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Posted: 11 years ago

20: Resolutions

Arnav had had enough. For the past two weeks, he saw his wife disengage herself from his life, bit by bit. He saw the bas***d, Lucky, openly flirt with his wife, and one day even came across Lucky declaring his past love for Khushi, and how he was heartbroken when she left. He did not stay to hear Khushi's response, because he knew that if Khushi did not refuse the Peanut's love, he, the great ASR, would be heartbroken and unable to live.

A week later, they all stepped back on the bus, heading towards Chandigarh. Khushi and Nani would miss Lucknow, and had a teary good bye. Azmih also had a teary goodbye, since she had been chopping onions in the haveli kitchen. And NK had a teary goodbye cause he was poked in the eye by Azmih, who was angry that NK made her cut onions while he cut the tomatoes.

Arnav left with a new resolution - no matter what happened, he would earn Khushi's trust and love. He knew it would be a long battle, but he was not one to lose.

Khushi left with a new resolution too - she was a stronger woman now, and she would restart her Dabba service and become independent, so that by the time her marriage ends, she would have her own identity and purpose; she was no longer living for her family, who had only taken things from her, but now she was going to live for herself. She would let any obstacles come in her way - even if it was Arnav or Shyam.

NK and Azmih promised to look out for Khushi and help her when she needed it.

In conclusion, a storm was coming. Things were changing, but were it for better or for worse?

Arnav slid on the seat next to his wife's and put his arms around her. His wife continued to stare out the window, unmindful of his presence.

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Posted: 11 years ago
completed meaning ...open ended end is it???

very very interesting end ...i want kushi never to forget what he put her thru

and poojali is a stupid selfish woman most women know when the husband strays
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Posted: 11 years ago
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and you are back
cool this was fun
am glad they did this for khushi
i can see the spark in her eyes again
but of course not after arnie saw his wife being hugged by another man
and boy was he jealous as hell
so right about payal maybe though
awww aki too was jealous isnt that cute to see
waise i love azmih and nk how they manage to make khushi smile is so cute
something which arnie can never do i can see
so they were close friends huh
oh dear arnie is in for some real hard days it seems
well serves him right naa
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ahhh seems arnav babu finally finds out the truth
joy to the world well not really
well all that doesnt make any difference does it
i mean come on man
she can forgive you as she has a large heart
but am sure her heart cant forget they way you brutally crushed it under your feet
and you shouldnt expect her to either
would you have done the same in her place
hell no you wouldnt
and again i agree with azmih and nk
just because anjali has disability that is no excuse for being so anjali
come on she is the older one not arnav
and yet it seems that she is the younger sibling
she seems to be going in the other direction
living in a bubble which is bound to burst sooner or later
and when it does well i will be glad she will meet the real world i hope she does
nk is right too he cant keep choosing his di above his wife every time
agreed she is his di but khushi too is something of his
so what is she planning now
and how to clear her debts
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ahhh so resolutions indeed
and lets see how many of these resolutions will stand the test of time and fate
well am glad that khushi has decided to live for herself
enough of being the sacrificial lamb man
time to take the rein of her life in her own hands
and show the world what KKG can do when she puts her mind to it
so lucky used to love her
am sure khushi must have told him she dont love him
anyway thats beside the matter
azmih and nk are gonna support khushi in what she wants
which is independence from all
and live her life as she wants to
arnav will try to woo his wife well lets see if he succeeds or not
and lets wait for the storm to come into their lives
waise part 1 done will you be starting part 2 too soon
i hope so would love to know what happens next
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb. Actually i was searching for this FF. Thanks for continuing this.
Chapter 20 is not the end, isn't it.
Love Jivvy, NK and Kushi so much😊.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

completed meaning ...open ended end is it???

very very interesting end ...i want kushi never to forget what he put her thru

and poojali is a stupid selfish woman most women know when the husband strays


You can think of it as open ended for now, but I do plan on writing the next part eventually that focuses on the changes in Arshi...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

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ahhh so resolutions indeed
and lets see how many of these resolutions will stand the test of time and fate
well am glad that khushi has decided to live for herself
enough of being the sacrificial lamb man
time to take the rein of her life in her own hands
and show the world what KKG can do when she puts her mind to it
so lucky used to love her
am sure khushi must have told him she dont love him
anyway thats beside the matter
azmih and nk are gonna support khushi in what she wants
which is independence from all
and live her life as she wants to
arnav will try to woo his wife well lets see if he succeeds or not
and lets wait for the storm to come into their lives
waise part 1 done will you be starting part 2 too soon
i hope so would love to know what happens next


Your comments are amazing - a delight to read!

I have the story in mind for part 2, but I haven't started writing anything down yet...

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