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Hey ppl m writing an OS on Taarey..that too for the first time..hope ya ol like it!!
The first ray of the morning Sun is a ray of hope for many but, it could be the last for someone else. Life, a spring between birth and death.The latter is definite to conquer life one day or the other. In that spring of life, the flowers that bloom and the leaves that fall off are the only soveniers to carry along.It is those memories which should be treasured! Let's keep the memories that flowered, along with us and those fallen leaves close by our hearts!
The scene is that of a beautiful dusk nearing its close. The evening Sun was about to bid bye to the Serene sky and the blue ocean beneath it.The flock of birds were returning to their nests(to their children) and so were the children to their homes after play(to their parents). The worksmen were returning back to their dwellings.The busy city was gradually becoming quiet.Every one had some place to return or to be more specific someone to go back to! So did Mr Reyansh Singhaniya,He had his wife waiting for him, not in his house but in the hospital bed.She was living her last few days on this beautiful planet! Though she was sure to leave him one day.Some where in his heart his beats kept saying that she will be fine.She will come back to him one day!Reyansh as usual finished his work and took his path to the hospital where she was waiting for him.
Knowing that you, or a loved one, is close to dying can be very difficult for everyone ,especially for him who finds his life in that body which is preparing to embrace death!Reyansh was walking through the foot path, as an ocean of memories gushed through his heart and came out as tiny droplets of water through his eyes.Tear drops started to assemble down his eyelids.He was getting nostalgic,the days he had spent with her..the fun they had and above all the love they shared! He continued walking completely,deeply lost in her memories.
Background music ( Hum Rahe Ya Na Rahe Kal)
Here's the link to the song :http://indian-idol-2005.tripod.com/mp3.htm
Here's the link to the song :http://indian-idol-2005.tripod.com/mp3.htm
He was walking holding onto all the happy moments he had shared along with her
Hum rahe ya na rahe kal(If we stay or not, we shall remember these moments)
Kal yaad aayenge yeh pal(Tomorrow we shall remember this moment)
He remembers his Taani in the wedding dress on their wedding.The saath pheras (rounds) they took around the holy fire.The moment Taani became his and they became one. (a tear drop found its way down Reyansh's eyes)
Pal, yeh hain pyaar ke pal(The moment, this is the moment of love)
He remembers Taani waking him up everyday by sprinkling out water from her wet strands of hair and giving a soft,passionate peck on his forehead!
Chal, aa mere sang chal(Come, come walk with me)
He remembers their trip to Goa. In the sandy beach, accompanied by the sound of waves crashing onto the shore.He asked her to come along with him and play in the waves to which she refused.
Chal, soche kya(Come, what should we think)
He came back to her to the sandy shore and pursued her to come and play with him. She replied with a gentle smile to which he responded by taking her in his strong arms and then into the waters.
Chhoti si hai zindagi(Life is short)
He splashed water onto her and they spent a few hours of fun over there..Thinking of her beautiful face came a smile down his face!
Kal mil jaaye to hogi khushnaseebi(Tomorrow, if we obtain it will be our luck)
The sounds of horns and traffic made him come back to reality..The smile on his face slowly faded.
Hum rahe ya na rahe, yaad aayenge yeh pal(If we stay or not, we shall remember these moments)
He was moving onto the other side,slowly walking through the Zebra cross.Totally lost in a world of his own. He recalled what Taani's doctors said to him a few days back "There was nothing else we could do for her except keep her comfortable" . Rey felt like he wanted more say in what was going to happen next.He felt as if the whole world was shrinking down for him.The world was doing injust to him and more than him towards Taani.
Shaam ka aanchal odhke aayi(Look, the veil of the evening has covered the beautiful night)
He wanted the doctors to be very honest with him about how long his Taani would be with him. They told me she had only a few more days left. He stopped right there.He was no longer walking.His eyes got wet once again.He was standing on the black and white crosses like a statue. He was drawn back to reality when the drivers on the road started to give out loud horns and curse words for standing in the middle of the road.He quickly paced to the other side and thought how far can one be cursed when his own life - his wife is struggling for life in the death bed...
Dekho voh raat suhaani
He saw a flower shop and bought a bunch of Red Roses,which were his wive's favourites.He remembered their first dinner (out) post marriage.He gifted her the same bunch of Red Roses
Aa likh de hum donon milke(Come let us both write)
The smile she gifted him in return was more than enough to sustain his life forever long.After their dinner they got back home.Back to their very own dreamland.
Apni yeh prem kahaani(Our story of love)
It was then that they became one.He cherished those moments.They were like a single soul in two different bodies.That night had made them know eachother much more..much close..It was intense.They finally melted down into a single soul in a single body!
Hum rahe ya na rahe, yaad aayenge yeh pal(If we stay or not, we shall remember these moments)
Aane waali subha jaane Rang kya laaye deewaani(The morning afer, who know what colours it will bring, crazy girl)
He remembers her saying that she was pregnant.He was the most happiest man on Earth then! The symbol of their love was going to join them soon!
Meri chaahat ko rakh lena Jaise koi nishaani(Keep my desires like a rememberance)
He remembered how she shivered on his touch..the moment they plastered themself onto each other and they became one.
Hum rahe ya na rahe, yaad aayenge yeh pal(If we stay or not, we shall remember these moments)
Suddenly, His mind started to divert..an unknown fear started to conquer his heart..the fear of losing his very soul scared him..He felt something was wrong.
He ran past the buildings and finally reached the hospital entrance. Only to see his 5 year old daughter Taaransha ( Taani + Reyansh) running towards him crying..the bunch of Roses he had fell down..he felt as if he had lost the whole game of life..He took his daughter in his arms and rushed to the room were Taani was admitted, only to see her pale figure in front of him which was supported by a lot of machines..He kept Taaransha down and went towards Taani..Her eyes were open..but her mind was sub conscious..she knew her end was close..she wanted to say something..She slowly said in a feeble voice " I LOVE YOU REY" A tear dropped down Rey's eyes.He caressed her hair,placed a peck on her forehead and replied " I LOVE YOU TOO TAANI " She smiled and closed her eyes !
6 months later,
Rey could not stay any longer without her.He started to become weak mentally.He wanted to go along with her. It was true that he was to live for their daughter..but it was a fact that he cannot live any longer without Taani..
Years passed by,
Taaransha got married and finally one day Reyansh also left this world only to go and reside beside his love Taani..Their marriage was fixed in heaven, happened on Earth and again they united at heaven!
I know itz kinda Rubbish..but plzZ do tell me how you ppl felt about it! And I would really appreciate it if you people passed this OS of mine to your close to heart pals on IF!
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