Arshi: Story 2 Part I Completed! - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: maverickmartin


You are Jivvy/Azmih, isn't it? Yes...although how you still remember me is still a shocker.

I remember reading all about you somewhere..I think it was some post by you.. I don't remember where... But I was thinking that maybe you were that teenage girl with web designing company. I was pretty impressed then! I do have a web design company (not anymore though...I merged it with another company cause I'm graduating a year early and need immediate money for college) but I'm not the one from Kerala - someone else also commented saying that they think I'm that girl...I'm from U.S. :D

I like the lively,confident girl! I like lively characters too. That's a reason I HATE Anjali in the show more than I hate Shyam. You'll also see my (Jivvy/Azmih's) dislike - albeit toned down - in this story too... :D


Thanks for commenting constantly!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pancakes

loved it'

omg i dont belief this
she is just fifteen
waiting to know what will happen
when arnav found out


Their meeting is weird - shown in Ch 3, but when he realizes that Azmih/Jivvy is the business associate Akash had invited, he'll have a shock (will be shown in Ch 4)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: N0306



You made me super super happy.. I think the same way.. I hate the butterfly type of thinking hoping from one flower to another.. Relationship whether at the end they work out or not I never jump in one without giving it a thorough thinking and myself completely.. I m marred.. So I don't need worry abt that now but you are right if my husband tries to make me jealous that would be end of it..


"Butterfly type of thinking" - that's an interesting way to put it...since butterflies are usually associated with good things :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: N0306

Awesome update.. This reminded me of an article I read few years ago.. A lil girl from Kerala opening her own web-designing company and was termed as the youngest CEO I think.. Love the concept.. When you said a female CEO. You already know how I felt but now I can't wait for Arnav and this lil packet of fire to meet :)


I'm not the girl from Kerala - if you're wondering :D

I loved writing the part where Arnav and Jivvy met as business associates (Ch 4). :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: babydevil

Shit wasn't one Khushi enough that now this jivvy !

Jesus help poor Arnav !

Nice updte dear :)


POOR Arnav? You still feel for Arnav despite how he forcefully married Khushi and didn't trust her after she told the truth?

But yeah, Jivvy + Khushi = Annoyed/Furious/Humiliated/Embarrassed Arnav :D Then just think of what will happen to Arnav when I introduce NK in the story ;-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: poojasidd123

love this jivvy!..arnav sure wil be gettin a big shock..can't wait to see his reaction..n i wanna see some arnav n khushi convo too😊update soon..


Arnav and Khushi will talk soon, but if you are looking for some hot, romantic updates, then you'll be disappointed here. 😉

Thanks for reading and commenting 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
arnav will surely get mad now
first khushi and now azmih
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Posted: 12 years ago
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cant believe i almost missed out on this new and wonderful story man
awww our ASR doesnt know that jivy urf azmih is a teenager
and this is gonna come as a right shock to him
this is gonna be fun for sure
please arnie dont do anything silly will ya dude
but who am i kidding that man is famous of doign such things when in anger
no life without wife
so true your words there but when will this man realise it
and we hope its before her tenure is over
but for the time being am looking forward to when he comes to know who this child is that will be real fun
it looks as if khushi has another person she can gel with for the next 2-3 months
she got a partner in crime it seems
ahhh mamaji as dadaji well she is young enough to call him that right
i just loved the story so far
read it all in one go
and am sure it is gonna get more hilarious with time

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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏
looks like i'm in for a good laugh...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NICE UPDATE..jivvy is very cute..hope she brings a change in arnav n khushi's relationship..can't wait to see arnav's shock..this man is gonna have a hard time dealing with smart ms jivvy😊
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