OS-How can you be so perfect?-Part 2 pg 5

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Hi. this is my first OS on Saraswatichandra and this is based around the precap. If you want me to continue then please comment below and likes will also definitely be appreciated x Thank you NOTE:Please ignore the spelling mistakes as this was written in quite a hurry x


Kumud yanked the door open and entered the room with a lantern in her left hand. She looked around even though everything was not very clear. She was angry and slightly jealous of the fact that everyone was liking him and she was usually the favourite. At the moment she wanted to give Mr Saraswatichandra a good lecture on how he should keep his goodness to himself and leave as soon as possible then...
She smelt a beautiful perfume and closed her eyes to discontinue the thought of liking any of his features and she stepped forward. she could hear soft gentle breathing reaching high notes then low notes and this made her feel even more anxious on seeing who this 'Saraswatichandra' actually was as his breathing was also attractive.
She stepped forward
right...
left...
right..
left...
right
She closed her eyes whilst taking the next step
left...
Slowly her eyes opened to reveal her beautiful eyes and...


There he was


Fast asleep

His beautiful eyes in which she saw pain and the need for love closed tightly and only his motionless face was now visible.
He looked so innocent, so childlike.
His breathing was so perfect and reflected purity.
It felt as if he was in deep thirst for love and he had not got what he had deserved. He did not seem like a coward or scared frightened young man but someone who displayed righteousness and respect.

He was exactly the way she dreamt him...

His facial features made Kumud's mouth open slightly in awe and a tear escaped her eye in the thought of him not being hers.
She worked her way down with her lantern kept at least 2 meters away just in case the Saras didn't wake up.
She saw that he was dressed in a thin blue vest which faintly exposed his perfect six pack. She saw his muscular arms and his strong manly hands tucked way under his left cheek and a slight smile was brought to her face.
How can anyone be so perfect?
She worked her way further down and saw that he was scrunched up due to feeling cold and the blanket falling onto the floor. So childlike...
She clutched the Blanket from the floor and spread it onto him and unwillingly her knees bent towards the ground and she sat down in front of the bedside table. Infront of him.
She stared at his messy hair...
His cute bushy eyebrows...
His beautiful eye lids which hid his gorgeous eyes
His thin delicate nose
His rosy pink lips...
and then she rested her arm and her head onto the bedside table and continued to stare at the man of her dreams until she fell into a deep sleep...


Hours later at 6am (Saras's praying time)...


Saras awoke and he moaned gently.
Slowly he opened his eyes and saw a girl whom he had never met before.
Her face was inches away from his and she was in a deep sleep.
She was beautiful. Magnificently beautiful. How can someone be so beautiful?
Her hair was floating and swaying her hair as the wind blew towards her. He saw that her fore fringe was causing her irritation as the wind blew so he gently move it to the side and stared at her.
Her pink cheeks showed how young she was and her natural nude lips were slightly parted although she was breathing from her nose.
Her eyes were gently closed and it was obvious that she had been crying as the area around her eyes was quite puffy.
Her innocence, the way she made it clear that she would not let him see her face (boy was he happy to see her face) and the way her arm was pointing towards a random angle made Saras smile slightly and made him think as how he could even think of giving such a delicate fragile girl pain?

Surely...this was Kumud...


What did she ever do to him? She was someone who deserved love and admiration not a refusal to her marriage.
He softly got up from bed careful not to awake the sleeping beauty and got out of bed. He stared at her for a couple of minutes whilst standing up.
He picked her up.
One of his hand holding her slim slender perfect waist and one holding her bare back. He had never touched a girl like this before until today.
It was like she had not slept for nights until today.she was in such a deep sleep that she did not even notice him touching her.This thought made him smile and he put her onto her own bed. When he was about to lay her down, He noticed that she had grasped onto his neck and with the other hand, she clung onto his vest. Se looked like a baby...he leaned over her for a couple of minutes and then realised the position they were in and he carefully unclung himself from her arms. He then spread the sheet over her and left only to stop half way and glance at the sleeping beauty and give her a faint smile.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It felt like I am watching the episode from where we left..beautifully written. Please continue😳
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Wow, its really really good and this is just the beginning. You should defiantly continue. I can only hope that something like this will happen in the show as well. Everything flowed together well so good job update soon :D and PM me when u do
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awesome dear beautifully written fab job pls continue
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an ode to Saras' beauty wow
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Wow beautifully written do continue I want to read more of it...It was like you actually picked up where the show left off.
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Omg...beautiful...beautiful! This is the only thing that is keeping me sane! I want to see the next episode sooo badly, then I came across this, and boy do I want more! I could actually see it all happen in my mind if only it was already tomorrow:) lol.

Thanks for sharing!
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Loved how Kumud notices the six pack lol! Nice.
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WOW! Amazing, you must continue
If possible- please do PM me <3
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I really from the bottom of my heart loved this part. It was perfect and magical! Continue soon and Do PM me! :)

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