It was good but now it is looking like the story is all about ms. Whatever her name is !!


Yes, I know that the story seems to be all about her...but this isn't an Arshi romantic story or anything - I just wrote it to get rid of my writer's block so that I could actually update "A New Desire" (which revolves completely around Arshi and how their relation grows and how they get over their past...and Anjali is there but she plays the role of a prostitute).
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chavvi16

good one dear
now this is how you get the ASRs to believe you
man this girl shall teach the LG a thing or two before going right
wow she is real cute and really good at handling the LG
waise her answer is right about who made her parents and yet not right
hey to each their own opinions right
well i think her stay is gonna be real good
why you ask as i think because of her a lot of changes are gonna come about due to her
and arnie is see we are busy admiring our wife or contract wife anyway but of course snapped out of that quickly
now you know why khushi was asking you what she did last night hai naa


I didn't want Jivvy to be another one of "those" characters - I didn't want her to believe in God cause enough women in Arnav's life already do that; I didn't want her to be "my hard work, no one else's, etc." because Arnav already does that...I don't blame him, but he doesn't give credit to his parents for his success. Azmih does.

Azmih will bring a lot of changes in the house...but they will mainly be with Khushi. I don't think that it is right for Azmih to improve Arnav's character - that is Khushi's job, and I will never ever have anyone else take that "right" away from her. So, I'm having Azmih influence Khushi. :D

But that doesn't mean that Azmih won't make ASR cooperate with her (hehehe...ASR's a businessman, he will cooperate with Jivvy for business - he will feel regret if Azmih is sad, but it won't hurt him like it does when Khushi's sad). There will be a big fight between Azmih and ASR coming along! :D

Thanks for taking the time to leave a long comment.

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